Amfrazier74 here thanks for reading please review and tell me what you think. Also I need some help dose anyone no Kiba.s moms name, her dogs name, and his sister name thank you
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The wolf eyed Kiba as Akumaru slowly approached from the side. He clenched his teeth and chakra started burning from his claws.
"So looks like you are ready for a fight," Kiba said in a mocking tone. "Let's go Akumaru! Man-beast ultimate taijutsu!" he yelled as he and Akumaru raced towards the wolf in a tornado state. The wolf glared and ducked behind a tree.
"THAT WON'T HELP!" Kiba yelled as he smashed into the tree, destroying it on contact, but nothing was behind it. He had lost sight of his opponent. Both Kiba and Akumaru stopped in confusion.
The wolf, within seconds of their confused looks, leaped out of the ground, its claws hitting Akumaru and impacting him into a tree. Akumaru hit the tree hard but dug his teeth into one of the wolf's paws, ripping through the skin and slammed him into a tree close by. The wolf used his back legs to propel himself off of the tree dodging a tornado like attack from Kiba.
He landed a good distance away from his opponents and the wolf finally spoke while also healing his paw, "Not bad for my trained kin, but sit boy so I can be on my way."
Akumaru growled getting ready for another attack. "So the mangy flea-bag does talk," Kiba said mockingly. "But there ain't no way in hell you're going anywhere."
Kiba threw a smoke bomb, hiding himself and Akumaru from the wolf's vision. A split second later, a tornado like attack came from the side. The wolf jumped and slammed the tornado to the ground with his charka filled paws. It was revealed to be Kiba, now bleeding heavily from right shoulder. The wolf jumped high in the air, its mouth filling with pure charka.
"I don't have time for this, boy." As he was about the release his attack a second tornado hit him in the stomach making him let out the charka high in the air. Akumaru came out of the tornado while still in the air wrapped his jaws around the wolf's leg, twirled, and slammed him to the ground and then ran to Kiba's side.
The wolf got back up a little shaken, blood seeping from his leg, "That pup is a little better then I thought. I guess I'll have to be a little more serous."
Akumaru looked Kiba over, enraged at the smell of wolf and seeing Kiba struggle to move. Akumaru did a jutsu on his own. He turned into a giant white dog turning and glaring at the now comparatively small wolf. Kiba was extremely surprised, he had never known Akumaru to be able to do that move with out him, although sometimes he himself had done it without the second head, but still it had amazed him. Akumaru ran at the wolf with unseen speed. But the wolf just seeped into the ground (think orochimaru like). Akumaru came to a quick stop, sliding and hitting a nearby tree. From the tree, the wolf had appeared and jumped down, slashing the back of Akumaru's head as he came down and dug his knells in the back of his neck. Akumaru growled with pain and shook him off.
Seeing the wolf falling off Akumaru, Kiba took his chance to attack. "Beast mimicry jutsu," Kiba said as he raced to slash the wolf with his left claw. As he was about to make contact, his claw was caught in the wolf's jaws and he was slammed hard into the ground. The wolf took a slash at Kiba's leg and jumped out of the way of a swipe from Akumaru.
"Ok leash wearing pup, I'm running out of time for this. Mind if I finish it?" The wolf grew into a giant version of itself but with markings on his chest. It still had its silver fur but his eyes were now fully black. "Akumaru is it? Get back on your leash with your master over there or this will be your end."
Akumaru even more enraged leaped at him but while he was in the air the wolf gripped Akumaru's neck with his jaws and brought him head first to the ground. "Human, call your leash to this pup or he will die," the wolf said, muffled by Akumaru's neck still in his mouth. Blood slowly came down Akumaru's neck. Kiba was angry and his hate for wolves was growing by the minute but he didn't want to lose Akumaru.
"Let him go you mangy flea bag. Akumaru we'll retreat for now"
Akumaru wasn't listening. The smell of wolf had sent him into a maelstrom of anger; Akumaru slashed the wolf's eyes, getting himself free. The wolf backed up growling with pain.
"You should have kept a better leash human."
Kiba looked on as Akumaru charged and slashed the wolf's other eye before he could heal the first one. After his foe was blinded, he jumped back and charged in his tornado form which hit the wolf head on, crashing him into 3 or 4 trees before stopping. The wolf had many cuts formed over his entire body and Akumaru had for the first time managed to anger the wolf.
He healed his eyes and stared at Akumaru with a glare that could make Kyuubi piss on himself. He said 4 words,
'CALL OF THE WOVLES!!'
