This is a short chapter, but here it is.
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Becky was in her room, but something wasn't right about it. She couldn't put her finger on it, but something just wasn't right. With every breath she took, her lungs were filled with that sweet smell. She breathed deeply for a few moments, but began to choke on it. It was becoming bitter, almost toxic. She couldn't breathe. She looked up and saw something standing, watching her. She tried to cry out to it for help, but her throat had tightened up. It's pale eyes just watched her, indifferent. From somewhere, she heard a man's voice calling her.
"Can you hear me? You need to wake up now...wake up..."
She felt a sharp pain in her chest...
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...and it woke her up. She sat bolt upright, gasping for air.
She looked around at her surroundings. She was in a huge, bizarre looking room. Once again, the air seemed to be made of that sweet smell. Her nightmare still fresh in her mind, she began to panic. A tall man with thick brown hair and brown eyes was standing over her. He was the same man who had been in her mind.
"No, hold on! It's okay! It's okay!" (she was starting to cry out) "shh shh shh, it's okay! You're alright."
She began to relax.
"I'm not gonna hurt you."
She looked at his eyes and was momentarily struck by how old they looked.
"If you please sir, w-where am I?" she asked.
"You're inside the TARDIS." said a blonde woman who was walking over. She sat down and took Becky's hand."I'm Rose."
"And I'm the Doctor," the man said. "No 'sirs', just Doctor."
She nodded. "I'm Becky."
The Doctor smiled. "Hello Becky." he said cheerfully.
She looked at him, slightly startled, and realized she'd never had somebody use her name when they weren't yelling.
"Please, s-" she began, but was stopped by a warning look from the Doctor. She started again.
"Doctor, I still don't know where I am."
"You're safe, that's what's important."
She had so many questions, but the one she wanted to know the most was, "Wot's that smell?"
The Doctor looked at her, slightly startled. "You can smell that?"
She nodded nervously. Rose sniffed the air quizzically. "I don't smell anything."
"Becky," the Doctor started, turning Becky's attention back to him. "The paper I held up for Miss Minchin, what did it say?"
"Noffing, it was blank." she answered hesitantly.
The Doctor stared at her briefly, then suddenly pulled a odd looking stick-like thing out of his coat. He pushed a button on it and light came out of it. He held it in front of her face, and she heard a strange buzzing sound. She got the bizarre feeling that he was searching her head for something.
After a moment, he stopped. He looked at her again for a moment, then started grinning.
"Wot?" she asked nervously.
He just kept grinning. Then, he finally pulled her into a bear hug.
"Oooh, Becky! I knew there was something special about you, I just knew it!"
Sorry for the kind of cruddy ending, but oh well. Comments? Thoughts? Requests? Think it sucks? Tell me in reviews!
