AUTHORS NOTES MAY CONTAIN SPOILERS
Hey guys,
sorry for letting you wait so long after the lightbending cliffhanger.
Also I got my first fav :D thanks a lot to Badwolf432. I also got three reviews. I already like that but I would LOVE it if you would write a bit more than (literally) 1 word reviews. I also do this as a training for my skills with english language (I'm from Germany) and I'd like to know if I used some wrong tenses or some wrong words or something like that.
I dont own TLOK blabla
Well here is the new Chapter hope you enjoy.
"Excuse me there are only four Elements to be bent: air, water, earth and fire. There is no such thing as lightbending." Kai said, clearly confused. "Well as I told you my theory is really far-fetched. Also there is energybending. Avatar Aang used it to take away the Ozai's bending." I clarified.
"I assume that the four elements have changed in the past. You see there are still more bending forms discovered like metalbending or lavabending being an extension of earthbending, or bloodbending being a new form of waterbending. In my theory there are four ancient elements namely light, frost, shadow and heat. These are according to my speculation the equivalents to air, water, earth and fire – in that order."
"You are right, this is totally far-fetched. But it also kind of makes sense. You still need to tell me my part in the story though." he reminds me.
"Yeah about that" I hold my face in my hands "I can't remember the story itself but I remember the persons. You are Kai and you are an orphan living on the streets then you go to learn airbending and will learn it really quick. You don't like taking orders. You also like Jinora I remember, but sorry I don't remember any details." he thinks for a few moments.
"So what is there to know about that Jinora girl that I am supposed to like?" "Well she is about 12 years old, a quite powerful airbender and got some high spiritual powers. She is the daughter of Tenzin who is the son of Avatar Aang. She got a little brother named Meelo, a little sister named Ikki and a baby brother who is named Rohan. I don't know much about Rohans personality because he is just like one year old but excluding him she is assuredly the most calm of these three siblings." I ranted a bit.
"Well she appears to be nice, when will I meet her?" "Sorry, I don't remember the plot, just the characters." "Right, forgot about that, sorry." he replies, now leaving "I'm gonna sleep now, see ya tomorrow." he waves, turning around.
When I think about it I feel really tired at the moment. I catch up to him. "Hey wait, can I sleep at your place? I don't have anywhere to go so it would be nice if I would have a place to take a nap." he turns his head. "You mind sleeping on the ground?" I shrug "Normally I would but I guess I don't have much of a choice." "Tell me about it" Kai complains "I got a nice... place right next to a baker's shop, so at least the heat of the furnace keeps me warm at night. Still uncomfortable sleeping on the muddy ground with nothing but dirt under you and air above you."
"Wait you don't have any blanket of some sort?" I ask. He stares at me as if I had just accused him of gluttony. "You do know that I kind of live on the streets as an orphan?"
"'Course I do, I also wasnt asking for a super comfortable duvet, just some cloth that lies on you while you sleep. The spirit is what matters." "And that spirit would be?"
"To have something cover and protect you while you sleep."
He shrugs. "You have weird needs. I guess you could ask the baker if he could lend you an empty sack (of flour). It may help to say that you are a friend of mine. I..." he pauses "made a deal with him." "I'll remember that." I say over my shoulder as I enter the bakers store.
A bell rings. "Hello, how may I help you?" I am greeted by a large man, looking almost as tasty as the pastries on the counter. 'wait a minute, why is my inner gay pervert taking control over me right now? Gary would you please just shut the fuck up. You can have your moments but not right now please!' I scratch the back of my head nervously. "Well I wanted to ask you if you could borrow me an empty sack (of flour). You see I'm not really from around here and I don't have the cash to pay a room in an all fancy hotel so I wondered if you could provide me with some useful stuff for a sleepover at Kai's place. I heard you know him."
His face pales. He drops the baking-plate he held in his hands and picks it up with shakingly, just to drop it again. "We- We-" he stammered. "We would be m- m- more that happy to p- p- provide a friend of K- Kai with... whatever he needs." He hastily walked into the back of the bakery, still shaking.
I use this opportunity to snatch a few apple turnovers and buns. 'Have I mentioned that I love apple turnovers?' Not too many or he will notice, but my stomach and my addiction dictate me to grab a fair amount. Unfortunately the baker comes back to soon and catches me stuffing those surely tasty pastries into my pockets. I put my hands up in a weak attempt of a surrender. He just smiles at me.
"It's okay, you look hungry and I was going to get rid of them, I wanted to close anyway and they wouldnt taste good the next day." "Thanks." I say, only intensifying the I-just-got-caught-blush on my cheeks. 'Gary: dont worry, blushing at such a gorgeus man isnt something to be asham- mmphh *winces in pain as I strangle him from behind and ram him my foot into his dorsum forcing his spine into an unhealth looking hollow back*'
With that I leave the bakery and go to the back meeting Kai getting comfy in the mud right next to the back wall. I throw my bag next a few feet away from him. "I dont wanna know what kind of deal there is between you and the baker."
AUTHORS NOTES MAY CONTAIN SPOILERS
So what do you think? Should I delete the Gary-parts?
About the Elements: I will be able to bend all four ancient elements. However I only will be able to control one at a time, depending on how I feel.
Light = Joy/Freedom
Frost = Sadness
Shadow = Fear
Heat = Rage
Next Chapter we will be meeting the airbenders so stay tuned. Also pls Review, follow and favorite my story please.
bye *waves*