Akumaru was sent to a world of black, and eyes started appearing all around him. His feet felt like they were sinking in the ground. The smell of wolf was overpowering, his ears could only hear the howling of wolves. A slash came at Akumaru's right front leg, then the left, and both back legs. He could not tell where the attacks were coming from; he couldn't move any longer. A kick to his gut turned him over and a paw placed itself on his neck as the world of black disappeared and angry wolves' eyes were all he could see.
"I gave you the chance to leave. You brought this on yourself."
From Kiba's eyes, he saw Akumaru standing there as the wolf slashed away at his legs and turned him over to give what looked like the final blow. Kiba pick a green bomb out of his pouch and raced right in front of the wolf as he was about to bite Akumaru's neck and shoved his hand with the bomb into the wolves mouth.
"EAT THIS FLEA BAG!!"
The bomb exploded with gas inside of the wolf. His charka was draining quickly and he was sent to his smaller form. Akumaru was also sent to his smaller form, not being able to hold the transformation any longer.
"What!!...hack …hack… is this?" The wolf spoke out, feeling all of his charka draining out of him quickly.
"That gas is the end of this fight," Kiba smiled as he pulled out a knife and walked over to Akumaru, first making sure he was breathing and then towards the wolf who could no longer stand from charka depletion.
"You disappoint me. I would think wolves of the wild, as they say, would be stronger," Kiba said scornfully as held his knife up for the finishing blow. He stabbed but hit metal.
"Leave him alone Kiba."
"What! … Get out of the way Hinata, that thing's gotta die."
"Why are you attacking him? What has he done to you?"
"I don't need a reason to kill a wolf, but that ain't no ordinary wolf-" He was cut off as Hinata slapped him.
"I don't care what you have against wolves. You're attacking my friend and I won't let you hurt him anymore," Hinata said, both timid and strong.
Kiba looked her in the eye seeing anger he'd never seen directed at him. "That thing's a demon. I don't know what he's doing, but I can't let the thing go." Hinata slapped him again.
"Don't call him a demon. I'll say it again Kiba, if you attack my friend you will fight me first." Hinata was even more angry this was the second person she had grown to care for that had been called a demon and she would not tolerated it again, not even from Kiba.
Kiba looked in annoyance at Hinata, then the wolf. "Fine," he said walking over to Akumaru and helping him to his feet. "But next time flea bag, there won't be anyone to save you," Kiba said as he and Akumaru made their dash towards the village.
Hinata turned around towards the wolf and quickly started checking for wounds but saw that there was blood darkened in spots of his fur that were not wounded. She had seen this before with Naruto; he would be healed quickly after a bloody battle because of the Kyuubi. Nothing would be there but the darker spots of blood on his clothing. Hinata began forcefully removing the gas from his body with charka and thought of what to say to the wolf. She had not seen nor felt any evil from her four legged friend but she could tell there was something being hidden. She thought about how Kiba and Akumaru could be so wounded from one nin-hound and why most of the wolf's wounds were healed before she even got there.
The wolf's mind was going a mile a minute. He had to think of a way out of this. If she found out he was a demon she would attack and him he would not want to have to fight a woman who could be so kind. He didn't have enough charka to hide his real charka system. If she used her eyes he knew he would be caught.
Hinata and the wolf were both lost in thought as she worked on him but Hinata was the one to break the silence.
"Y…You know it really angered me to hear ...Kiba call you a demon. The man I loved or… I still love was called a demon for reasons he could not control."
The wolf listened into this information. To hear a human called a demon was uncommon.
"A demon long ago was sealed into him and for that, the people of my village rejected him." She said this in a very timid and sad voice a little above a whisper. "But I never rejected him. As long as I can remember I've admired him and cared for him. I would never abandon him…"
The wolf took this in; he and the young one had came here to meet the other demon holder. If he was in the home town of the other holder he could just wait there for the young one.
"W-w-what I'm saying is that… you can let me know what's going on. I won't abandon you… I won't hurt you. I-I know you're good. I don't sense any evil within you… please be honest with me."
The wolf heard her but was in a bit of shock at her words and went into deep thought about his next move. He was interrupted from his thoughts with the sound of her voice again.
After saying those words, Hinata watched as the wolf seemed motionless, like in a trance of some sort. "R-r-ramen"
Wolf's eyes twitched hearing the name and before he could stop himself,
"DAMNNNN!!! WOMAN I SWAER I'LL HANG MYSELF IF I HAVE TO BE CALLED THAT AGAIN."
Hinata eyes saddened and she looked to the ground. The wolf felt completely ashamed for being brought to speak like that and for making such a kind human sad.
"I-I-I'm sorry" they said at almost the same time. The wolf wanted to kill himself for this but he went and lay on her lap and licked her hand in apology. He thought to himself before speaking 'My kin would never let me live this down. I'm acting like a leash wearer'
"So human woman, I guess I must explain some things, so as most humans do I'll start with my name."
