Wow, just the first day and I already had an inbox full of reviews and subscribe alerts. Also, thanks to catdemon-ninja's review, I am going to change some things. Also, the reviews and telling me to make the chapters longer, of course. As said, the prolog was just really short because it was late at night. So, anyway, here's the next chapter ^-^
Naruto shoved that memory to the back of his mind. It would be answered later, even though he probably knew the answer already.
Naruto started towards the Hokage's tower. He already has a piece of paper down and was jotting down a mission report, but something stopped him. He sniffed the air questioningly, but then turned his head to see where the scent was emanating from. Then it was obvious. He forgot all about the mission report, and dashed into the ramen stand.
Naruto ordered a beef miso ramen, and was ordering bowl after bowl just as fast as he was eating them. After about seventeen bowls, Naruto finally decided to call it quits. He took out the paper he had recently put away, and started scribbling down the rest of the mission report.
After turning in his mission report, Naruto headed back home to take a shower and get into some new clothes.
She hated it. She hated it so much. You know, maybe her father was right, maybe she was a failure after all. She ran this thought threw her head hundreds of times. Then, she was at a conclusion. She meant nothing, didn't ever mean anything and never will mean anything. So she ran. She ran as fast as she could. She didn't have a bag, no plan, no foresight, she just ran.
She turned corner after corner after corner, trying to make her way to the main gates. As she was turning on particularly sharp corner, she ran into someone. They both stumbled over and she landed on top of him. "Hey, watch where you're going!" Yelled Naruto. "Prepare to get your ass ki- wait, Hinata?"
How was she supposed to explain this? Oh, sorry Naruto, I was just running from the village because I'm a failure and will never amount to anything. But she knew she wasn't going to run. She had just got a little worked up. She sighed. "Um, N-Naruto, c-can I ask you a q-question?" Hinata asked sheepishly.
Naruto got up slowly, and so did Hinata. Naruto started, "Huh? Oh, sure, shoot." "D-Do you think I'm a… failure?"Naruto thought on this for a moment. Did she ask him if she was just a flat out failure, or did she mean something else? He assumed the sooner, and started, "No, Hinata, why would you ever think that you where a failure?" he asked with a glaze on his eyes.
"Um, i-it's nothing." Naruto looked disturbed. "Uh, I-I'll be seeing you Naruto-kun." With that she turned away and headed off. Naruto shrugged it off. Wonder what that was about, he thought. Whatever. Naruto turned and headed home for a good night of sleep. Probably.
well, I guess that's the end of chapter one. Hope you enjoyed. I'm going to try to do daily updates, so check back every day. Remember to review, and constructive criticism is allowed, but no flames. Don't like it, don't read it. Until next time- EpicBrandon. (P.S.) sorry for any shortness.
