Thank you so much for all of your kind views, so I decided why not give my fabulous readers an early update. Okay, so let me first say that in this update it will be the next day and something will happen...

The next chapter I am going to have a little Fourtris action, so be ready for it. Okay so let me get on with the story...Oh and also there will be a little M-rated thing in here maybe. I haven't decided to add it or not. You will have to just wait and see. Thanks again. Love all of my supporters and such!

-Maddie H.


{Dating Him in Paris: Chapter 3}

Pov: Tris

Bile creeps up my throat, as I push my head back into the toilet. Hangovers suck. "Tris?" Christina asked from the other room walking knocking gently on the door.

"Yeah?" I asked out of breath and exhausted from throwing up all of the alcohol I drunk last night.

"Are you feeling okay?" Christina asked opening the door a little bit to see what was going on with me.

"Nope," I said leaning back against the cold glass shower. Christina strolled over to me before putting her hands on her hips and rolling her eyes.

"Come on Tris you are obviously not fine and you also can't handle your alcohol and now some girl is wanting to fight you for taking her man," Christina mumbled the last part making it barely audible.

"What?" I asked looking up at her with confused eyes and I stood up next to her wiping my mouth in one sweep. Christina cringes at the throat up that was in the toilet. I put my hand over the flusher and watched it go down.

"I said that a girl named Marlene is now trying to get revenge because she saw you hanging with her man," Christina said in one loud outburst making me confused.

"Then why was he putting the moves on me last night if he has a girlfriend waiting for him at home?" I asked Christina who only shrugs her shoulders.

"Who knows a lot of these men around here are dogs they need more then one partner to survive," Christina snorted in an agitated voice.

"Okay I get it some guys are dog, but why?"

"Oh knows, but I do know one thing," Christina smiled before pinching the bridge of her nose.

"And what is that?" I asked with a smile getting closer to her only for her to back away from me.

"That you need to really brush your teeth before you scare away my boyfriend," Christina smirked. I smirked at her.

"So now he is your boyfriend?"

"Yea well he asked me out this morning when he came by to bring me some breakfast to eat," Christina commented while her cheeks were stained with a red color.

"Aww finally my Chris is growing up," I teased as I strolled over to the stove to grab some freshly, warm eggs already cooked.

"Shut up Trissy," Christina mocked back using the horrible nickname she came up with.

"Don't you dare call me Trissy," I snorted crossing my arms and looking up at the ceiling making Christina chuckle.

"As long as you call me Chris, I will defiantly call you Trissy even around that guy who was staring at you all night,"

My eye went immediately on her after she said that guy. "What guy?" I asked narrowing my eyes at her.

"You know that guy named Uriah," Christina said hitting her elbow against my arm.

"Yes I know what guy you are talking about, but he wasn't into me at all I pretty sure he has a thing for a girl who gave me a big glare while we were dancing," I reminded with her a small smirk playing on my face.

"Whatever Tris,"

"Marlene does like him and I am not going to be a kind of girl who steals a girls crush away from them," I said putting my hands up like I was surrendering.

"Okay I get, but I am still keeping the bet up there. I can even bet some money now," Christina grinned at me.

"What bet?"

"Tris you are a horrible liar you know what bet I am talking about, and now I know another thing. You can even agree with me most likely,"

"Oh and what is that?" I asked smiling.

"That you defiantly going to be paying up at the end of the month and I will be smiling at your virgin body,"

"Ha very funny Christina, but I pretty sure it is going to be completely opposite except I will be looking at your skanky self," I commented with a smirk dangling on my face.

"Oh we will see about that," Christina challenged rubbing the palm of her hands together with grin now plastered on her face.

"I guess I will be seeing thirty bucks in my hand at the end of the month," I said.

Christina chuckled at this comment. "Oh we will definitely see who is the chicken by the end of the month,"

"Oh and how do you think you are going to stop me from finding this perfect guy?" I asked.

"I won't have to stop you because there are no perfect guys in Paris. I am pretty sure all of these guys are out to have the time of their life," Christina explained grinning wider the wingspan of an airplane.

