I am back sorry for the delay I know I said I would have it up a while ago but I went on a surprise vacation to see my grandma, also expect a large delay in the story in the future. I will be gone for almost four months for My Basic Training and A-School for the Navy.
I have already decided on the four girls in the harem, I am not telling but you can guess if you want. The people who will be Sins is still in work but I have a few ideas but I am open to suggestion.
I would also like to thank all of the people who have reviewed and added to their favorites its a nice moral boost.
Big Thanks to Psudocode Samurai for helping me and giving me all kinds of great ideas.
And thanks to sh8ad8ow, Its nice knowing I did a good first attempt and I look forward to your reviews.
"Human speaking"
'Human thought'
"Demon speaking"
'Demon thought'
Like before please review I enjoy hearing your ideas and like chatting, still trying to figure out how to reply to reviews so if I send you a message its most likely a reply to your review.
Lets get this story started.
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Unknown Location
Three years can go by in an instant for some, a slow progression for others. All time is relative, but for the sleeping figure, his dreams filled with plans of destruction and the painful deaths of those that betrayed him, it seemed to fly, though to the outside world it was but a snails pace. Only when this sleeper awakens will time, for him, speed up and his plans be brought to fruition.
This time was now.
Deep within the hidden ruins of the city, it's buildings slowly crumbling to time's unforgiving will, a pair of eyes slowly opened, the orbs shifting through a broad spectrum of color and a myriad of shapes before settling on a set of slitted, deep purple eyes.
Slowly a wide grin formed, unsettling three years of dust and earth, making ivory teeth stand out all the more. Stretching out his arms he shook the dust out of his now long black hair. Naruto, or most likely Envy, turned his head and examined his clothing, his grin growing into an almost disturbing leer, "Very nice, much better than my old body, but not what I need right now." His thoughts turned inward into the darkness of his memories, melding easily with the previous Envy and supplying him with the information he would need to escape this decaying metropolis.
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Konoha
Bottles of sake littered a desk as a blond haired woman's head drooped forward before she yawned. "Damned council…" she muttered to herself as she reached for another bottle. She leaned back slightly as she took a small swig. "I miss him, he may have been annoying but he sure made everything brighter." She shook her head as she reminisced, going back to the day they first met. She chuckled sadly as fingers ghosted over the necklace in her hand, that damned cursed necklace that had taken her brother, her lover, and the closest thing to a son as she had ever had. She missed the blond and would give anything to have him back.
At a small ninja bar a group of Konoha ninja all raised their glasses "To Naruto." Each of them paused almost as if for a moment of silence before they each took a drink, well, all but one. "Not going to drink Kakashi?" a certain chain-smoking ninja asked. "Sorry Asuma not feeling like drinking tonight." he said with an eye smile "Especially not in honor of that thing." he thought to himself. Soon the group was swapping stories about the blond and laughing, they had told these stories a thousand times, to the point that if one would say 'remember when-' others could finish the tale, but it was their way of honoring him, of making sure he was never forgotten. No one noticed a man with glasses and a slight scruff barely enough for a beard walk in smiling and whistling to himself. The bartender gave him an odd look, taking note of the strange military uniform he was wearing, the blue suit emphasizing a rather strong looking build, but nodded when the man showed a head band he pulled from his pocket, the bartender barely noticed which village it was but neither did he care, nor did he notice the slight blood that stained the cloth. The man turned around with a drink in hand looking around much like a tourist. He noticed a few of the Konoha group staring at them and smiled giving them a wave.
This intrigued Anko, well intrigued wouldn't be what Anko was thinking as her thoughts were all revolving around latex, leather, and various toys not meant for children. The man noticed the gleam in her eyes and while he would have loved to participate he would have to take a rain check. As soon as she got close, a sultry smile adorning her lips, he gave a wide beaming grin and shoved a picture in her face catching her off guard "Want to see a picture of my daughter! She just turned three and she's the most perfect little angel!" he nearly screamed, inwardly laughing maniacally at the look on her face as he unfolded a wallet with a flourish, what seemed like a hundred panels of pictures unfolding and kissing the ground. The others were trying hold in their own chuckles as the man suddenly stopped his gushing and pulled a watch from his pocket, "Oh, my, my, I have got to go. Sorry about that." he vanished out the door while Anko was still confused, her mouth agape in shock as she watched his retreating form, it was Iruka who decided to…help, "Anko I think that guy was married and you scared him…" all he got in return was a cold, deadly glare.
Outside the man grinned slightly as he changed shape into a young blond girl, one who looked suspiciously like the picture that had been flaunted in the bar, a girl that no one would pay much attention to. He was glad to see them all and was also glad that only one of them would have to die tonight. "Information can be a powerful thing, with the right knowledge I can destroy Kakashi and break him…mind, body, and soul." he grinned before running off to grab the last minute supplies.
