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Three Days Later
Abhijeet felt a familiar soft touch over his head and his one of the most vital sensory organs caught a well-known hard male perfume smell mixed with sweat. He tried to open his eyes. But the sooth didn't let him to do this. He stayed like before in same posture. Slowly the gentle touch came down to his forehead in order to check his body temperature.
Doctor… bukhar toh aab kam lag raha. Phir Abhijeet aab tak hosh me kiun nehi? A worried voice echoed in room.
Doctor: aap fikar mat kijiye sir. Inhe aab tak toh hosh aa jana chahiye tha. Sare vitals normal hain. Kuch hi minton me hosh aa gayega. Aap thora wait kijiye.
Intezaar hi toh nehi hota.
Abhijeet heard an almost inaudible mumble.
A minute long silence and Abhijeet again felt the magical touch over his hairy scalp. He smiled satisfactory in his mind.
Sorry sir, ek emergency aa gaya. Main abhi aata hoon. Doctor apologized cutting his ringing cell phone and a door opening and closing sound could be heard simultaneously.
Humesha dara dete ho Boss. Sab ke sab ko cases ke piche bhaga ke khud bukhar charha ke ihan padhe the. Aisa bhi koi karta hain? Udhar ACP sir unavailable. Tumhara special senior inspector mood ke samne tike aisa banda main aur sir ke alawa koi hain nehi. Aur hum dono hi nehi the idhar. Yeh Rajesh ko bhi pata li tumne. Hadd hain yaar. Accident hua, kya isme tumhara galati! Lekin nehi, tumhe toh humesha apni manmani karna! Sant Abhijeet kahinka!
Abhijeet lastly opened his eyes slowly hearing the angry murmur. Dayaa! He called feebly from under the oxygen musk.
Boss! Daya grabbed his free hand possessively with worried face. Tumhe kuch andaza bhi hain…. mera kya halat ban gaya kal se?
Abhijeet smiled little and gestured to remove the mask from his face.
Daya hurriedly called Rajesh who informed doctor immediately and within half an hour Abhijeet's through check-up had done declared stable by the medical practitioner.
Daya had sat silently beside his buddy's bed on a stool, while Abhijeet was in half-lied position.
He sensed well Daya's fear and anxiety…. thought to lighten the weather at first. Kab lauta? He asked casually.
Kal sham ko. Aa ke dekha yeh mahan officer humara, teeno ke teeno sathi ko cases me laga diye full fledge me. Ihan hospital baythke bhi dimag chala rahe hain Abhijeet sir. Aur neat result…. Teeno ne hi subha se kal idhar aane ka fursat nehi nikal payen. Doctor saab Forensic ka kaam me dube hain. Iska fayda utha ke Abhijeet babu ne socha kiun na khud ke injured body ke sath thora bahat experiment kar liya jayen! Daya stopped with a grumpy face.
Tumhare aane me aur bhi waqt tha Daya. Tum toh agle hafte aane wale the wapas. Phir kal hi kayse? Abhijeet carefully escaped from taunting.
Daya grumbled. Mujhe sapna aaya…. Mera yaar ko kal dopahar se continuous vomiting ho raha tha. Achanak se headache badh gaya, chakkar bhi aane laga use. Aur phir woh behosh ho gaya. Yeh khush khabri shun ke main wapas chala aaya…. Emergency leave le kar. Aab samjha?
Abhijeet acted to be shocked. Kya! Daya! Tum aise training chor ke kayse aa sakte ho? Yaar iss training ke baad tumhara increment hone wala tha.
Daya narrowed his eyes. Kiun? Increment ke paisa main khane wala tha kya?
Nehi. Wo mera kehne ka matlab tum thora aur bada rakam Mamta Foundation me donate kar sakte the tab. Abhijeet finished plainly and innocently.
Mr. Abhijeeeeet! Daya barged. Apko yaad dila doon, saal ka aat mahine ki mera kamai Mamta Foundation me hi jata hain. Kinuki mujhe kabhi kharcho ke bare me sochne ka zaroorat nehi padha aaj tak. Aur ummid karta hoon aage bhi nehi karna padhega khud ke liye apne hi salary se kharcha.
Mera ek bada bhai hain…. meri puri zindegi uske sath, uske naam. Aur apko phir bhi problem hain… retirement ke baad ke liye main joh savings kar raha hoon, wo thora kam kar deta hoon iss saal se. Aat ke jagah dus mahine ki salary Mamta Foundation me donate karunga. Chalega tab? He asked sternly.
