hey i finally wrote a new chapter, and the amount of reviews i get are skyrocketing! I can really wrote about this story because i used to love it, LETS GIVE IT FOR ERIN HUNTER! This is still a shorter chapter but the next one will not be far behind.

RiverKit's POV

RiverKit felt a tremor of excitement run through him as his leader StoneStar called him forwards. He obeyed and stepped up, as StoneStar said the ancient traditional words he sent a silent prayer to his younger brother and sister. They had both been stollen. In the middle of the night. He hoped that they were well and not scared where ever they were. He focussed on StoneStar just as she said the final words,"And now by the powers of StarClan i name you RiverPaw." his clan roared his name with enthusiasm. RiverPaw padded up to his new mentor StreamPelt.

"first we will explore the territory" explained StreamPelt. Great! Replied RiverPaw. At first RiverPaw felt scared but he soon became excited as they neared the border to ThunderClan. "Thats ThunderClan, those rocks across the river belong to us" said StreamPelt. "Can we go over!" I asked. "No, maybe another time" replied StreamPelt. As they padded on RiverPaw tried not to show how weary he was becoming but a yawn escaped him. StreamPelt stopped and meowed,"lets get back to camp, you've done a good job bit your no use like this" RiverPaw was about to protest when another yawn escaped him. When they arrived back at camp he grabbed a small carp and dragged it over into a sunny spot. As RiverPaw started to take a bite another apprentice came up, she had green eyes and short silver fur. "Can i share?" She meowed? "I couldn't get one of the battle moves so my mentor DawnEyes told me i couldn't get anything from the fresh kill pile." "okay" i meowed and neatly cut it in half, "I was never going to finish it all anyways."

I found the she at who turned out to be named ShimmerPaw a very pleasing companion. She had a good sense of humor and was very reassuring that i would do well.

(One moon later)

"OWW" yelled ShimmerPaw yelled! That hurt! "Oops" i said "sorr" i cut of as she leaped on me and i realized she had tried to distract me. "Enough!" Yelled DawnEyes, "RiverPaw be more alert and ShimmerPaw, i am very disappointed i you, you forgot to do the jump slash move i taught you! ShimmerPaw looked down in embarrassment. I touched my tail to her pelt and smiled reassuringly. One of the other apprentices was about to say something when FernShade raced into the clearing in alarm, "ThunderClan is trying to take SunningRocks back!" StreamPelt exclaimed, "GREAT TUNA FISH I KNEW THEY WOULD DO THAT SOMEDAY!" "Well apparently that day is today"responded FernShade. My mind started to comprehend this sudden news, when it struck me! I was about to be in a battle!

Sorry about the big cliff hanger but never fear i will post the next chapter soon. So how did you like this chapter? I still would like your reviews i need ideas for the next chapter for stiff like, what will happen in battle, how long till StarKit, MudKit, and SilverKit become apprentices. I you want to be a part i. The writing for the next chapter send me reviews, Who knows if i like your review i might just give you a shout out. And also check out my other story "Friendship at its Prime" i warn you the first chapters not very good but i promise the second one is better. Anyways by!