A few hours later
Kakashi sighed slightly as he read his infamous book while quietly sipping on a cup of sake. He had made an excuse about something, what he couldn't remember, and went off to another bar where he could drink without hearing more stories about the demon. He occasionally giggled at something in the story, it's yellowing pages still offering up entertainment even after all these years, his perverted thoughts, however, were interrupted when the sound of a couple of men's drinks slipped from their hands to shatter on the floor. There, standing in the door, was the definition of female sexuality, She even made Anko look ugly by comparison. Flawless skin the color of fresh cream, flowing raven locks that seemed to drink in the light even as they gave a teasing, lustrous, shine. Her lavender eyes seeming to search the room silently before they fell on Kakashi. She smiled perfectly formed and painted lips curling slightly, making Kakashi feel as if his body turned to jelly at that soft, sensual, gesture. She seemed to glide forward in her long black dress, the slit offering teasing glimpses of long, toned flesh, before sliding into the seat next to him. "Hello there, handsome." she purred.
Kakashi suddenly didn't feel like reading his book anymore.
"I see you like Icha Icha." she continued placing a gloved hand on his, Kakashi nodded his head slightly "I like the stories." he said, trying to not sound like as much of a pervert as he really was. She smiled and her foot caressed its way up towards his thigh "I personally like the nasty, dirty, things they do in it, it gives me such great…ideas." the word was punctuated by her foot rubbing along his groin causing him to jump, her smile growing slightly she leaned forward "I love a man who reads it so openly, it just makes me-" she leaned and whispered into his ear during this time Kakashi's face steadily grew redder and redder.
Kakashi felt her perfect form press against him as he tried to open his door, her hand snaking out to help guide it to the lock. As soon as they entered his house the door was slammed shut and the woman pressed him against the wall and, with a tug, had pulled his mask down and kissed him passionately. Kakashi felt a thrill go through his entire body. The kiss continued as the woman's hands slipped up under his shirt her nails digging in and drawing blood from their sharpness. Kakashi felt his muscles tingle and stiffen his eyes widened in panic as the woman pulled back and spit on the floor as if she had a bad taste in her mouth. Kakashi watched in horror as a change started to happen and the once stunningly beautiful woman seemed to bleed away in a shower of sparks, the new form that of a feminine looking young man who leered at him and laughed.
Cold water splashed onto Kakashi's face and he found himself staring at a ceiling still unable to move, "Good to see your up Kakashi." a voice said from the area to his left, the man from before, the one with the glasses who had deflected Anko walked up testing, his bindings. "Now these aren't meant to hold you, no no, these are tourniquets, we wouldn't want you to bleeding out..." he faded off to the side were the sounds of a wheeled table moving filled the air, the thing covered with a sheet before, with a flourish, he pulled it off revealing a nightmarish array of implements. Reaching under the table he produced a small bag of fluid and a hose before moving and connected an IV drip to his arm "A special solution I fixed up just for you." Came the overly cheery voice as he tested the clamps "Nice and tight," he muttered to himself "Comfy?" he asked with a leer, "Your shaking, are you sure your okay? Just say the word and we'll stop…" he waiting for a moment before smiling, patting Kakashi's chest "You are going to like this, adrenalin, so you won't pass out." he said as he injected the contents of the syringe into the drip. He grinned and flipped a few lights and pointed up towards a mirror "Wouldn't want you missing the fun." he said as he adjusted the large mirror so Kakashi had a better view. Taking up a cruelly serrated knife he held it before Kakashi's face and grinned "This is for your dick, but we will get to that much later." he pulled an assuming, but razor sharp, scalpel from his coat pocket, the boisturious mirth from the man vanishing, leaving only cruel hatred as he roughly grabbed Kakashi by the jaw, forcing him to stare at the blade now only millimeters from his eye, "This is for your eyelids if you fucking insist on shutting them." He grinned returned, even wider, but lacking any of that initial joy, twisting his face into something far from human, something that enjoyed the pain of others. "Oh, where are my manners? I mean I know you but you don't know me, do you?" he asked and grinned "I am someone you do know, sensei." The man's form changed one more, the sparking casting disturbing shadows along the wall, there stood a tall figure with blond hair and strange whisker-like marks, "Ring any bells? Now sensei I am going to enjoy making your death as slow, and painful, as possible but I think I need to dress up first." he said before holding a photo up in front of Kakashi's face, "I did a little research into your old teammate, the one that died and gave you your precious eye." Even as he spoke his body changed once more, his voice distorting slightly before it turned to one that haunted his dreams, there Obito stood, grinning insanely at the man who's eyes dilated in horror "I think that this, would be the best for what I have in mind."