Abhijeet was looking at his best friend with open mouth. Shut abruptly. Ho gaya? He asked on Daya's face.
Daya pointed his forefinger to his buddy with same ukhra hua mood. Emotional banane ka bekar ki koshish mat karo. Agar tumhe kuch ho jayen main kya extra salary ginte rahun umar bhar! Kabhi sochte ho tumhare sir pe chot laga pata chalte mujhe kitna tension hone lagta hain?
He paused a bit. Kiun, tumhe achha nehi lag raha mere aane se? Kya… chahte ho kya tum? Tumhare tension me mera heart fail ho jayen?
Abhijeet tried to grip his buddy's hand… but Daya jerked in irritation. Makhhan mat lagao Abhijeet.
Abhijeet tried to take a good view of his friend… turned his head a little causing a low Ahh came out from his mouth.
Without uttered anything Daya adjusted his neck carefully on pillow. Kya hain? He showed mock anger standing beside his bed.
Abhijeet was silently looking at his half soul. Mujhe pata tha tum yeh baat shunte hi bhag ke aise chale aaoge. Pichle saal bhi toh mission ke liye tum yeh training attained nehi kar payen. Iss liye bas… aur kuch hi din toh bacha tha khatam hone me training period. He lowered his head. Yaar teen saal se aise hi kisi na kisi wajah se tumhara isme hissa lena ruka hain.
Daya wrapped Abhijeet in a friendly side hug. Boss training pahele ki tum? Haan? Paisa bhi zaroori hain, lekin tumse jada important hain thore hi? Wo toh achha hua Rajesh ko ACP sir unke na milne par mujhse contact karne ka order deke gaye. Yaar mere bare me toh sochte? Tum doctor saab ki baat tak nehi mane!
He tightened his grip over Abhijeet's shoulder. Kisi ko pata chalne na dene se kya tum zaldi thik ho jaoge yaar? Kaam toh hota rahega. Lekin apno ka sath bhi toh zaroori hain? Aur training utna bhi compulsory hain nehi yeh tum achhe se jante ho.
Abhijeet closed his eyes only to live the precious moment of his life.
Daya separated and adjusted him carefully. Tum dil hi dil soche toh the kash main hota iss waqt tumhare pass…. Dekho main aa gaya. Yaar jab tumhara family tumse dur hain…. iska matlab yeh thore hi hain, uska koi parwa nehi tumhara? Yah wo tumhare liye nehi soch raha hain? Aur tumhe bhi aise waqt pe khud ka dhyan rakhna chahiye tha.
Abhijeet smiled sweetly on his concern.
Daya followed his gaze. Yaar ho jata hain kabhi kabhi hadsa. Lekin main apna adha hissa joh Mumbai me chor ke gaya… uska khayal mujhe nehi hoga? Itna dard seh rahe ho ek hafte se… pura din akele akele iss char diwari me…. TV dekhna allowed nehi, phone pe baat karna allowed nehi…. aab tumhe kahan social site yah games me interest hain ke time pass karoge?
Aur jada mobile use bhi thik hain nehi iss halat me tumhare liye. Ankhon me dard ho raha hain. Freddie bhi isi waqt bimar padh gaya. Main nehi yeh sab sochunga toh aur kaun samjhega Senior Inspector Abhijeet, apko? Main kayse tumhe akela chor sakta Boss?
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After Five Weeks
Abhijeet opened his eyes and noticed a heavy gold bracelet dangling beside his nose. He looked up and found Daya busy with his phone resting whole of his body weight on his right elbow kept beside Abhijeet's pillow. A shiny glowing shade was covered his face which attracted Abhijeet.
Daya sensed his buddy's movement and changed his gaze. Aare Boss, uth gaye? Good morning. He smiled broad keeping aside Abhijeet's mobile.
Abhijeet tried to lie straight on his back. Kya baat hain, mera bhai aaj bada khush lag raha hain! Mere join ki khushi hain kya? He flashed a fresh smile.
Daya got up from his chair and adjusted the pillow under Abhijeet's broken leg.
Uthoge abhi? He asked neglecting earlier question of his brother.
