Alright guys after a while I got a lot done and a LOT of ideas from a lot of yall and a couple of friends. Well you know all that legal shit. I do not own Naruto; if I did Naruto would be the next author of Icha Icha Paradise in the manga.
'Thinking'
"Speaking"
"Demon talking or jutsu names"
'Demon thinking'
"Type of sword stance"
Time to start:
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(In the Classroom)
"Team one is..." Naruto then tuned Iruka out until he heard on of his friends name until then he would meditate and talk to the blasted fox. 'Hey Kyubi do you think that the four of us will make a team? I know that a four Genin team with a Jounin is different but I mean we could be the best. We all have strengths that compliment each other.'
"Yeah kit, yall would make the best team since the Sannin, you have Hinata, which has perfect chakra control that could be a ninja that could rival Tsunade's expertise with that Byakugan of hers. That Itakame he is a prodigy of Genjutsu. At such a young age he has mastered many advanced techniques that many Jounin could not do." Naruto nodded and the Kyubi continued
"Now Temi, she could do seals as good as the Yondiame at his age. Now I do not think that she could surpass him but she is at least Jounin level in that field. Then there is you, the Ken and Ninjutsu god-send. You keep training under Hayate and Jiraiya and you could master more than the Sandiame knows."
Naruto could understand all that the Kyubi said and then he heard Iruka "Team seven will consist of…"
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(In the council meeting)
Kakashi Hatake was standing infront of the civilian council, wondering why the hell he was here, he knew that he had a Genin team and for once he didn't want to be late.
"Kakashi," a scared man with an arm missing and a scar on his face started "we understand that you are taking a Genin as a team this year are we correct?" Kakashi was about to respond 'wait, "a Genin" '
"Wait you said a Genin, I am taking a team not one." The council looked smugly at Kakashi "No Kakashi you will e taking the last Uchiha as an apprentice. And if you refuse, we can make sure that your life outside of missions will be a fuckin' hell"
Kakashi sweatdropped, did they know who they were talking to? "Now look here you dicks, now I may owe it to Obito to train the last loyal Uchiha but Obito was one to stress team work. So no I won't take him as a fucking apprentice. If anything I would much rather Naruto."
The council went about berserk "why the fuck would you rather train the Kyubi brat rather than Uchiha-sama?" "IT'S THAT FUCKING REASON! YOU TREAT HIS AS HE IS THE NEXT KAMI HERSELF! WHY DON'T YALL SEE THAT HE S JUST A STUCK UP PRICK THAT ONLY GETS WHAT HE WANTS BECAUSE OF PEOPLE LIKE YOU. AND IF YOU WANT TO KNOW WHY I WANT TO TRAIN NARUTO THEN WHY DON'T YALL JUST LOOK AT MY SENSIE AND LOOK AT NARUTO AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT THAT!"
The civilian council did not know what he was talking about. Sure they had seen the fourth Hokage but what did that have to do with Naruto. They just shook it off as Kakashi trying to get out of training the Uchiha.
"What ever Kakashi, you will train Sasuke or else." Kakashi sighed "whatever just leave me the fuck alone," Kakashi was walking out when he turned his head "o and Sasuke will always be second to Naruto, and maybe even third to him and Itakame. " He left the room and now planned to e several hours late.
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"Due to circumstances "'fuckin council' "We will have a team of four." Naruto's ears perked up when he heard this 'could it really happen?' Naruto thought. "Team 7 will consist of Hinata Hyuuga, Temi Nakashi, Itakame Ryuu no Kunshu (1), and Naruto Uzumaki."
The four of them almost jumped for joy when they heard that, they missed the Jounin that would be their sensei. "Team 8 will be Shino Aburame, Kiba Inuzuka, and Sakura Haruno. You will be under Kurenei Yuhi" Sakura groaned that she was not on Sasuke's team. "And finally team ten will reinstate the ino-shika-cho team with Asuma Sarutobi as sensei. And Sasuke just wait and you'll see why."
After about 10 minutes bearded man smoking a cig walked into the room and said "10 your with me meet me outside now." And he disappeared in a swirl of leaves. 'Where the hell did the leaves come from, were inside a damned room.' Kiba thought
Then less than 5 minutes later a woman with piercing red eyes and a body that would throw most men in a loop. "Hello team 8, meet me in the front of the school under the tree." And she faded away from sight.