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"Pein-sama." A man with a rain headband walked into a large room with 20 tubes and one man sitting in a chair in the middle of the room covered by darkness. He saluted his master and closed the door and there was almost nothing to see with but the small light that hung on the ceiling over his head like that in an interrogation room.
"Report. Do you have the one I want?" Pein said in a monotone, soulless voice.
"We found them near the border to get into the country, but I regret to inform you that he escaped."
"Tell me. How did he escape 10 bounty hunters and 23 rain ninja?" Pein said in a more annoyed voice than before.
The man shook with fear but answered, "It was not just him, there were sand ninja accompanying him and a wolf with strange chakra."
"Interesting. Keep going then. How many survived including yourself, and tell me of the boy."
"16 men killed in all, sir. There were 6 killed by a ninja with a puppet and 10 kill by the strange wolf but what's really bizarre is that the boy you wanted knocked out 12 men but killed none. The man you sent with us managed to knock him out just from looking at him. I must say I never seen any thing like it Pein-sama."
Pein pulled a sword out of the large coat he was wearing and walked closer to the man and said in a dark voice. "And then?"
The man stiffened as Pein came closer, for he had heard stories of Pein's anger; entire families went missing in the ones he had heard the most. Fear was appearing rapidly in his eyes and facial features.
"They retreated into some type of jutsu the wolf created and slipped us up. The ring you gave us to track this chakra you spoke of… reacted to both the wolf and the boy. Me and the rest of the men left tracked one of the chakras and ended up meeting the wolf, but not the boy. We injured the wolf really badly. It could not have survived."
"Indeed. Is there anything else you might add? You said there were two ninja with him," Pein said standing right in front of the man now.
"They had a girl with them. She stayed out of the fight the whole time and seemed scared of the bloodshed."
"You saw a lot, noticing who was killed by whom. Did u do this while fighting?" He asked in a knowing and annoyed voice.
The man became quiet. Fear could be felt in the room from outside. "Pein-sama I uh…I-" he was cut off as a sword went through his gut.
"You stayed out of the fight and watched as your comrades died, and worse, using this tactic you failed to retrieve the one I want. For your failure, your family will die shortly after you."
Tears fell from the man's eyes as he took his last few breaths and fell hard to the ground as the sword was removed. Tobi walked into the room, looking at the bleeding man on the floor.
"Now you're going to need a new platoon leader… ha ha ha. That wolf Jinchuuriki didn't seem like much to me. I think the Kyuubi might be a better prize.
Pein replied, "If legend is to be believed, Shakiidaa is stronger. It seems our prey has gone to the sand. An attack would be unwise at the moment; the kazekage will be on the lookout for a while."
"So what do you think we should do?" Tobi asked curiously.
"We will send a spy to find the Jinchuuriki. When we have word of his exact location…"
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After Temari left the room, Gaara gave Naruto a very serious look. "Uzumaki tell him nothing of the Jinchuuriki or the demon you hold."
Naruto gave him a questioning look in reply. "Why not Gaara? He come a long way, shouldn't he have all the info we have?"
"He knows that most of the other demon lords were sealed in humans, but he does not know anything about them being dead. That and we don't know how he'll react to hearing about the Kyuubi. We don't know what we can trust him with yet, so he know only bits of the info we know.
"Alright" Naruto said, not liking the fact that he would have to hide info from an ally and fellow Jinchuuriki. They stood in silence for a moment waiting for word from Temari. A crash was heard coming from the hospital. Naruto, hearing the sound, quickly smashed through a nearby window and raced towards the crash while Gaara simply put his hand up and dissolved into his sand.
As Naruto made it to the hospital, he could see that many window were broken and there was a high amount of chakra still in the hospital. Naruto raced inside looking for the source of that charka. He saw Temari knocked out as well as Matsuri with a door on top of her. He look into the doorless room on the other side of the hall. He saw a man's body of charka slowly getting out of bed. He ran into the room. The man had his back to him, so he put his hand on his shoulder trying to calm him down. The man turned, grabbed Naruto by the neck, and slammed him to the wall.
"Where is ZUKAI!?!?"
Naruto grabbed the hand on his neck, trying to lessen the pressure on it. "Calm down" Naruto said finding it hard to speak.
"WHERE IS HE?"
Naruto kick the guy in the gut sending him sliding about 5 feet back who.
"I said calm down your-" he was interrupted as a fist sent him flying out of the hospital and into the city streets.
The man jumped out through the hole he had just made and seemed to be sniffing the air. To Naruto's dismay he didn't seem to be finding the smell he wanted and began to get frantic. Naruto was just getting up, and looking at the man through the black chakra that covered him, he could only see his eyes. His pupils were like black slits and the irises were oval shaped and silver. One thing in his eyes that could not be unseen was that he was scared.
