THERE I MADE THE CHANGES IN THE GRAMMAR PLEASE REVIEW AND TELL ME IF THEIR IS ANYMORE PROBLEMS
3 days have passed since......she left
I'm currently standing in the bridge were we had our first.......and certainly ...last date. I miss her so much but it was bound to happen , I hope she's happy from were ever she is 'Saber'
I mention her name in my thoughts as I pretend everything is alright. I may never see her again.......forever. as I stare at the distance and murmur at the bridge I imagine what my life would be like if she were here there and then I saw her image in my mind smiling back at me with that beautiful angelic smile. I smiled to myself thinking about her.
"It feels like she's still here... yet I can't touch her even if I reach out......."
"...But....Even if I can't reach her.....She will always remain forever in my heart"
"We were together at the same time, looking up at the same sky"
"I just need to remember that and whatever the distance between us we can still be together"
"..... and... knowing that I can move forward towards the future."
"towards my goal.... "
'what'
'is my goal... exactly'
'surely its to be with.....her right'
'yes'
'my goal is to be with the one I love more than anything.......'
'my goal is to be with.....Saber'
AVALON....(SABERS CASTLE)
Twelve knights were at a semi circle formation that surrounded a throne,they were kneeling at the said object as they greet their king welcome.
"WELCOME BACK MY LIEGE"the twelve knights stated in unisons
"Yes I bid you thanks for welcoming me here as your..."A moment of silence was heard within that moment they saw a glint in here eyes glint of sorrow as she remembered him."king" she finally said the word...that cursed word that robed her.... humanity."My king?".my most loyal knight and a dear friend of mine" What must you ask Bedivere?"I ask putting all my thoughts aside as I listen to what might he say."why so hesitant my king? don't you wish to rule in peace for eternity? all the heroes that was in the throne of heroes has entered Avalon,because of your generosity, They wish for you to govern them to a prosperous future" she stated as I watch the window that portrayed the island paradise, the island of apples.
Avalon means apple in old Celtic folklore, as I stare at the grassy field that has apple trees that is set through the expanse.
"Bedivere.....I only wish is..to be with Shirou.."
"My king the heroes here need you"
"The people here can go by themselves!!....I had enough of this!!....I want to live this life for myself and not for...irrelevant people."
" Bedivere, do you remember what you told me back then..........if I wish strongly enough I could see the continuation to my dream......Bedivere I wished with all my heart yet I am here and not with him........Bedivere my only paradise is to be with Shirou please help me, I need to be with him I promised him that I will return."
"My king may...yes..that would be it then. you are here because it wasn't meant to be; a fairy tale is only a fairy tale nothing more, nothing less"
"NO! please 'sob' help me 'sob' I want to be happy 'sob' don't you want me to be happy then?"
"You are my friend are you not?" "help me find a way to go back to him"
FUYUKI STREES SHIROU
I am heading home now to ask Rin a few questions but the road to my house is quiet deserted if you will. there was nobody there even a sound of birds or cars. as my six sense takes action I sensed danger behind me. as I look at the strange figure, it reach out its hand at me and a glyph has formed in its hand as a magic circle formed around it.
"WHAT ARE YOU!!!" I called the figure as it casts a spell
" I am Leshrac the Malicious prepare to meet thy doom enemy of the scourge!!!!"as the glyph formed a dark orb of raging inferno.
" Taste the sting of death BOY"the glyph shoots with immense speed as it pierces the heart of Shirou.
"AGHH!!!!" no this can't be happening. I promised Saber that I would reunite with her.
"Someone help me please" I wispher as I drown in a pool of my own blood.
the being walks away as it howls an insane laugh biding someone somewhere as my vision fades I can see and hear someone screaming my name.
"SHIROU!!!!!!"the shout in unisons as a red figure approaches me as death took me away from the world.
SOMEWHERE
"General Vaan the scourge has made there move we must go to Avalon and seek the help of the heroes there"
"I believe so, we must hurry before Arthas makes his move"
"SIR!"the 3 beings salute in unisons.
HOSPITAL
"were am I?"
"am I in heaven?"
"mhmhmhmhmhmhm" I heard an angelic giggle
"who are you?" I fully open my slightly open eyes
"ah, don't you remember me Leon" I stared at an angel she had navy blue hair and dark violet eyes she looks like she's only 16 years old she's very beautiful.
"Leon? my name is shirou"
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Ethan signing out
