Oh my gosh! Guys! I was seriously excited when i saw how much you guys liked it!

SO this chapter is a bit short but it's not entirely finished im just prepping for some holiday family time and working on the chapters of Revertere, so tell me if you like this so far, what should i do or add or what would you like to see!


John stepped back wiping sweat from his brow as he examined his handy work, a large stack of black garbage bags holding darkbrown and crumbling leaves formed a small pile.

There was a constant creak of a rocking chair and a soft voice singing a lullaby softly followed by grumbling and the blaring sound of the news.

Mrs and mr Jarden had to be the oldest couple int he neighborhood, they never had any kids since Mrs Jarden wasn't able, but had many cats but couldn't really take care of everything sinc e they were at the painfully old stage.

in the lest edges of winter John had offered to help.

He remembered briefly before SBURB was even a thought in his mind, his dad suggesting doing work around the neighborhood for some pocket money (he was a spoiled brat when he was younger wasn't he?).

And now, two months before SBURB would be released, John had managed to save up enough money to get his own Wallet Sylladex with a few extra cards. He stored an assortment of useful and somewhat useless items in his sylladex varying in size and usefulness.

Unlike the wallet he had borrowed from his dad,his was a bit more specialized, it had a set of two main cards and a card where the last used item would be placed. It also had options for 'locking' the wallet where it would be bound to him and only him.
it was actually pretty nice looking with dark brown leather engraved with a blue 'J' a silver chain attached to his belt loop.

Along with the wallet he had gotten a better pair of glasses and a stronger pair for later, he remembered always having trouble seeing out of his old pair during the game sometime after the game officially became 'Doomed'

*ding!
Johns heart jumped as his hand rammed into his pocket removing the 'borrowed' PDA.

Pesterchum flashed from green to red then back to green.

GG:John! Hello!

GG:John? Oh.. I guess your busy i'll talk to you later! Bye john!

TG:Dude, where are you?

turntechgodhead is now an idle chum...

tentacleTherapist is now Rancorous!

"Geesh Rose.. what's up with you?" John murmured eye darting to the last of the leaves scattered in the last corner of the yard and pocketed the PDA, he had a job to do.


=Belly flop on the bed, John.

John did so, immediately regretting it, as his whole body ached and what felt like liquid fire racing through his veins, the shower had helped very little.

John groaned and hooked an arm around his pillow resting his chin on it as he retrieved his PDA, moving painfully slow.

TG:John? Seriously what are you doing.

TT: John answer Jade, she's worried. Your not hurt are you?

GG: John! Are you ok?

GG: John!

John winced and eased himself into a sitting position as he opened up Jades pesterlog.

GT: I'm fine Jade, I was cleaning yards in my neighborhood.

GG: Oh, if your sure...

GG; Are you sure your alright John, you haven't been acting like yourself...

John groaned, of course they noticed! He wasn't as goofy or referencing his movies, he'd been so busy he had forgotten to act like himself.

GT: I'm fine Jade, I just decided to..grow up a bit, but i'm still the same old John!

GG: Ok...i have to go feed Beq, by john :)

GT: Bye Jade.

gardenGnostic ceased pestering ghostyTrickster.

=bang your head off the wall from your stupidity!
No! John could barely move and even if he could he wouldn't dare do anything that stupid, it wasn't worth the headache anyways.

John huffed and slid down to lay on his back staring up at the ceiling his eyes settling on those ridiculous drawing over his walls.

It has begun.


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So what do you guys think about the above part? I was thinking of ever two or so chapters answering some reviews at the bottom, is it to weird or would you like to see that every two or so chapters?

Well I want to wish you all a MERRY CHRISTMAS! And the biggest gift for me was logging on and seeing all your reviews I'm so happy thank you all so so much!