Chapter 2: Of Girls and Crushes
Hermionette: Ok, here FINALLY is Chapter 2. I have been away for the last month, and no computers had access to I also have Chapter 3 and 4 saved on my computer, but they need proofing. I will probably get them up today as well. Well, here it is, and please don't stop reviewing! Updates will come much, much, much, much, much...faster, if you get my drift. No more vacations for a LONG while. Please continue reading & reviewing!
Remus Lupin looked up from his food. He was finally starting to get very annoyed from just staring at the delectable feast that was typical of Hogwarts's food; this was saying something, as he usually was very patient. James Potter and Sirius Black were engrossed in a heated conversation about which Quidditch team currently had the best Beaters. Peter Pettigrew was listening intently, amiably agreeing to whatever was said, no matter who said it. Such a suck up! Remus thought annoyed, looking over at Peter. Then, his eyes shifted over to James and Sirius. Are they actually having an intelligent conversation? No, it's just Quidditch. he assured himself. He knew that if he had said this aloud, they would have killed him. Morons! But I love 'em; they are my friends! he thought, returning to his food.
POV switch
Sirius
Sirius looked away from James and glanced at the Great Hall doorway. Wow! he thought, seeing Veronica and Marie walk in with the first years. Those are some tall first years! Then, having seen nothing exciting, he turned back to his friend. "No way, James! The Chudley Canons' beaters are way better then the Falmouth Falcons' pathetic excuse for players!" At that remark, James quickly fired back. "No way! The Falcons' beaters are the gods of Quidditch! Way better then those bloody pansies on the Chudley Canons' team!" This conversation continued for awhile until James was somehow distracted.
POV switch
Remus
Remus checked his small, leather-bound, pocket calendar, which was open to September 1, and reminded himself to remember that tomorrow night was a full moon. Just then, the giant wooden doors opened with a crash to reveal soaking tired looking, weary first-years. Remus noticed two heads sticking up out of the crowd, one blonde and one black. Then he remarked, "What do they feed these first-years now?" Not only did the first-years as a class seem taller than normal, but two students were almost a foot taller than the others. James noticed this too, after looking toward the entrance when he heard Remus's comment. "Heh," James said, "I wonder if those two-" he indicated the taller girls, "-are related to Hagrid?"
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Severus
Meanwhile, at the Slytherin table, Lucius Malfoy sat taunting Severus Snape. The pale teenager smiled evilly at the smaller boy, then said, "So, what are we going to do about your, uh, problems?" His words confused Severus, who asnswered, "Problems? What problems?" Lucius's metallic blue eyes flashed with amusement, before he replied, "First, someone could grease a cookie tray with your head..." The black-haired boy glared and was about to speak when Lucius continued, "And you talk as though someone's shoved something up your-" Now Severus was mad, and he retorted, "I most certainly-" Once again, however he was cut off by Lucius. You're not very smart, and you don't even have the decency to let someone finish their insu-" This was just too far for him. "Dammit, Lucius, just stop!" Severus yelled as the huge wooden doors opened. All of the Slytherins turned their heads. Severus looked at the new students, and his eyes stopped on one girl in particular. Wow! Severus whispered to himself, as he saw a blond who was taller than the others appear through the doorway. She's too beautiful to possibly be a first year! He watched as Marie's long, wet, blonde hair bounced on her skinny shoulders. She's amazing!
POV switch
Lucius
"Hey, Snivellus, what are you..." Lucius started as he turned to see the first-years enter the room. One raven-haired beauty caught his eye. Wow! She can't possibly be a first year and even if she is, I'm sure I can persuade her to join me and be a friend of mine! he thought, watching her sulkily walk into the large room. Is she looking at Black and his miscreant friends? No, why would she want them and their filthy little friend! Potter's actually dating the mudblood! That's disgusting! he thought as his cold blue eyes moved back to Veronica. "She's so hot!" he remarked, then glanced around to make sure that no one had heard him. He watched her gracefully step into the line behind McGonagall. I'm going to make her mine! Nobody can resist the Malfoy charm!
POV switch
Sirius
Sirius laughed at James's remark and responded, "Probably, or at least some giant. They are awfully tall to be first-years..." Sirius was just about to restart their Quidditch debate, but saw it was no use. Everyone had their eyes on the first-years. He gave up on the subject, promising himself to bring up the conversation again, later that night, in the common room. He glanced over at the silent, nervous group of children for a second, and then returned to staring at his food. Hunger was overtaking him, having seen nobody of any real interest in the lot. If I have to listen to that bloody hat sing one more time... I'll kill it! I swear! he thought as he watched McGonagall place the sorting hat on its stool.