"Okay Christina so I guess you are saying that Will only wants you for sex?"

Christina eyes shut in frustration. "Will is not with me for that. He truly has feelings for me,"

"Oh yea keep telling yourself like you have been telling me," I smiled at her already knowing I was getting under her skin.

"Fine Tris you win this one. I am only giving up because I have to meet Will in half an hour," Christina explained as she started for the door.

"Yeah sure," I yelled back at her making her turn around. She gives me a small eye roll before walking through the door and closing it.


I walked on the side of the street eating the famous Crepe that was to die for. The gooey cheese coming out from the bread along with a thinly piece of ham between the slices of melty cheese. The dark pathway giving me a couple of shivers while walking on it. Something was off by this area and I could tell by the way it looked physically. A loud snap noise came from the back of the dark path making me head snap up. I scan the area behind me before taking a step stepping on a stick making it snap. I jump back after hearing the noise. "Calm down Tris nothing is going to happen," I smoothed myself down before walking ahead.

"What are you doing at this time girl?" a man asked from behind me. I turn around to see a man behind me that had a grin plastered on his face.

"Who are you?" I asked in a scared little girl voice slightly stepping backwards away from the maniac that was now laughing at the actions I was doing.

"What are you scared of me little girl?" he asked stepping closer toward me. I shake my head before hitting the wall behind me. I gulp as I looked at the man who was creeping up closer to me. I could smell his bad breath from the place I was standing. I close my eyes hard making sure that I couldn't see the man in front of me. "What are you doing here all by yourself?"

Judging by how close his voice sounded he was standing right in front of me by now. I felt a shock go through my arm as he touched it with his dirty hands. "Please," I begged.

"Mmm please beg again it turns me on," the man whispered in an awful voice making me cringe at the sound of his voice. He sounded like death had already overcame him.

"Please," I begged again. I felt his hand slide up the new skirt I had gotten. Cursing to myself wishing I had not worn the beautiful skirt that was now going to get torn to pieces. He rips them off in one tug trapping me.

"Stop begging you are now sounding like a wuss," the man commented before pushing himself against me making me hit the brick wall behind me. Pain. My whole back felt tingling probably from the impact of the bricks.

"Hey what do you think you are doing!" a voice yelled from behind us making me whisper a small thank you to the voice.

"I was umm...with my girlfriend," the man said with a slight British accent. I shake my head as I opened my eyes to see a very familiar man. The quiet one that was at the club last night.

"Let her go Mike," Four demanded walking closer to us. Mike drops me on the ground as he approaches Four too.

"What do you think you are trying to pull Four. I was just having fun with this girl and I am pretty sure she is having some fun too," Mike smirked before looking back at me with a fake smile. I bite my lips in fear. Four looks at me before anger fills him.

"You think she enjoys this. She is scared out of her mind," Four yelled before pointing over to my fave expresses that showed I was scared. Mike looked over at me before he was pushed onto the cement by Four. Four punched him in the face.

I look down to see blood spilling from Mike's face. He touched his face before letting out a growl grabbing Four's legs and pulling him to the ground. Four stood up and stomped his face in befire looking at me. I had already put on my skirt that was now dirty. The tears came down my face. "Are you okay?"

"No," I let out before he walks over to me and he inspects my face.

"What are you doing out at this place. You know that this place is bad news right?"

I shake my head before I mentally kick myself forgetting to ask what parts of this town is bad. I forgot that each city had their bad part and I had just walked into the bad part of Paris. "What are you doing here?" I asked.

He shakes his head. "I was suppose to meet my friend around here and this so happens to be a way toward the destination, so consider yourself lucky," Four stated. My head started spinning I looked up at Four to see that he had two faces.

"Four," I said before I collapsed into his arms feelings light headed I felt something warm and sticky on my backside before everything went blank and dark.


I finally did this chapter. I have been waiting to do this chapter because this is the way to bring Tris and Four together, but when writing it I thought of another way to bring them together and you will have to wait and see.

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