Chapter 1: The Visitor's options and a bad day.


I woke up and looked to see it was 8:00. Wait, 8:00! I'm fucking late for work!

"MIKI!"

"WHAT?"

Miki was my room-mate. Of course we never get along, but she is better than my past roommates…sort of…

"Why in the hell didn't you wake me up?"

"I just fucking got here bitch!"

I growled in annoyance. Miki worked at the whore house down the street and some of her 'occupants' ended up here. Sometimes, she would end up working for mornings just to make sure she gets paid from her boss; money-wise and pleasure-wise.

"I'm not a bitch you stupid cunt!"

"Yes, you are! You are always bitching about something!"

"I don't always bitch about something you stupid whore!"

I heard a door slam and grinned in triumph. I hopped in the shower and planned to call my boss before I went to work. I looked around for my shampoo and found it in the trash.

"That stupid whore used my fucking shampoo…I wish that fucking whore would hurry up and get aids , then we'll see who is the one bitching about something…"

"I could grant that wish if you want."

I screamed and immediately covered myself with the curtains. In front of me stood a man who looked to be 20 something with black hair and some kind of black clothing. He also had blood red eyes –probably contacts- and a necklace that had an upside down triangle in a circle.

"Who the hell are you and how the fuck did you get in here?"

The stranger smirked and walked closer to me, looking me up and down.

"You would be a wonderful follower. Especially since you have so much anger and bloodlust."

I blinked. Did he just say I would be a wonderful follower? At first I thought he was one of Miki's patients, guess not…

"Um…you didn't answer my fucking question."

He looked at me deadly and I tucked the curtains closer to me.

"You have a very foul mouth…just like him…"

I growled in annoyance. He is just fucking ignoring me! He smirked and snapped his fingers. Nothing happened at first and then I looked around and actually saw what he did. Where did all the bodies…? H-how…? Where in Hell am I?

"Welcome to my realm and, no, it is not Hell."

I looked at the stranger and noticed he was sitting on a golden throne with blood all over him. I couldn't believe what I was seeing. This guy is a fucking murderer! What fucking makes him think I'll worship someone like him!

"Your mother was a very loyal servant of mine. Sadly, she passed away when you were born and I couldn't pay her back for being such a wonderful follower."

I frowned. So this is some god my mother worshiped? I looked at him and noticed he wasn't sitting at his throne anymore. Instead, he was right in front of me. I jumped in surprise then cursed myself mentally for showing weakness.

He smirked and held out his hand to me in a polite manner. "Will you join my religion and worship me for Eternity, just like your mother and possibly, carry out her legacy?"

I blinked. Worship him for Eternity? I hesitated and grabbed my arm and felt clothing on it. I looked down at myself and noticed that I wasn't naked anymore. I had a blood red top that came up halfway with a fish net under it. The skirt was black and was really short but covered what I liked to be covered. I also had some black boots on that came up to my knees. I smirked and looked back at him.

"Can I say good-bye to my friends?"

He chuckled and nodded. I almost grabbed his hand when I suddenly thought of something.

"Actually, I'm not completely sure if I want to join your religion…Can you give me a few days to think about it?"


A few days later:

I sighed and looked at the clock on the dashboard. It was almost 2 O'clock.

"Today must be a good day, don't you think so Kumari?" asked my partner Johnny.

"More like boring if you fucking ask me…"

I'm starting to think I should have joined his religion… A lot of shit has been happening to me for the past few days. Now I get home from work a hell of a lot later than usual. All of my friends are betraying me and my foster family have moved away to a new country. So far, my life is completely fucked up. Until, we hear the radio station start giving us orders.

"Kumari and Johnny. There is a break in just a few blocks from you. Go check it out."

Johnny floored it and I wasn't prepared so, I cut my hand on the dashboard. I winced and glared at the grinning Johnny.

"You did that on fucking purpose. You're such a asshole."

"And you're a pussy."

"I rather be that than a dick."

Johnny frowned and I smirked in victory. By the time we got there, I saw a few other cops surrounding the house.

"What's the situation?" I asked one of them.

"At first it was just a break in. Then, it turned into a hostage situation when one of the victims escaped and explained."

I looked at the house sadly. A hostage situation? Fuck, none of those go down good with me.

"Do you know how many hostages are left?"

"One more and it's just a little boy."

I nodded and pulled out my gun. This was going to be a bit harder than the rest.

"Johnny, I want you to enter the back while I go through the front. I'll go ahead and try to find the suspect and the hostage while you check the rest of the house okay?"

He nodded and I looked at the one who told me about the situation.

"I want you to make sure no one gets out except for the kid and my team, got it?"

He nodded and I could've sworn I saw a smirk on his face. I walked into the building and saw a lot of blood everywhere. Wait, blood? "Why do I have a weird feeling about this…"

"Maybe because I'm your suspect and your partner is my new hostage?"

I froze and glared over my shoulder "Y-You…You fucking did this?"


I'm so evil! Mwahahahaha! Who is the suspect? I wonder… Johnny: Your killing me off so soon? Me: . Did I say I was gonna kill you off? No! Now, go back to being the hostage! Hidan: O.o When the fuck do I get in the story? Me: . When I want to put you in the story. Which will be soon! Fangirl: Don't yell at Hidan! otherfangirls: YEAH! Hidan: O.O ) Face the fucking wrath of my fucking fangirls or fucking put me in the fucking story in the next damn chapter! Me: .-. You'll be in the third or fourth chapter okay! NOW FUCKING CHILL! *calms down* Anyways, please keep reviewing. It helps me a lot when people review. It shows that people read my stories and that makes me very, very, very happy! :) So please, review or IM me. I don't mind what you say as long as it isn't cuss words. I cuss back, trust me, I will cuss back. I will try and upload chapter 2 Soon! I promise!