Thanks for all the reviews I'll try to make this story more of my own, it's just a little hard, but don't worry! There will be originality and side stories for the other dancers.

-Chapter Two-
-At the Moulin Rouge-

Duo and the Bohemians were off to the Moulin Rouge and Duo was to perform his poetry for Serena! Duo was so excited; finally someone can appreciate his work. His dreams were actually coming true. Duo couldn't wait to rub this in his Dad's face. They crossed the street and they arrived to Quatre Winner's Bordello.

His infamous girls were known as his, "Diamond Dogs." In order to be one of these you had to be willing to do almost anything. This was a sad life, but you couldn't complain because all the money you could make in a day. Trowa, Wufei (Duo had finally learned the Argentinean's name), Haruku, Michiru, and Duo took their seats and prepared for a show that would change their lives.

Four girls came out; one had long auburn hair and stunning green eyes. She was wearing a pink corset with matching garters, fishnet and heels. She couldn't keep her eyes off of Duo. The next girl looked too sweet for this business, she had golden blonde hair in curls with red bows. Her eyes were a bewitching shade of blue, and her attire was an orange and blue corset styled dress. The bottom was like a flowing tutu that could easily be lifted up. Along with the dress, she also had black fishnet and orange garters. The third girl looked a little angry to be working. She had raven black hair pulled tightly back in a bun on the top of her head. Her eyes were a shade Duo never saw before, purple. He had never seen purple eyes in all his life; this made him want to keep watching her. She wore a saloon style dress that matched her eyes and sheer red stockings with vertical opaque black stripes. The final girl, was an elegant girl, she looked older and wiser than the other girls, kind of like the mother figure who would watch out for all of the girls. Her hair was long and green; half of it was pulled up with red green ribbons. This girl also had an eye color Duo never saw, red. He wondered why these girls had such odd colored eyes. Her attire was much different than the other girls; she wore a sailor type outfit. It had burgundy bows on her chest and above her butt, the skirt was very short and was black. She wore fishnet to match her bows with big black boots. She then rested her thin, delicate body against a pole next to Duo. All four of these girls seemed to like Duo, but he kept his mind on Serena. He had to stay focused on her; she was going to help him.

Suddenly the raven haired girl started to sing, "Where's all my soul sisters? Let me hear ya flow sisters
Hey sister, go sister, soul sister, flow sister. Hey sister, go sister, soul sister, go sister."

While singing this she swung her thighs around and lifted up her dress on a man at the table next to Duo's. This was a creepy perverted old man, and he seemed to be more than happy with the attention he was getting, just by the large lump near his crotch.

"He met Marmalade down in old Moulin Rouge" Duo heard a strong voice, he looked up and saw the Blonde one singing she walking her way over to a table of young millionaires. She continued to sing and played with the boy's top hats. "Strutting her stuff on the street. She said, 'Hello, hey Joe, You wanna give it a go?' Oh!"

Finally all the girls started singing and dancing, the red eyed girl was still on her pole and the auburn girl was dancing directly in front of Duo. "Getcha getcha ya ya da da hey hey hey Getcha getcha ya ya here here oh Mocha chocolatta ya ya ooh yeah "
Duo couldn't deny it, these girls were beautiful. He was half tempted to grab the girl in front of him and make love to her right where she was, but he restrained himself. He needed to talk to Serena and woo her with his poetry. "Creole lady Marmalade" The blonde sung again. As she sung this the girl dancing in front of Duo bent down and whispered, "My name is Makoto, wanna give it a go?" she winked and blew a kiss.

" Voulez-vous coucher avec moi, ce soir? Oh! Oh! Voulez-vous coucher avec moi? yeah yeah yeah yeah " All the girls sung this and grinded against someone. Makoto started grinding on Duo and he had no clue what to do. He didn't understand French, what did this song mean?

This seemed to just be an introduction, because soon hundreds of dancers burst through every door, wearing maid outfits, corsets, saloon gowns, and sailor suits! Quatre Winner came out with his Diamond Dogs; proud and eager to make some money. Every guy in the Moulin Rouge cheered, except for Duo. He was still waiting for Serena. Where could she be?

Makoto then pulled Duo's face to hers and started to sing, "He sat in her boudoir while she freshened up, boy drank all that magnolia wine.
On her black satin sheets is where he started to freak, yeah "

Her voice was amazing, no doubt about that, but he wanted Serena! "Getcha getcha ya ya da da hey hey hey Getcha getcha ya ya here here oh Mocha chocolatta ya ya ooh yeah "
The raven hair girl left the old man and walked center stage. She started to take off her saloon dress to reveal a sexy piece of lingerie; while doing this she sang, " Yeah, yeah, ah. They come through with the money and the garter belts Let 'em know we 'bout that cake, straight out the gate. We independent women, some mistake us for whores I'm saying, "Why spend mine when I can spend yours?" Disagree? Well that's you and I'm sorry, I'm gonna keep playing these cats out like Atari Wear high-heeled shoes, getting Love from the dudes, four bad-ass chicks from the Moulin Rouge"

"Hey sisters, soul sisters, betta get that dough sisters" They all sang once again.

" We drink wine with diamonds in the glass, by the case, the meaning of expensive taste. We wanna getcha getcha ya ya come on Mocha chocolatta what? Creole lady Marmalade One more time, come on now" The raven hair girl sung again. She must be the favorite, she had so many solos.

" Marmalade ooh Lady Marmalade ooh yeah Marmalade no ohh " The girls all moved center stage. The green hair one emerged in front of them and sang, "Hey, hey, hey! Touch of her skin feeling silky smooth, oh
Color of cafe au lait, alright. Made the savage beast inside roar until he cried."

She had quite the voice on her, Duo couldn't believe she didn't have as many solos as the raven haired girl. Maybe she wanted to be nice?

The little blonde girl stepped forward and sang, "Minakoooooo!"

After Minako stopped moaning the raven girl pushed her away and stepped in front of her, "Reiiii!"

Makoto waited till Rei was done and stepped forward. She sang her name like the others. Finally the mysterious green haired one approached the front of the stage and sang, "Setsunaaa!"

"Moulin Rouge!" All the girls sang this time, including the other dancers.

The girls finished up their song and everyone cheered. Quatre came center stage and one single light shown upon him. " Did you like that?" he screamed with enthusiasm. All the men threw up their top hats and Quatre looked pleased. "Well, I hope you're ready for the Sparkling Diamond!" Men whistled and screamed, no man could contain himself. Clearly this was the finale; this is why everyone came to the Moulin Rouge. They wanted to see Serena. Suddenly it was pitch black and Duo was eager, to finally see Serena.

Authors Note: Did you like that? Please review