The process was slow, just as Envy had promised, first he started with his arms and legs, bamboo shoots sliding under the fingernails before he gave them a slight jiggle. Then removing each finger and toe systematically, joint by joint, making sure that long acupuncture needles had done their job for the joings first, meticulously separating out each little bit of cartilage and ever tendon before removing them. Then came the hands, the forearms, steadily working his way up to the shoulder and doing the same for the legs all the way up to the hips. He actually sang as he cut out Kakashi's Sharigan eye before placing it, almost lovingly, in his mouth and forcing him to swallow it. "Now let's see…ah!" he said snapping his finger before pulling that knife out, " How could I have almost forgotten your dearest friend…"
When Kakashi was just a torso and head Naruto pulled out a bag of blood and strung it up beside the IV, "Now that the opening show is over…' He produced a vicious looking bone saw, 'on to the matinee!" Kakashi silently screamed in agony as his blood pooled on the floor, Envy had systematicly removed the front of his rib cage before poking and prodding each organ, like a curious child, before pulling out a small tack hammer and a series of nails. "Did you know, the brain is a fascinating thing, a single place that can control motor functions, speech, memory, hearing, all of it! And did you know that a little tap or the prod of a knife a person can literally fall to pieces with their own limbs trying to do things that, frankly, aren't possible...under normal circumstances that is…"
It went on for hours, every now and again, when Kakashi was nearing the point of bleeding out or succumbing to shock, Envy would gave him more blood, or another of his little elixirs and kept going. In the end, Envy had simply gotten tired of playing with him and finished it by slowly cut Kakashi's head off, the man's eye holding an unfocused look of madness in the end. He tapped his chin with a bloody finger before smirking and dipping his palm into the fluid that had coated the floor before writing a message for when the body was found "I promised revenge and I never go back on a promise." he laughed as vanished out of the room.
They were going to be in for a surprise when they checked Naruto's old apartment.
Tsunade sat at her desks glaring at the bane of her existence, paper work. She leaned forward and rubbed her temples, it had been days since anyone had even seen Kakashi and she was being pressured to declare him a missing-nin. "I have the council breathing down my neck, Kakashi is missing and Shizune hasn't come back with my sake." she looked skyward and said the worst thing anyone could imagine "What else can go wrong?" as if summoned by those words two ANBU appeared in front of her, "Lady Hokage we have found Kakashi." at this Tsunade seemed to brighten "Really where is the lazy bastard?" they didn't seem to move and stayed silent for a long time "Lady Hokage Kakashi is dead it seems he was captured and tortured to death. Within the village." Tsunade froze as if in shock but recovered quickly "Summon Anko and Ibiki I want a report from them on my desk, NOW." the Anbu nodded before disappearing in a swirl of leaves. Tsunade leaned forward her elbows on the desk as she interlaced her fingers before her a single thought going through her mind "Who could be skilled enough to defeat Kakashi and kill him?"
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The second Anko and Ibiki entered the apartment they almost gagged at the stench of blood, feces and urine that seemed to pool on the floor. Kakashi's limbs were all placed alphabetically on a table not far from the body, the pins and shoots still in the remains of joints, many of the limbs having the skin flayed from them. Anko moved forward and examined the meticulously laid out remains while Ibiki moved towards the trays of knives, blades and more. Anko ran her finger along one of the arms, the blood gathering before tasting it and spitting quickly, a pill soon finding it's way to her mouth, "He was given a paralytic, numbs the body but leaves the pain receptors untouched, whoever did this wanted him to suffer, awake." Ibiki nodded and lifted a spare nail up and taking note of the arrangement in Kakashi's skull "Seems he also hammered these into certain places in the brain, looks like he was targeting pain, and memories..." he stated his eyes narrowing at a frozen Anko, she was staring at the bloody message on the wall "Ibiki what apartment is this?" Ibiki stopped and scratched his chin lightly "3c I think... why do you ask?" he noticed Anko had gone white as a sheet, as if she had seen a ghost, "Anko what's wrong?" she seemed scared, something Ibiki knew was rare, even when she was scared it usually showed in a 'tough girl' persona, opting for anger rather than cowering, "Ibiki, this is the Gaki's apartment." Ibiki had to think before it clicked there was only one person she called Gaki she stopped calling other kids that when he had died "You mean...?" she nodded "This is Naruto Uzumaki's apartment…"
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So what did you guys think? I gave a nice little tribute to Law Abiding Citizen. I am glad to finally get this up.
Like before I hope for reviews and would like to hear from the many people who favorite my story you comments would be appreciated as well.
Also to Psudocode Samurai you are the single best editor and best sound board a guy could ask for you rock.
Until next time Stay Golden and kick ass on a regular basis.
