a/n still working on the story just might take a while since i usualy have a hard time turning thoughts into word
anyway lets get into this story if u got any advice please let me know!
rewritten
it was a dark and stormy night, Ghost was lost in the middle of it he had been searching for somewhere to sleep for a while the only dens he could find so far had either collapsed or had a bear inside, after searching for so long he found one and walked inside and sensed something in the darkness
Ghost - hello anyone there?
unknown- Who are you, and what do you want?
Ghost - my name is Ghost and i need somewhere to sleep, iv been searching for over an hour
unknown - well Ghost my name is Liz and i guess i'll let you stay...if you can hunt some food for me in the morning as i cant hunt.
Ghost - deal, so Liz can you tell me about yourself
Liz - well when i was born i was already a lot smaller than other foxes,parents were abusive and i was bullied since i am unable to grow to full-size.
Ghost - hey Liz how about i train you on how to hunt and fight, so you can go back and make them all jealous
Liz - really? you would do something like that for someone you just met?
Ghost - yeah everyone back at my pack is caring for everyone
Liz - if you are in a pack what are you doing out here?
Ghost - sometimes i like to come out here on my own and relax... and some humans tried to catch me but i escaped out here
Liz - why were they trying to catch you?
Ghost - i have some ability's that they want to try and get out of me
Liz - what are your ability's?
Ghost - we can talk more about this in the morning, im really tired
Liz - ok, night
Ghost - night
till next tine, see ya
