Hello peoples,

I am new to fanfiction writing so I've decided to do a small experiment. I have placed two chapters of a story I have been thinking of. I would like the viewers of to help me out and read the first two chapters and review on them. If I find the reviews contain good constructive criticism that will help with my writing I will continue the story, if not I will delete the story and simply remain a viewer.

Thank you for your assistance

Loboloco