"WHAT THE HELL DID U DO WITH ZZUUUKIIIA?"The man yelled, now on 4 legs as his chakra formed into a wolf like shape over him. Tears could be seen falling from his eyes as he walked closer to Naruto.
"WHERE IS HE?"
"I don't know who you're talking about!" Naruto was beginning to see why Gaara said he was unstable and strangely enough saw himself. If someone he cared about was taken or if he was worried enough he'd be in the same state, but he had to defuse this situation before things got out of hand.
Hearing Naruto say he didn't know, the man rushed off farther into the city, crashing into buildings and unknowingly destroying anything in his path as looked franticly for a smell that was no were in the city. The people of the city were running everywhere screaming about a demon . Naruto chased after him for 5 minutes until he saw sand grab the chakra formed wolf and hold him in the air. Both Gaara and Kankuro had arrived. Naruto came and stood by Gaara, watching as Kankuro came behind him with a needle full of an unknown type of liquid in his hand. He quickly stuck it in his back as he almost escaped the sand.
The flooding chakra calmed down and a man with dark skin could be seen. He had the same eyes as earlier; his hair was long and led to his shoulder in twisty's that seemed to go everywhere. There were white streaks in each twist that looked like they almost glowed. He was wearing a white muscle shirt with straps that were connected to strange swords on his back. One of these swords was completely black. This was the one on his left side. The other was mostly black but had streaks of silver going down the middle. He was also wearing black pants that were baggy on him with close toed shoes Naruto had never seen.
The man's chakra was no longer visible and tears were flooding from his eyes. He was scared that Zukia may have been hurt or worse. The last thing he remembered, he was fighting and a man with a strange red eye looked at him and before he knew it, he was in a world of horrible dreams and when he came out he could no longer stay conscious. He felt completely guilty. He had wanted to finally be accepted by others of his kind or "kin" in his mind. If any thing had happen to Zukia he couldn't help feeling it was his fault.
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Zukia had just finished telling Hinata that his name was Zukia and that he was the guardian of a demon holder. He was about to ask where this Naruto demon holder was when he felt the "young one's" energy going out of control.
"Human, Hinata please… give me your chakra."
"What's wrong?" Hinata said seeing the worry in Zukia's eyes.
"Please I still don't have enough of my own chakra and I fear something is going wrong."
Hinata listened and put her hands on his paw and pushed her chakra into him. Zukia took in the chakra and started gathering the chakra in his mouth and howled a loud howl. The chakra in his mouth began coming out in waves and began traveling to the location that Zukia had pinpointed.
The man's chakra had just calmed down when he was hit by sound waves and heard the message. It was small, like it was far away, but it was there.
"Young one, what is wrong? Are you hurt?"
The man heard the voice and was instantly relieved; tilting his head towards the sound waves he began to connect with message. "Zukia… I'm not hurt. Where the hell are you?"
"I'm in the land of the other demon holder. Don't worry young one, I'm fine. I'll try to find the other demon holder here and meet you when those humans bring you."
"Um… Zukia you're leaving me here alone?"
"Don't worry young one, I believe you can trust those human. I'll make contact with you again later young-" the line was cut as Hinata was all most out of chakra.
"Human, Hinata?"
"I'm sorry I'm at my limit on chakra."
"It's alright human… Hinata, but I believe we should go to your territory and speak."
Hinata nodded and was on her way home thinking that the 5th would kill her for running out of the hospital for seemingly no apparent reason.
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Tears stop flooding from his eyes. Zukia was ok. He opened his eyes to see many people standing around him with anger and hatred in their eyes. He was held still at the moment in sand. He looked at the people and the destruction he had just caused; the people looked at him and started to shout praising the kazekage for caching the "demon" and begging to see him dead. The man was saddened by this, and his eyes stay glued to the ground.
"Zukai… I've lost the only chance I had to be accepted by my kin… Shakiidaa please if they will do it…. let me die this time."
Gaara and Naruto could see he had calmed down so they began brining him back to the hospital in a dome of sand. Neither Naruto nor Gaara could say anything since they both knew the knife a village's words could drive through a heart. They walked in silence as Kankuro calmed the crowd.
Inside the man a wolf looked into a sky with a wide moon. "Young one life has more chances then just one."
Beta's note: Hi everybody. I, P-Fess, am the beta-reader for this fic. I hope you like the story thus far and if you have any comments or complaints about the editing of this story feel free to send me a PM or e-mail.
Amfrazier74 here ill work a little harder on my OC but I would like help on names for "young one " review and give me a name ok chap 4 being worked on