'Ah the Genjutsu mistress of Konoha, I really want to train with you.' Itakame thought with a smile and looked right where Kurenei was and winked. She then flickered out of the room wondering how he was able to see her.
Then another 5 minutes after that Naruto and the rest heard the door open and turned. In the door stood….Hayate Gekkou. Naruto looked shell shocked; he would have his father figure as a sensei. Naruto could not believe it. (A little pun there)
"Um team 7 I guess, lets all go to the roof." And Hayate left via a shushin. Naruto and all the others followed suit and left a seething Uchiha. 'How the hell does that blonde bastard know how to do something I don't know? It doesn't matter, I'm going to steal all of them and kill you' Sasuke thought with a grim smirk on his face.
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"Well why don't we get to know each other a little better, even though yall seem to know each other well enough. Okay you far left you go first." Temi stood up straighter "I'm Temi, I like sushi and Itakame-Kun,"she said the last one so that only Itakame could hear, and he blushed "I hate perverts and those that think themselves better by just a name. My dream is to help all my friends achieve their goals"
Hayate nodded and pointed to the now blushing Itakame "I'm Itakame Ryuu no Kunshu, I like my friends and Temi-Chan. I dislike assholes and arrogant pricks. My hobbies are eating sushi and helping friends my dream is to rebuild the dragon lord clan." 'Fuck got too keep this out of the council; don't want him to turn into a reading stock, if what I heard is true they are a very powerful clan.' "Okay now you Hyuuga."
"I'm Hinata Hyuuga, I like cinnamon buns and Naruto-kun," yet again only Itakame heard her. "My hobbies are training with Naruto-kun and learning my clans taijutsu style. My dream is to help a certain ninja."
Hayate looked from Hinata then to Naruto and smile deviously at them. He knew that Naruto was one of Jiriaya's most faithful reader, and always got the new ones months in advance. 'Oh how payback is a bitch.' Hayate thought.
"Now Naruto." "I'm Naruto Uzumaki I like my friend especially Hinata-chan. My hobbies are reading and training, my dream is to become the best in the world and help everyone here achieve their goals. No matter what it may cost me in the end." Hayate smiled he liked this team. He knew they would be great.
"Okay now we're done here meet me at training ground 7 four your Genin exam." Hayate waited for the yelling but it never came. They all looked as if they all knew it was going to happen Hayate then said" did yall know that this was going to happen."
They all looked at him and Itakame spoke out "well the exams were easy that almost anyone with a little brain would pass and I look forward to the exam. I think we could all pass if we try to do it together." Hayate looked surprised a fresh pre-Genin was able to see the test for what it was going to be.
"Well I look forward to tomorrow and maybe teaching you if yall pass." He then turned to leave and then said over his shoulder "oh and this test has a 66.6% failure rate so good luck and be there at 8" and he sushined off of the room
The team was about to leave when they saw a silver haired Jounin standing in front of him. He looked extremely mad and had out an orange book in his hand that Naruto knew what it was. The Jounin was about to walk pass them when one said something that got his attention. "hey yall 3 can go I want to talk to Kakashi here for a while."
They nodded and left for their homes. Kakashi was wondering how did Naruto know his name whenever he did not tell the kid nor did the Sandiame. "Tis a good book isn't it. How far you got into that book?"
Kakashi looked at him and said "it's my 3rd time reading it and yes tis a very good book." Kakashi was about to walk away again when the blonde boy said something that would change both of their lives forever "I know about my family." Kakashi stood frozen, how did the kid know it was a SS-rank secret that not even the council knew about. "well" Kakashi started "who would be your parents, I thought you were an orphan?"
"That's what I thought but when Hayate went on his date with Yuugo-san I found a letter and read it. I was in a shock until Hayate and Yuugo-san came in and came straight to me. They then sat me down and told me anything about them I wanted to know." Kakashi nodded he liked how Hayate took the boy in and looked after him. "Then I found out something that shocked me even more. Jiriaya of the Sannin is my Godfather, and my Godmother is Tsunade of the Sannin."
