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Chapter 3: Walking with Mother

I had started to stand all on my own the other day

I knew how to walk but

I wanted mother to watch me when I took my first step

The black wrinkly ladies have been trying to get me to walk but I don't want to walk to them

I only want to walk to mother

She hasn't been here in a couple days

I want to go find her

But I want her to see me walk too

I don't know what to do

I don't want mother to be missing again

BANG!

I look to the door

There she is.

I smile as I look at her usual tight green outfit. It's covered in that red sticky stuff like always. I reach out for her. She remains emotionless but she starts to come towards me.

I don't notice the black wrinkly ladies quickly leave the room

I only care about mother

I take a step towards her

And then another

She doesn't smile like I expect

I stop

She looks horrified

Mother rushes up to me and takes me into her arms

I want to ask her what's wrong but it comes out as a concerned gurgle

I reach up to her face and stoke it comfortingly

She didn't pay me any attention as she walked

She stopped when she came to that field of red flowers

She knelt there with me and says to me almost desperately

"You are my daughter

Forever."

"You will not leave this place."

"This bond is only for you and me."

Then she simply held me close

Her smell was really thick in my nose

And there we are.

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