A/N: What do you think. I know I love it and I only just started it. I think I will start on the next chapter now. I want 5 positive reviews if you guys want the next chapter to go up. This is not blackmail but my inner Noah coming out. Okay I love you guys and I can't wait to read your reviews. BYE!
A/N: Here is the next chapter guys. I decided to be nice and just update again. I got a review that I really liked.
xxStrangleMexx: I like the OC. Thanatos sons are not seen often in fan fiction. It's even rarer for them to be a main character. I like it.
And to you sir I say that I agree. Thats why I made Noah a son of Thanatos and not a son of Hades. I love Hades but I feel that I could expand more on unique powers for Noah and also weapons and armor. It is also a little over done with original characters in the big three. I am going to make minor god OC's in this story quite often since I think that they are not brought up often. Also I am making Michael from the first chapter a son of Heracles because I hate that guy and I feel that I will enjoy a son of Heracles being the antagonist.
Anyway.. on to the story!
RANKS:
BLUE (PERCY): GENERAL OF CHAOS
SHADOW (NOAH): BLUE'S SECOND IN COMMAND
NIGHTSHADE (ZOE): BLUE'S SECOND IN COMMAND
MOONLIGHT (CALYPSO): LEAD HEALER
HEARTH (LUCAS): ADOPTED SON OF HESTIA AND SPY COMMANDER.
ONLY PEOPLE IN THIS CHAPTER OTHER THAN NUMERO UNO: CHAOS
NOAH'S POV: (THIS WILL BE THE MAIN POV THROUGH THE WHOLE OF THE STORY. I WILL HAVE PERCY TALK AND HE WILL HAVE HIS MOMENTS IN THE LIGHT BUT I FEEL THAT IT WILL BE WRITTEN BETTER WITH THIS POV THROUGHOUT THE STORY.)
Because I have a crush on the eternal man hater… Zoe Nightshade.
I didn't mean for it to happen but it just did. After being best friends for three millennia your feelings for them grow. The only kink in our relationship is that she is still a hunter at heart and so this relationship can never be. I will just be stuck admiring her beautiful onyx eyes and her luscious black hair. I hate my brain!
ZOE'S POV:
"Hey death breath! Chaos needs us!" When Chaos asked us where Shadow was I volunteered to go find him. I only did it because he is my best friend though! Not because of his not overly tan but just tan enough skin or gorgeous chocolate brown eyes that showed his every emotion or his wavy brown hair that smelled like the soil after rain. "No Zoe you're not supposed to think these things about a mere boy"My brain told me but I just replied that I'm not a hunter anymore. That was 9000 years ago and I can find happiness if I want.
I turned back to Shadow and saw him walking towards the gates of the park we were in. Chaos's city takes the form of whatever city he wants except cleaner and more efficient. Usually it is in the form of Manhattan though because Chaos likes for this place to remind his adopted son of home. Blue doesn't talk much but we all know that he is a hero. Perhaps he is greater than my friend Percy Jackson but he died millennia ago so we will never know. As we made our way down the street to the empire state building members of Chaos's army would bow to us. We always tell them that the only one they have to bow to is Chaos but they take respect very seriously and they have a high amount of respect for the members of the elite team.
Once we arrived in the Empire State Building we walked up to the portal and put our hands on the sensor for access to Chaos's palace. Once we stepped through the portal we experienced a sort of flashing and arrived at the entrance to Chaos's palace. We made our way through the almost empty halls to the entrance of the throne room. As we walked in we heard someones announce "It took you long enough!".
BLUE/PERCY'S POV:
"It took you long enough!" announced Lady Chaos.
I don't know what this meeting was for but I know it wasn't good when I noticed Chaos giving me "discreet" looks while we waited for Zoe and Noah. I just waited patiently for her to start telling us the mission she has assigned us. She looked sadly at me and Noah before she told us "Camp Halfblood is in trouble. Gaia has sided with Tartarus and Erebus to eliminate the gods. They will need your help Blue, and yours Shadow. You shall take the elites along with Tinker and Dove. I'm sorry boys."
"But Mother…" I started but she just gave me a glare that said this was not up for discussion. I just sighed and told the rest of the elites to go pack. I turned to Noah and gave him a look that said we will need to meet later before I opened a portal to my room and vanished. I walked over to the dummy in the corner of the room with a picture of Michael taped to the front and pulled out my trusty sword Μαύρος Θάνατος or Black Death. (go to google images and type in Dragonbane Sword for an image) I started to cut the dummy to shreds. In several swift movements I chopped off its arms and head. I let out a scream and used my powers from Chaos to open up a small black hole in the middle of the dummy until it collapsed unto itself. I fell to my knees and sobbed, the motion of my shoulders shaking gave you the only indication of my cries. I never wanted to go back there… go back to HER!
CHAOS'S POV:
As I heard my son's scream of rage I opened a portal to his door and stood outside knowing that they would be here soon. With my godly hearing I could hear him sobbing and I knew that if anyone went in now not only would they know Blue's true name, but they would also see how broken their leader was. As I felt Shadow appear in the room and Zoe appear in front of me I knew they heard his scream. I turned to Zoe and said "Let Shadow care for him. There is nothing you can do now Zoe." she just looked at me helplessly before walking away. As I opened another portal back to the throne room I could hear the end of the two boys discussion and i sounded like this, "Perce, I know you don't want to see Ann… HER. But if you don't save them…"
"Who will?"
1 HOUR LATER: NOAH'S POV:
"Lord Shadow" said the AI on the ship "We are arriving at the place you call "Camp Halfblood" at the landmark known as the big house." "thank you JARVIS (I just had to, ya know) you can shut down for now but in 15 minutes return to Lady Chaos." I said to empty space before there was a loud hiss and the bay doors opened to allow us to exit the ship before it flew off again. Camp Halfblood looked the same as usual with the old cabins except the Big House was a nice forest green. No one would know who any of us are as we were all wearing a cloak of our favorite color with Percy in a sea green cloak, Zoe in a silver cloak, Lucas in a mousy brown cloak, Dove in a pink cloak, Tinker in a red orange cloak, and myself in a black cloak. Chiron walked up to us looking the same as ever except for his beard which he has grown out quite a lot. He eyed us all carefully before asking the most important question of the century! (note the sarcasm, I tend to use it a lot) "Who are you?"
Percy stepped forward and said simply that we are a part of Lady Chaos's council and that we were going to go to our cabin now. Chiron gave us a weird look before stating "Lady Chaos? But she is just a myth who faded long ago." Percy took a step away before saying "Goodbye Chiron." We walked to a spot in front of Poseidon's and Zeus's cabins before placing a small tent on the ground and saying a quick phrase in Ancient Greek and it grew into a medium size tent on the outside, but on the inside it was a two story cabin with baby blue walls and white furniture.
He turned to us and gave us each a key to a room, the only ones sharing a room was Dove and Tinker since they are the only ones married. He then turned around and shut the door to his room before locking it.
I can already tell that we are all just going to love it here.
A/N: I didn't necessarily love the ending but it will have to do. Hopefully I will have a new chapter up tomorrow. Again guys I need a pairing. I'm thinking of Pertemis or Perlia but for all those that want Percabeth I'm sorry, I know there ment to be but she broke his heart into 3 billion pieces and I don't know if she will even live past chapter 10. Okay then I need names for weapons for Zoe and Shadow and a pairing for Percy. R&R guys and I love poptarts!
