Hey guys! I hope you liked the chapter 3. I've been getting writers block for sometime and damn its annoying! I wish I can break this sooner than usual. The only way I can break it is playing games and that isn't helping much now. Any suggestions?

Also... Do any of you readers have a favorite character?

Anyway here's my responses for the review

Mastermind - They're likeable since they act cute. lol

here's chapter 3. Enjoy


Keito and the others had discovered a harpy village and met a harpy around their age named Pipi. As they introduced them Pipi saw some remains of the humans that were attacking Pipi. As she saw them she began to shake in fear from the earlier attack and teared a bit from the brutal nightmare.

"So who are those idiots?" Keito asked in confusion

Pipi cried a bit later after he asked his question

"Whats wrong?" Mona asked in a worried manner

"Those humans killed my parents!" Pipi cried

"Oh...I'm so sorry that happened" Mona said

"Yeah..." Kotta and Keito said in sadness

No one else said anything as they were waiting for Suki to say something. As soon as they turned Suki was nowhere to be found.

"Hey where did your sister go?" Pipi asked as she was still crying

"Oh Suki always does this...She's like a car that never runs out of gas and its on a bunch of crazy pills" Mona said as she helped Pipi up

"Should we go find her?" Pipi asked

"Find who?" Suki said behind them

"GAH!" Both Pipi and Mona shouted in astonishment

"You are one hyperactive little demon. You know that right?" Keito said with no emotion

"Anyway, Anyway, Anyway!" Suki shouted multiple times while jumping up and down in the snow with tons of energy

"Do you know where we can find a harpy fortress in these mountains? Our friend Tsukune got captured by your race" Mona asked

"Yes...But its a really long trip" Pipi said as it began to snow

"I don't care. We don't have much time... If our dad gets home before we do...We might never see sunlight again" Mona said while shaking in fear

"No worries Mona... after all we're the sons and daughters of the colossus king..." Kotta said

"Yeah your right! Were basically smarter than..." Mona got cut off

"Pop-tarts?" Suki asked in excitement

"Guh?" Kotta sighed loudly

"No Suki" Keito said

"Then maybe a bird?" Suki asked

"Excuse me?" Pipi asked in annoyance with her wings crossed

"Never mind... LETS GO, GO, GO!" Suki shouted with excitement as she skipped along in the snow

"So where is the snow fortress we're suppose to 'go, go, go'?" Mona asked while mocking her sister

"It's on the other side of the mountain" Pipi pointed out

"GREAT LETS GO!" Suki squealed as she skipped around in the snow

"By any chance did your sister have any kind of sugar?" Pipi asked

"WAY TOO MUCH!" Everyone shouted in unison

(To the harpy fortress)

Tsukune and Gin were handcuffed as they were being walked into the queens chamber. As they walked Tsukune took a quick look at the harpy women. To him they looked a bit excited about kidnapping him and Gin. They got to the Queens chamber doors and the doors opened up. Inside stood the harpy queen. She had long pink feathers on her wings and her chest and bottoms were both encased in pink bird feathers and a fancy light blue robe.

"Ahh... My fellow harpies have returned...And they have handsome men" The queen said as she was interested in both Tsukune and Gin

"Hey. How's it going" Gin said as he was hitting on the harpy queen

"Gin!" Tsukune shouted in disbelief

"What!? It's a hot girl..." Gin said defending himself

"It's a harpy... The race that kidnapped us..." Tsukune tried explaining

"The reason we kidnapped you both is that we're a dying race... We then basically have to make you both give us children" The queen said as she got off of her throne and walked towards both Tsukune and Gin with a smile on her face

"WHAT?!... NO I CAN'T HAVE CHILDREN! I HAVE A GIRLFRIEND!" Tsukune shouted

"YEAH SO DO I!" Gin also said

"Wait. I thought you got kicked out by your ex" Tsukune said

"Not now Tsukune..." Gin said while grinding his teeth

"It won't matter... Cause after you give us children... You can never leave this fortress again" The queen said as she grabbed Gin.

"I'll start with you first... The human can stay in one of our finest bedrooms" The queen said as she ordered her harpy guards to take Tsukune away to a bedroom to await his turn to help the queen have her children

As the door shut Gin shouted "OH CRAP! NO!"

(Back to Keito and his siblings. 5 hours after they left for the harpy fortress)

Keito, Mona, Kotta, Suki and Pipi were on their way to the harpy fortress. While everyone was walking in the snow. Suki was skipping while singing Jingle bells. Everyone else was getting annoyed by her singing

"Walking in the snow!"

