Hello I think I should say now that I am really unhappy know one has reviewed my work and I don't know if I should continue. So I'm starting two more fanfics to see what you think.
Chapter 3
"Ok so whose house are we staying at tonight?" I asked
"Yours"Edward said
"Ok"
"We should probably tell your Dad I'm staying over"
"Yer"
We pulled up to my house and got out of the car. Dad wasn't home yet so we decided to practice the scene were we meet (yes they got the parts). It was simple we didn't have allot to say and we ended up just sitting on the couch watching TV.
Edward was playing with my hair and I was lying across his lap. I saw my dad get out of his police cruiser and Edward stopped playing with my hair sitting me up beside him.
"Hey Edward, Bella what's for dinner I'm starved" he said hanging up his gun and jacket.
"Pizza dad you know the number" I through the phone at him.
"You staying Edward?"
"If that's alright with you sir I'll be staying the night" he answered
"That's alright as long as you don't do anything stupid"
"Thanks dad" I said.
After dinner/pizza I got ready for bed. When I went back to my room Edward was there reading one of my books
"You know Tanya is coming back tomorrow to clam her unrightfully place as Queen of the school" I said
"I hope you don't get hurt tomorrow when she finds out about us" he sighed and we fell asleep.
T pov
"Hi I'm back!" I said and everyone came up and started to welcome me back and ask how my trip to England was. After I had finished there I when to the P.E.F.C head room. To find out what had happened will I was away. I just as I want through the door I saw his silver Volvo drive up I was happy I'd see him today.
"Hello everyone" I said sitting down
"Hello Tanya" Jessica, Jan, Victoria and the rest of the fan club said.
"So Jess what's have I missed in my time away from our Prince Edward?"
"Well he got perfect grades for the end of term but when we came back after the holidays something had happened we tried to stop it but our efforts just made it worse." She said locking down at the ground.
"What happened" I hissed at Jane
"Well... he...sort of fell in love...with Bella" she said. I was too shocked to speak.
"We tried to break them up but after I attacked her when we found out they were sleeping together there's proof if you want to see it and me attacking her just made them closer now he drives her to Scholl and they arranged their schedules so that there in most of the same classes." Victoria explained and I was close to crying
"Well at lunch I'll clear things up. Now let's get to class" I said and we left.
B pov
I was walking down the hall when I bumped into Tanya the 'queen' of the school and the founded of the P.E.F.C. she wasn't really queen the school had crowned me Queen after she left to go to England.
"Isabella it's good to see you" she said
"Tanya, how was England?" I asked
""Good it would have been better with Edward" I think she added 'and him away from you' as she walked away.
Edward was walking me to the cafeteria with his arm wrapped around my waist. I got death glares from all members of the P.E.F.C that is except for Tanya who looked like she was going to cry.
"Did you see Tanya devils face when you walked in together it looked like she would die" Emmett said and Rose were laughing, Alice high fived me and jasper nodded in approval. Tanya got up and started to walk this way with Jess and Jane flanking her and Victoria behind her. I turned to Edward when they were close enough that they could hear me.
"So Eddiekins are we still going out tonight?" I asked and the whole cafeteria went silent because know one called Edward anything but Edward.
"Yes bumblebee" he said kissing my noise. I looked at Alice and she got it.
"Were you taking her Edward?" Jasper asked
"Eddiekins won't tell me" I said looking sad
"IS it formal?" Alice asked
"Yes I was meaning to ask you if you could do my makeup"
"Like makeup could make you look better I. Don't. Think. So" Tanya said and all four of them laught
"Well Tanya I'm sorry we all can't look as beautiful as Rosalie but I was hoping to cover up these scratches Victoria gave me" I said
"Well Rosalie if you're so beautiful take off your makeup." Tanya challenged
"OK come with me to make shore I don't cheat" Rose said
Rose got up and walked with Tanya into the bathroom. Rose came out and Tanya came out stunned and went back to her table as Rose came back to us. And put on the only makeup she wore to school 'lipstick'.
"Sure Bella" Alice said and we all laught.
I was cooking dinner at my house for me and Edward after Alice had cored up my scratches. Ring Ring. The phone rang so I turned the heat down and got it.
"Hello Bella Speaking?"
"Bells I won't be home tonight so could you stay with Edward I don't want you to get hurt"
"Sure dad I'll see you tomorrow"
"Bye Bells"
"Bye"
I went back to cooking. I was about to serve up when Edward came up behind me wrapping his arms around me and resting his chin on my shoulder.
"I'm hungry" he said
"Well let go and sit down" I said and I put his plate on the table.
"Are you going to tell me where you're taking me" I asked as we eat
"Nope but I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoy your cooking" he said and I blushed
"When are we going?"
"Now if you want to?"
"Then onward my Edward" (hahaha it rhymes)
He drove us to a small track.
"How far is it know?" I asked
"Not far" he held my hand as we walked to a row of bushes and a willow and we walked through the archway into a small meadow with wild flowers. I saw that there were trees all around us and that's why I hadn't seen it.
"Wow" I said turning to Edward he kissed me and I kissed him back.
"Do you like it?" he asked
"It's beautiful when did you find it?"
"A few days after I got your first valentine card I promised myself I would take the girl that sent it to me here"
"Thank you Edward" I said leaning against him. He hugged me and we just looked at the stars. It started to rain.
"Let's go home" he said walking us to his car. He helped me out of his car and opened the door with the key my dad had given him. We walked in and into my room I felt a shock of electricity go though me when he touched my arm. I turned around and looked into his Emerald green eyes. He looked into my brown eyes and kissed me passionately. He ran his hand down my back, across my thigh and pulled my leg around his waist. I unbuttoned his shirt and my heart was pumping hard. He tipped us onto my bed and our first night of passion began.
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