Chapter 2

THE NEXT DAY PRETTYSILVERFLOWERKIT ATE PREY F 4 THE 1ST TIME! (And she was also stuck on caps lock!) She liked it! (Wait, wut! She was just born yesterday! Literally)

And the day after, Tigerstar attacked!

He stood on a cloud and ROARED! He threw down lightning and went mwahahahahahaha. (I'm so scared!) Everyone screamed! Tigerstar had made himself look big and scary with FANGS! AAAAAH! (Aaaaah to that? :P)

Prettysilverkit came out of the den and said 'Go away meanie! It is very mean to call you mean, and I am not mean, and I am sorry I called you mean, and that was mean, but you are mean.' (Quite literally the best quote in the entire story so far.)

'u r pretty!' (No, she's not.) said Tigerstar. 'Do you want to be my mate?'

'I am a kit' (Uh huh, you can tell!) said Prettysilverkit. 'Go away! You don't scare me!' (Yeah right)

'Whatever you want my love.' And he went away. (That was easy.)

'!' Everyone shouted. (!)

They threw a big party for her and ate chocolate. (And they all got poisoned!) That night prettysilverkit went to bed happy! Maybe she was powerful! (And definitely she wasn't!)

The next day ShadowClan ran in!

ANGRY! (Oh no!)

'Evilleopardkit stole our prey shouted (Shouted WHO? This is one of the many flaws of this story! Also: how did they know Evilleopardkit's name? He was born yesterday! And how did Evilleopardkit steal prey? He's a kit and he can't go out of the camp!)

(I could rant for an hour on this!)