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'WAIT! WHAT? HOW!?'

my mind is screaming with the recent action, the beautiful girl, kairi her name is, asked me how was I!? what's stranger was her action after our introductions, she grabbed her things...AND SAT NEXT TO ME!? she gave a smile, which I weakly return; her friends stood up, probably to talk some sense into her as 'newbore' walked in and told us to sit, which they reluctantly did shooting me glares of hatred

as I heard from the sophomore's, 'newbore(that's what gonna all the time)' was just talking about the rules of the classroom, and half of the class has died of boredom; he doesn't notice because of his 'voice stroking'. kairi became one of the victims, while her we're still looking at me with intents to murder... I feel awkward

the bell rings to announce us to leave, for me it's to run like hell. before I could though, kairi try's conversation again as her friends come to take her away "that was fun, right?" oh I'm prepared there "as fun as watching that guy stroke his ego for an hour?" she and a few others around us laughed at my joke, her guy friend tries his best to suppress laughter while her girl friend was rolling on the ground, pelting out laughs

"hey can I see your schedule?" she asks after stopping, I complied" whoa! we have 4 out of 7 classes together!" her friends, named riku and selphie, gave their immediate attention " hey, we do... even lunch, too?" what a coincidence " well bye..." I said as I walked away, and her friend grab her under the armpits to take away

no time to be considering them, got to head to class talking to kairi took 2 minutes of my time to get there I walk and sat down, and began to think things over as my paranoia kicked in 'what does she want with me? why does she seem interested in me? I don't know' were a few things I thought over; I kept thinking for a while, cause next thing I notice was receiving a slap to the head, foe effect *SLAP!*" owww! what the hell!?" I look to see a girl around my age with blue hair

"as class rep, I discourage all students who dare sleep in class while teacher is talking!" she's the class rep? well she pack's a punch..Err...slap "who are you?" I ask since I must have miss attendance "aqua Holland, Ms. Holland's sister." that explains some stuff, sisters seem to give each other privilege's: class rep and to slap me at her leisure.

she takes a seat by me" WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE!?" "there are no other seats, so deal with it." I always hated math...I have a new reason to hate it

I leave to enter Mr. leonheart's classroom and it went really well for rules: just call him Leon, do that and it's happy sailings. at the end of class he gave us an assignment: your hidden talents to be turn in on next Friday; I feel like Leon's trolling me...

we leave for lunch, wait kairi has lunch here...I hope she doesn't notice me...


who is he kidding,she will

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