Hey everyone! I'm back! And with an idea! I wanted to post this because I have completely changed the second chapter. But, I don't think edits get sent out in alerts. So, everyone go back to the last chapter and read it anew. It is now the start of a story rather than the short funny extra I had originally had it be. With that said, I have a few more things to say:
First to TheMaskedShuppeteer, and to missd1athlete; thank-you for being the first two reviews! Because you both mentioned you wanted more, I actually started to think about it. I know I responded to the reviews already by mail, but, I had to say it again here. And, thank-you for agreeing to help me. Same goes to anyone reading this, you have an idea, even if it's just a little event or something, let me know! I could use all the help I can get!
And, to heyheyheyhey, yes, they were posted the same day.
There is one more thanks I have to put, and that is to Jen-NCIS-Lover. I had an idea as to what I was going to do, similar to what I'm going to do now, but still significantly different. I had most of the new chapter written when you posted your comment. One part in particular is what really made me stop: "I really want to see what to see happens between Raven and the other titans - as well as Raven and Red X." I have to admit, it through me into a bit of a crises. I didn't know what to do, continue with what I had in mind, or start anew? I had been having a problem sorting out certain issues with the first idea, but then it hit me. Combining what you wanted to see with my original idea, I personally think, will make a better story. I don't want to spoil anything, so I will keep it that vague.
Alright, with all the thanks said, I have to tell you all one more thing. I've never written romance before. That, combine with the fact that I am pretty much making this all up as I go along, it's going to be slow going for this story. But, I think that this is a challenge I would like to give a shot to. Please help me by letting me know what you think. I will not take offense to anything negative said, I'm an artist, too after all, I've learned to deal with criticism and use it to make things better. So, let me know what parts you liked and what parts you didn't.
Thank-you all for everything!