Abhijeet lifted his upper body and carefully touched his right knee. Hmm…
Ruko, main crutch lake deta. Daya went to bring the temporary helper of Abhijeet.
Abhijeet adjusted himself at the edge of bed and with help of Daya somehow he stood up.
Daya cleared his way to washroom kept aside the rocking chair and beanbag.
Abhijeet glared him for once and started hopping towards his destination.
He stopped infront of washroom. De bhi aab? Kab tak aise uchalte uchlate khara rahun? Abhijeet showed anger.
Aare haan. Daya rushed to his wardrobe patting his forehead and picked a fresh set of formal and bathing towel and arranged those inside.
Haan Boss, aab tum jao. He dusted his hands relaxly while heading outside.
Abhijeet nodded his head in disappointment. Sharam naam ki koi chiz nehi nah tujhme?
Daya made a so much bechara face.
Abhijeet strictly: aab bachho jaysa muh kiun bana raha, haan? Main idhar ek payer se uchal uchal kar chal-phir raha hoon. Kahan tu mujhe madat karega…. Nehi. Sahab ne maza dekhna hain.
Daya lowered his head in order to hide his naughty grin.
Abey tu haas raha hain! Abhijeet sounded shocked. Sachhi me tu besharam hain ek number ka. Bada bhai itna mushibat me…. madat mang raha hoon tujhse… phir bhi nehi!
He stopped and observed Daya's reactions. Aab wrap bhi kar denge aap Daya prabhu jee! Mujhe nahana hain. Kuch madat toh nehi karte hain… kam az kam yeh plaster ke upar kuch warp hi kar dijiye, ta ki gila na ho jayen.
Kya? His voice turned strict seeing no movement in Daya. Kya wo bhi main hi kar loon? Late hoga toh main sidha sir se kehne wala, tu kuch help nehi ki mujhe. Sara kaam khud kar ke aaya.
Daya flashed his most innocent toothy smile. Nehi Boss, main hoon na? Tum bhala kayse mera complain kar sakte ho sir se? He started covering Abhijeet's right leg's plaster carefully.
Abhijeet softly moved his left wrist in upside down manner…. Dard toh bilkul nehi. Ise chor… crape bandage hain mamula sa… Nahake aaun, phir ise change kar dena.
Daya supported his buddy nodding positive. Wo tum na bahat pyara lag rahe the. He looked up.
Abhijeet astonished. Aain!
Daya cheerfully: haan Boss, tum na aise ek payer se uchalte hue bada pyara lagte ho. Bachpan me hum kayse game khela karte the…. ek payer se… aise box box draw kar ke yunn yunn…. zamin pe… bilkul waysa. He did some hopping movement trying to make understand his buddy about that childhood game.
Abhijeet's mouth opened in a big o shape in shock. He jerked his head and moved inside. Tujhe main baad me dekhta hoon. Plaster utarne de ek baar sirf tu. He stopped at doorstep.
Ahan! Boss aisa sochna bhi mat. Main bahat pahaucha hua admi hoon! Daya was in his typical naughty carefree avatar. ACP Pradyuman se shikayat laga sakta hoon main. Haan… mujhse sambhalke rehna. He winked at his buddy changing his voice into weird one.
O Pahauchi Baba… aap zara sambhalke rehna. Ek ek shaytani ka badla gin gin ke lunga kuch hi dino me. Kaun kitna pyara lagta hain, tab samajh aa jayega apko. Abhijeet grumbled and closed the door with a bang.
Boss main bahar hi hoon. Koi bhi zaroorat padhe, ek awaz lagana bas. Tumhare liye andar stool rakh diya main. Jada heropanti na karo pani me. Phisal jaoge…. Haan zaldi karna lekin. Aaj tum rejoin kar rahe ho. Bureau jana hain… Bureauuuu. Daya was shouting intentionally in reply from outside.
Abhijeet cut him in same decibel. Pichle do hafton se yeh heropanti na karne ka gyan main shun raha hoon. Aur meri yaaddast itna bhi kharab nehi ke abhi abhi koi baat shunke bhul jaunga! Pichle unnish saal ki har ek baat mere hard disk pe barabar store hain. So tension not my dear.
And a tap opening sound came.
Daya smiled affectionately. Isi unnish saal ka bhi toh asal me meri bhi zindegi hain Boss. Warna wo pahele ki yaaden… he sighed and started to clean Abhijeet's room with a smiley face.
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