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This is a OC story not a its gonna be about the "main stars" story
If you don't like it too bad im gonna continue writing it.
This is my story and i can write what i want to.
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Golden Retriever-"my name is Mel, why you asked?"
Bella-"your mom is looking for you, come on"
Mel backed up-"No way my mom abandon me why do you think I was alone all my life" there was a brown bag next to him on the ground.
Bella sniffed the air cause the scent of food came out of the bag.
Bella-"that's human food what are you doing with it?" Mel picked up the bag in his mouth.
Mel-"I need to bring this food to Blue" walking away
Bella-"don't you know your mother is sick!" he stopped
Sparky-"Yeah, she might die if you don't see her for the last time!" Mel turned to look at the both of them.
Mel-"your lying…."
Bella-"no we're not Mel, we helped her when she passed out in the street she's in the shack right near here"
?-"stop lying to him Bitch" Bella looked up to see three dogs older than her.
Bella-"who are you calling a Bitch you asswholes" the dog she yelled at was a Beauceron Mix and the other two were both Mastiff.
Mastiff 1-"Watch your mouth of how you talk to Blue"
Bella looked at Beauceron Mix-*He's Blue?*
Blue-"oh well let it go besides this Wolf is cute" he jumped down in front of her and circled around her. "this Wolf could be my mate" his tail swayed under her neck
Bella-"never in your life besides your too old for me, Mel you need to get back to your mother Now! Mel looked at her still carrying the bag
Blue-"Shut up!" he bite her neck hard blood was pouring out
Bella- "Sparky Run! Check if Lenny is okay"
Sparky-"okay but what about you?..." worried
Bella-"JUST GO!" Sparky ran off in a direction
Mastiff #2-"Should I stop him Boss?"
Blue-"No besides all I need is this wolf dog, your coming with me Wolfy" his fangs still in her neck.
Mel put down the food-"Blue come on it's my fault, lets go"
Blue-"Shut it Mel and help kill her"
Bella-"Mel! Help Me!" she howled Mel just stood there frozen. Then some dog came and tackled Blue making him let go of Bella's neck.
Blue-"who are you?" as blood dripped from his fangs. The dog was a half Akita Inu and half Kishu.
Mel-"Weed?" looking at the dog
Bella-*weed?* she looked at him "uh…thank you"
Weed-"no problem, we heard howling so we came to see who it was"
Bella-"we?" then another dog a English Settler appeared
Weed-"G.B come on we can take them"
G.b-"are you okay? Wolf?" looking at Bella's neck
Bella-"yes I'm okay and my name is Bella not wolf"
Blue-"well Mel fight them!"
Mel-"right…" he stepped forward and charged for Weed
G.b-"No Weed!" Bella jumped forward in front of Weed and bite Mel's neck and he bit hers.
Weed-"Bella!" he yelled "stop both of you!"
Blue-"kill her Mel and you'll be the new Leader" he laughed so did the other two dogs. Mel bit harder into Bell's flesh.
Bella-"please stop Mel don't do this" she cried "I have a feeling this is not you…"
Mel-"…" still biting her
Bella-"please…"
?-"STOP! THIS FIGHTING NOW!"on top of the hill was Lenny. Mel let go of Bella.
Mel-"mom?"
Sparky-"sorry sis I tried to stop her…." He saw blood on her neck and some on Mel's mouth and on Blue's. "you hurt my sister?"
Blue-"so what of it little Punk what are you gonna do?" Sparky eyes turned red and charged toward Blue in a Spin.
Weed-"wow"
G.b-*that's the same attack Weed did* he looked at Weed then Sparky. Sparky charged toward Blue he ran out the way into the street.
Bella-"Sparky!" Mel ran towards Sparky and kicked him to a tree.
Sparky-"w"
Bella-"thank you Mel" as Mel nodded
Blue-"hahaha your dumb brother can't get me hahaha" A car was coming his way which everyone besides him saw.
Weed-"Blue watch out!" Blue turned to see a car coming and it crashed into him. "Blue!" he ran towards him "Blue Wake up" then another car was coming forward. Blue woke up and bit Weed's neck and threw him across the street.
Weed-"No! Blue!" G.B grabbed his tail and pulled him out the way.
Blue-"….Weed and Bella….I wish I could have met someone like you two back then…" as he died. Ned and Bell looked at each other and run.
G.B-"yeah you better run!" Bella ran over to Sparky and nuzzled him.
Sparky-"I'm fine don't worry"
G.b-"but how did you learn to do that attack?"
Sparky-"I don't know but….when I get angry I just attack"
Lenny-"well that was a good attack and thanks everyone for reuniting me with my son." Mel kept staring at Bella, which Lenny noticed. "Bella?"
Bella-"yes?"
Lenny-"can you take care of Mel?" she pushed him forward as she coughed.
Mel-"huh? But mom what about you?"
Lenny-"Mel it's my Last wish…." As she fainted again
Mel-"NO MOM!" he rushed over and licked her face.
Lenny-"be good to Bella…be Strong….and its great to see my son…for the last time…."as she stop talking and breathing.
Mel-"Mom!" he howled as everyone started crying. Bella went over to Mel and licked his face while he nuzzled into her fur. (by the way there both puppies)
Mel-"Bella….my Mom…" he sobbed
Bella-"I know…I know let's….give her a better Burial…"
Mel-"okay…" still crying.
Later….
They help bury his mom near the shack, Mel was still crying while Bella brought flowers in her mouth and put them on top of the grave.
Bella-"at least she'll have something to smell in the afterlife"
Mel-"thank you Bellerina"
Bella-"huh? Bellerina?" she looked confussed at him
Mel-"what you don't like it?'
Bella-"it's not that, my mother use to call me that but Bella is better"
Mel-"okay Bella…" he smiled then they heard barking
Sparky- "hey! Weed and G.B are traveling with us, come on!"
Bella-"ok! Race you Mel!" she ran up the hill
Mel-"coming!" then he looked at his mothers grave *goodbye mom* he caught up with the other dogs as they traveled out of town.