POVswitch
Peter
Who cares about the first years? Look at all this delicious food! Too bad we have to wait for them to get sorted-I just want to eat! These food-obsessed thoughts were repeating themselves in Peter's brain, and he began to drool all over his plate.
POV Switch
Veronica
Veronica watched as the huge wooden doors open, then looked at Marie for reassurance. With a soft sigh, she thought Well, here goes nothing! Marie and she walked in, side by side. Ugh! Slytherin! she thought as her eyes fell onto the table surrounded with green and silver hues. Then, something-or rather someone-caught her eye. A pale boy from the Slytherin table seemed to be staring at her. He had platinum blond hair and silver, snake-like eyes. Eww! she thought as she quickly turned away. She continued looking through the room: at the teacher's table, Hufflepuff table, and Ravenclaw table. Then she looked at Gryffindor's table-or more specifically-a boy at the Gryffindor table. He had dark-brown hair, and deep, loving pools of brown for eyes. He's so beautiful, no, he's wonderful, what am I thinking? He's hot! she thought, not daring to take her eyes off of him for chance of losing sight of him.
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Marie
Marie nervously glanced at McGonagall. Professor Minerva McGonagall was young raven-haired women, whose thick tresses were past her shoulders and pulled into a loose braid. Her pale blue eyes were like the snap and crack of a twig in the winter's first frost. She was a new teacher - she had only been teaching for a year - yet already had a cold air of strict authority that everyone knew ought not be crossed. Marie was miserable, yet still found room in her clouded brain to be nervous. She was soaking from head to foot, for she had fallen in the river. Not once, not twice, but three times! She was so cold that she felt her legs beginning to numb up. Her beautiful, wavy, long blonde hair, with a red tint to it, was a total disaster area. Not to mention her thin, silver-rimmed glasses! They were covered with dirty pond water, and she could hardly see where she was going. She muttered, "Vitrium abstergeo!" while pointing her wand at her face. She flinched as the glasses were pushed onto her nose by a pale pink wave. In a second, her glasses were wiped of all lake scum, and she could see Professor McGonagall pushing open the immense Hogwarts doors. Just in time. she thought to herself. With a loud thump, the doors were slowly opened, and the excited young wizards and witches were able to begin filing into the Great Hall.
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Veronica
When they were called up in front of the teachers, a mixture of feelings rushed into her mind.
Pain- Marie's wand was poking her between the shoulder blades; Nervousness- Where would she be sorted? Would that hot Gryffindor like her?; Excitement-Meeting new friends had always been one of her favorite hobbies; and her last, but strongest, feeling: Embarassment-Being paraded with all those stupid eleven-year-olds.
I hope I look good! I know poor Marie doesn't... As she thought this, a quiet giggle escaped her. "What?"Marie asked, stress allowing her to be annoyed a lot faster than was normal for her. "Oh, nothing!" she replied with an almost invisible evil grin.
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Marie
Marie, having had it pounded into her at Beauxbatons that research was vital to survive, had read Hogwarts, A History and knew all about the four houses. On the boat trip over, Marie had yelled to Veronica, whose boat had been right next to hers, and told her a bit about each of the houses. Neither of them had been able to agree on which house was the best, however, they had agreed on one thing: Slytherin was not the right house for either of them. That, they had been sure of. Now, as she walked into the Hall, she realized just how big Hogwarts really was; her old school had been about a third of this size. She tried to look at everything at once. The hairy old man, the teachers, the floating candles, the long tables, the replicated sky... But what she was most interested in was her new classmates. She surveyed them all with interest, her eyes scanning the different colors and ages. As her eyes passed over a table wreathed in gold (which she supposed was Gryffindor), they suddenly stopped. Oh, my! She thought. I wonder who that could be? He was sitting with three other boys, and looked to be about her age. He glanced up at them for a moment, and she was just sure that he had looked at her! Oh, how she instantly loved his brown hair and matching eyes, his great smile, and his choice of friends, who all looked nice enough. She looked to her right and saw Veronica also staring at the Gryffindor table. Hmm...maybe she spots a new friend! She gently elbowed Veronica, until she had the other girl's attention. She felt as though they had known each other forever, not just today. She immediately knew that she could confide with her about her crush on the Gryffindor. She whispered, "Oh. My gosh. I think I just found love at first sight! Do you see him over there? Sloppy brown hair? Laughing with the boys around him? I just know that I have to be in Gryffindor with him."
