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He was looking at a photo album of he and Syrus, thinking of how he only told his little brother that he loved him once. A tear fell on a picture of Syrus. He never knew he would miss him so much; he had really just fought with him. He began to remember that awful night.
(Aren't flashbacks fun?)
Zane woke up in a cold sweat. "Nightmare," he whispered. "That's all it was." His nightmare was of Syrus dying.
He heard the phone ring. His stomach was in a knot, his heart went to his throat. As he answered the phone, he could hear his mother crying on the other end. "Mom, what's wrong?"
"Sy-Sy-Syrus-is-is-" her voice broke off into sobs. "-in the hospital. He fell off a cliff, and it doesn't look good!" she finally chocked out before hanging up in tears.
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Zane was at the hospital as fast as lightning. Alexis retold what happened. He saw Jaden sitting, and walked over to ask him how it happened.
"I got him mad, and he ran out and fell, I guess."
Hours later, a doctor came out with a sad look on his face. Zane and Jaden were the first to ask, "Is he okay?"
The doctor turned his head, then looked back at Zane and Jaden and said, "I'm sorry. We did all we could, but it just wasn't in time." Zane and Jaden both began to cry hard; not loud, but hard.
Then Zane turned to Jaden. "You...you...killed him!"
(End the flashback)
Zane looked back at the photo album. He flipped threw some more pictures. "I need to stop blaming Jaden." He thought to himself. "I need to stop blaming and start moving on."
Zane flipped threw the album and found the photo he was looking for. It was of him and Syrus at Graduation. Well, at Zane's Graduation. Zane had his hand on Sy's shoulder and Syrus and him where laughing hard. Zane calmly took the photo out of the album, and slipped it into his wallet.
There we have it chapter 3! So what do you guys think? Should this continue?
