Lstormy10: Thanks for all of the constructive criticism from everyone who reviewed, especially MistiWhitesun.

Yoda: Sure, all you do is complement other people expect me.

Lstormy10: Yoda is just mad that there is someone wiser than him.

Yoda: Whatever, apprentice.

Lstormy10: So here is Chapter 3.


The barren wasteland stretched as farther than the eye can see. General Grievous turned around and raised his hand as a signal to stop the droids following close behind. "Droid, come over here." commanded General Grievous. The droid walked over, and General Grievous asked, "How much further to the construction site for the droid foundry?"

"By my calculations, it should be over that hill, General." answered the droid. While the droid was saying this, General Grievous jumped right over the giantic hill, and in front of him was....


Lstormy10: I know it was very short, but...

Yoda: He was acting wise by making you come back to read the next chapter.