Quick little thanks and something else
Thank you for all the reviews, I have no idea why chapter 1 showed that crap sentence at the bottom. Sorry about that if you were there for over a minute trying to figure out what it said. My computer's on the glitch.
Dear Mr/ Miss Anonymous, but serious.
I apologise for my crap grammar and spelling most of it is probably my fault, I appreciate your advice and will proof read my work from now, and will slow down to make it seem more 'realistic'
And I am still currently in school by the way.
Thank you for your very constructive criticism.
And a merry Christmas to you all.
