Ok so heres part 3 hope you like it ant suggestions all welcome pls review xx

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3. Tour

It stood at the reception desk waiting for the strange looking woman, with red eyes, to come back with my room key. She seemed curious about me asked me loads of questions.

"Are you travailing alone?" she said almost with a hidden agenda.

"Yes, I have been for a while now" I said trying to smile

"I think you'll like this room it's got a big window with a nice view"

"Thank you" I started to turn but she touched my arm

"There's this nice tour which goes underneath the city into the old castle," she removed her hand, she could see that I was scared about its coldness, it was like Carlisle's was, "it's worth a look" she handed me a leaflet.

"Thanks I will" I turned and headed for my room still looking at the leaflet, there was a tour in the next hour, I smiled and hurried up to the room to get my things ready for the tour.

The room was only small but it did had a big window which I was excited to see the view of the city at night from, I put my old bag down on the bed and took out the essentials my purse and wrinkle covered map, I laughed when I thought about the nice man who showed me around the city and directed me to the hotel, then i walked quickly back down the creaky stairs to head for the tour starting point.

It seemed like I almost skipped to throught the streets, I was happy that the people were being so nice and welcoming, maybe I should stay here for a while, I'm sure I would be able to get a job somewhere.

More and more people turned up at the meeting point they all seemed to be tourists with maps and leaflets same as me. Then the tour guide spoke to us, she seemed to very happy. They all had red eyes like the receptionist at the hotel also really pale "This is one of the biggest groups we had is ages she looked towards her partner and giggled. they looked more like partners in crime then business partners. There was something about that I didn't like, which made me think about not joining them in to the underground but there was guides all around us so I continues on walking.

We first went down into the underground it was really dark but it wasn't a wide pathway so no one could get lost. The same stone walls stayed with us for what seemed like miles but the path started to level out.

I could see the exit because it was the only light in this dark tunnel I walked out in to a grand hallway which looked out of place for being so deep underground. There in the corner was a desk with a man stood behind it but he wasn't like the others wasn't pale and his eyes weren't red.

"Heidi, welcome back" the tour guide nodded and spoke to the man.

"Is everything ready for our guests" she said with a smile.

"Yes everyone's ready" I noticed the two people seemed to be talking about two different things. What's ready? Who's ready? I wondered I new that this place wasn't good I should leave now but it was to late and the two huge doors opened and were all being herded in to the room, that's what it seemed like that we were oblivious cattle walking into the slaughter house.

The room was huge but something was wrong. 10 or more red eyed men and women were standing around the edge the heavy doors were pushed closed. I new it this was the end. But then there at the back of the room, there he was the man who helped he across the city, but he was different his smiley happy face was replaced by horror and sadness he was looking away, unlike the others who were staring into the group of people.

"Welcome guests." Then the man in charge who had greeted us filcked his hand at the awating red eyed people they all seemed to smile then they dived at the waiting crowd.


Sorry about the shortness hope to update soon pls review xx lucyp123