"Suki" Keito said while getting annoyed

"In this forsaken cold"

"Stop singing..." Mona said also getting annoyed

"With our new bird friend"

"Stop it!" Kotta shouted

"AND I MIGHT LOOSE A TOE!" Suki ended

"SUKI!" Everyone shouted

"Yes?" She asked acting cute

"Please Don't sing!" Her siblings shouted

"Why?" Suki asked

"Because its annoying" Keito asked in a cranky mood

After a few hours nearing nighttime they were on the other side of the mountain with the Harpy Fortress in sight. unfortunately for them it's at the bottom of the mountain.

"Well... There's the harpy fortress..." Keito said in a shaky voice.

"Any idea on how to get there Mona?" Kotta asked

"I'm thinking I'm thinking" Mona said while thinking of a way to get everyone down

"Can I sing while you think?" Suki asked with puppy dog eyes and a sweet smile

"NO!" Everyone but Pipi shouted at once

So Mona began to think about a way to get everyone down to the fortress without alarming a bunch of harpy guards. Since Pipi is a harpy child she can fly her new friends. Unfortunately her size is too small to carry anyone to the fortress so flying everyone to the fortress is out of the question.

"I got an idea!" Kotta shouted all of a sudden

He then raised his hands and ice began to form. As it formed a block of ice he turned his hands into ice claws and began to grind the ice block. Turning it into a sleigh.

"That's actually a great idea" Mona said

Everyone else agreed to his sleigh idea and began to climb inside

"I'm driving!" Keito shouted

"OH NO YOU DON'T!" Mona and Kotta shouted at once

Suki and Pipi were on the back of the sleigh watching the 3 siblings fight. As they argued and fought the sleigh began to move forward.

"Wait are we moving?" Keito asked as he just noticed the sleigh moving

They then began to scream all the way down. Except for Suki. Shes been having fun all the way down the mountain

"LETS SING A SONG!" Suki shouted with joy

"SUKI! GIVE IT A BREAK!" Keito shouted

The sleigh began to move faster and faster down the hill as everyone began to hold on to each other screaming for dear life as they hit an icy ramp and went airborne. They screamed louder as the sleigh flew towards the Harpy Fortress. Except for Suki. She's still having fun. Even in intense danger.

(Inside the harpy fortress)

Tsukune was in the bedroom awaiting for the harpy queen to get him as soon as she was finished with the werewolf. He was frightened of what will happen to him after he's done. He didn't want to be wedded to anyone but Moka. Unfortunately he's way too nervous to ask her to marry him. He opened the door to get out of the bedroom only to get ambushed by 2 harpy guards

"Oh...It appears that this boy is very eager to have our queens children" One of the harpies said

"Indeed...Lets help him with his problem" The other harpy guard said while holding on to his pants

"WHAT?! NO, NO, NO! I HAVE A GIRLFRIEND!" Tsukune begged on his knees after he was sent back into his room with both guards inside.

"Just relax..." The harpy guard said in a seductive tone

"And let us..." The other harpy guard got cut off from a sudden hearing of screaming

"Do you hear something?" She asked

Both the harpies and Tsukune looked at the window only to see an oncoming ice sleigh. The screams got louder until...

(CRASH!) The sleigh broke through the window and was coming at both harpies

"OH CRAP!" Tsukine shouted as the sleigh crashed into him and the 2 harpies.

"AHHH! A HUMAN!" Keito screamed

"HI Tsukie!" Suki shouted in joy

"Keito? Mona? Kotta? Suki? Kids?! What the hell are you kids doing here?!" Tsukune asked in astonishment

"Its kind of a long story" Mona said a the sleigh began to make its way down stairs and coming right at a door

"Ummm... Do you kids know how to use the sleigh's brakes?" Tsukune asked as he and the 2 harpies began to freak out at the oncoming door

"Ummm brakes?" Keito asked

"You did install breaks on your ice sleigh right?" Tsukune asked

"No I kind of forgot to make brakes" Kotta said

"WERE GOING TO DIE!" Tsukune shouted in a panic attack

"OH SHOOT! THIS IS GOING TO HURT!" Pipi screamed

"I just went to the bathroom in my pants" Kotta said in fear

"And theres no pop-tarts on this sleigh ride!" Suki complained

(CRASH!)

They crashed into a royal dining room. A lot of food fell on them and both harpy guards and Tsukune were unconscious. As the kids saw Tsukune they began freaking out

"CAN THINGS GET ANY WORSE?!" Mona shouted out loud as a bunch of harpies began to surround the sons and daughters of the colossus king and the harpy child

"Get the girls out of the fortress but keep the boys here" a harpy shouted

"It just got worse." Pipi said with no emotion


There you have it. Keito and the others made it to the fortress and found Tsukune...Well sort of. Will they be able to get out or will the harpies stop the kids from rescuing Tsukune and Gin. Find out soon. Sorry for making you guys wait. I had a ton of shopping to do for Christmas. Does anyone have a favorite character? Just wondering

Read and review please and have a very Merry Christmas :D