I don't have much to say apart from, I couldn't be bothered to write as it was too hot.


Reviews:

AriLivesnotDylan & Eragon Fowl & hehe and Bookwormy: I'm glad you all like it and here is more!

thebeastifiedone: I will not change it. Some of your points are corect and some aren't! ;) Took me a little time to work out how to use it but I worked it out on both my ds and my laptop! :D

Pancake3298: No worrys! Haha Surprise! Ahhh, well, you know now! :D

Starrynight77: Maybe

im fowl to the bone: You will find out why Finn Short is called that later on. I won't change it because it is imperitvive to the story that it is in there, but thanks for letting me know and You have a real nice name there!

Wow! 8 reviews! Thanks!

On with the story!


Finn's POV (After Foaly pranked Holly)

Foaly left as soon as had closed the door to the pod. I heard the rush of the flare and then the blistering heat. I had been taught how to drive the shuttles and pods by the best. My mother. She was, is, the best shuttle pilot the LEP have. I took off and put the stabilising fins out. Everyone kept saying I was just like my mother, we both loved flying. I was so deep in my thoughts of flying that I didn't realise that I had come into the port and I was ready to go out and find our pinger. I opened the door, stepped out and took a huge breath. The air here was better than in Haven. Yes, it was laced with pollution but it was better than the filtered variety. I pressed the button on my control panel and started up my wings, or tried to.

"Come on, I don't have time for this." I mumbled to myself. I pressed the button again but this time they started. I gently began to hover and then I turned on my shield. While I zoomed across the sky, I attempted to contact Foaly, hoping the flare radiation wasn't bad.

"Foaly, you there?"

"Yes Captain." I heard muttering in the background then Foaly's whinny of a laugh and then he announced. "So is Commander Short. Aka. Your mother." Foaly was laughing harder now and I heard my mothers laugh in there as well.

'Ah well, their laughter must mean that I'm on the big screen.' I thought to myself. I made my way to the co-ordinates that Foaly had given me and I worked out who pinged Haven. So I decided to play another joke on the Commander. Luckily, I had computer hacking skills to hand so I hacked my camera to show the countryside, so they didn't know where I was going.

"Situation critical. Human contact not visible and unidentifiable. Send full Retrieval with Commander. Techy shuttle too, Including you Foaly. We may have to shut down Time on this one." I ordered. I made the orders short and simple.

"OK Captain. We will be there in about an hour, hold your position."

This was going to be so funny! I turned off my microphone after that and checked my video feed, making sure it was showing the countryside rather than what it was meant to be showing. After checking that and was sure nothing was going to give me away, I flew over to the manor in front of me. '

Father. Oh I hope you are in.' I thought. I landed on the gravel driveway and walked up to the large oak doors. Nervous, I knocked on the door loudly and waited. And Waited. I was starting to doubt they were home until the door opened and I was brought into a tight bear hug by Butler. I hadn't seen him for what seemed like forever. Yet, I hadn't seen Father for what seemed like forever either. Butler released me and put me down gently.

"Come on in Finn. We haven't seen you for ages!"

"I missed you so much!"

"You're wearing your LEP suite. Why?"

"I think Father pinged Haven so I'm here to find out if he did or not. I'm hoping that he did." If he didn't, then the situation really would be critical and I wouldn't be able to play my joke. "May I see Father please Butler?"

"Of course."


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Random Fact: In Singapore, it is illegal to chew gum.

Oh yeah, we learnt in science that chewing gum is more likely to give you stomach ulcers. Just thought I might out it out there...