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Veronica
Suddenly she felt a sharp pain in her side. She looked down only to see Marie's elbow there jabbing even harder against her ribcage."Oh. My gosh." she heard Marie announce loudly pointing to the Gryffindor table. "I think I just found love at first sight! Do you see him over there? Sloppy brown hair? Laughing with the boys around him? I just know that I have to be in Gryffindor with him." Marie continued to babble as Veronica strained her neck to see this mystery boy. She paused a moment to look closely at the boy she had noticed earlier.Wait: sloppy brown hair! He has that! Laughing with the boys around him? He's doing that! Is my friend here trying to take my hottie? Wait, his friend across from him has messy darkish-brown hair and he's laughing... I'm sure she's talking about him! She wuickly assured herself that her friend did not like her guy. Then she realized: she told me a secret so I should tell her one. It's odd, but I feel like I've known her for ages! "Yeah, I see him! He's cute, but I like his friend across from him! He's Hot!" she replied as they giggled together. I just hope she's talking about whom I think she's talking about!
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Marie
Marie stood on her toes, and, after staring at him, she tore her eyes away and looked across from him. "Oh, yes," Marie replied, "Definitely hot!" Not as hot as my guy, though! Then, from the front of the Great Hall, she heard a voice that was beginning to sing a very annoying little chant. She looked around her and saw, much to her amazement, that everyone else was listening attentively to the torn, old hat on the stool. She sighed, and resignedly started to listen to the lyrics. The hat sang:
"I may look like just a hat,
And a hat I am, you see;
But really: I'm much more than that.
I think, I talk, I can define a tort;
My most important job, though,
Is to sort, sort, sort!
Which house could be right for you?
Come up here, and let me see
I'll look into-"
All of the sudden, the song, which was beginning to amuse Marie, was stopped short. She, along with everyone else in the room, looked around in surprise for the cause of the frozen hat, which could no longer sing.
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Sirius
"Oh, God, no! Not that bloody hat singing again!" he yelled, trying to plug his ears. "I'm not listening to it again! Not this year!" "Oh, really? And what are you gonna do about it, Siri?" James asked jokingly. What am I gonna do about it, Eh Potter? I'll show you! "This," Sirius yelled, as he pointed his wand at the hat and chants "Petasus Placo!" With a small pooosh the hat was silent. At this action, all of Sirius's friends' eyes turned from the hat to him. James began laughing hysterically, Peter timidly looked away, and Remus rolled his eyes, which then turned back to Dumbledore."Hey, Siri, I can't believe you did that!" James whispered between surpressed laughs.
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Veronica
She stared at the boys for a few more minutes until somone started singing. Then, finally, she turned her attention to the teachers. There was a strange little hat sitting on a stool that appeared to be singing about itself. Sure, and they call me conceited... right. Am I the only one who finds this weird and annoying? she asked herself as she looked around the hall seeing everyone else enjoying it, even her new friend Marie. To that, Veronica just rolled her eyes. Come on you can't be serious? They can't actually like this crap! I've heard better songs coming from muggle radios! I mean, please, will somebody please make this God awful noise stop! she thought as she semi-conciously heard "Petasus placo!" whispered somewhere in the hall. The hat suddenly stopped its singing-if you can call it that. She looked closer, and saw it appeared to be trying to speak, but it can't open it's...tear. Well, thank God that's over!
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Remus
"Sirius!" Remus loudly whispered to his friend. "You could have been a bit quieter, you know?" Sirius just shrugged his shoulders and responded, "Like the volume you're using now?" Remus blushed, but he continued speaking, in a softer tone of voice, "It doesn't matter how I'm speaking. I'm not stopping hundred-year-old traditions in front of the whole school, now am I?"
Sirius just shrugged again. "I don't care. If they figure out it was me, what's the worse that can happen?" he said, without a care in his voice. Then, in an overdramatic voice, he continued, "Oh, no! A detention! I'll die for sure! Help me! Help! Save me..." With that, he collapsed in Peter's lap, who just looked surprised at this turn of events. Then Sirius jumped up with a small yelp. "Ewww," he announced, "Peter cooties!"
Remus just rolled his eyes, and began to read a book on werewolves in modern day Spain. He figured: If I ignore them, maybe, just maybe, they'll go away.
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3rd person
The teachers, now actually realizing that they weren't imagining the hat's silence, hurried over to the hat, still struggling to sing. The professors all began bustling around, consulting books, and whispering to one another. They began experimenting with spells, not knowing that there was one very satisfied fifth-year smiling happily at the chaos.
There! Chapter 2! I want to say thanks to Neko Kuroban, who wrote the brilliant description of Professor McGonagall.
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