Kakashi's eyes widened if he heard right, this boys godparents were 2 of the 3 Sannin. If he played his cards right he could surpass the Yondiame in jutsu and strength. Then when Naruto was walking off Kakashi and Naruto heard a rustle in the tree to the left of them. Then Naruto left just thinking it was a leaf ninja, but Kakashi knew better. After Naruto left, Kakashi sushined where the ninja was heading.
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The ninja was heading out of the east gate when Kakashi appeared right in front of him. "Iwa huh, well now that you know who Naruto is I'm afraid that I can't let you leave." The Iwa Nin jumped back and was ready to fight.
Nothing was going to stop him; they could ensure that no other type of flash would be let to live. "Well Kakashi of the sharingan, I must say that I am honored that you would come after me but, I must be going." The Iwa Nin was about to go away when Kakashi interrupted him.
"Well if you know who I am then you should know that it wouldn't be that easy." Kakashi said then he …vanished? The Iwa Nin then turned around and his face ran into a fist. He flew back and hit a tree, hard. The hit left an imprint and the Iwa Nin fell down off the tree and stood up shakily and knew that he was screwed.
He may have been a Jounin himself, but nowhere near the caliber of Kakashi. Kakashi was known all threw the Elemental Nations as one of the deadliest people in the world. He was only known in about two at the most and he was known as the "Rock Golem"
He could make his stone clones grow up to 12 feet in height an almost invincible to all but electric and water attacks. Now Kakashi knew who he was and mad his patented eye smile at him. "Well this isn't going to be a fun match unless you show me why you are called "rock golem" now."
The rock golem flinched when he heard this because he knew that it was true. Soo he bit his thumb and started going threw handsigns almost as fast as Kakashi was but Kakashi finished first and pushed his hand against the ground "Summoning technique: double Immobilization" After Kakashi stated that the ground around the rock golem started to crack then two huge dogs jumped up and bit him on each side of the neck.
The dogs hit a nerve that immobilized the Ninja, and made him fall face first in the dirt. Kakashi walked up to the ninja in a kind of strut. "Well it looks like you are a few wars short of experience till you equal up to me now how about I take you to Ibiki so that you could tell us who put you up to this" Kakashi said with a little humor in his voice.
The Iwa Nin was visibly shaking was Kakashi pulled him down the street by one of his legs. He then walked for about 20 minutes till he was infront of Ibiki and said "This Iwa Nin has information valuable enough to start a war with the leaf if Iwa ever found out. So if you could please get all you can out of him and then end his miserable life. "
Kakashi was then walking away as Ibiki took the Ninja into one of the spare rooms and started doing what he did best and 30 minutes later the leaf had the Ninja's body on the way back to where it was from.
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Kakashi appeared in a room where one, Sasuke Uchiha was, and looked at the boy with an unimpressed look in his eye. The boy was nothing special, besides what may run threw his veins. "Bout time you got here so what am I going to be doing." Sasuke asked demanding an answer. Kakashi looked at the boy with a stare that was laced with killing intent.
Sasuke fell to the ground gasping for breath. "Now listen you arrogant fuck, I may have been ordered to take you as an apprentice but don't think that I wont kill you if you betray us. And I know the real reason that you brother killed your entire clan, and I for one do not blame him one bit."
Sasuke was about to go crazy his sensei knew why Itachi did what he did and agreed with why he did it. "I demand to know why he did it, NOW!" Kakashi once again looked at Sasuke with the KI stare and he was gasping for breath once again.
"Now look here you bastard, I will tell you but know this I am telling you for your own benefit not for fear of what will happen if I don't. Now Itachi was one of the best ninjas in the village and really could have become Hokage if he wanted to, but he was one that hated the way that his clan was acting. They were stuck-up as a whole thinking that their damn blood automatically made then better."
Sasuke smiled thinking that 'damn right I'm better than anyone else even this grey haired bastard infront of me.' Kakashi noticed the smirk and sent a blast of KI tword Sasuke who threw up because of the thickness and intensity of the KI. "Now, know this Sasuke, I'm a Jounin for a reason and just so you know" Kakashi raised his Hiate-ate and opened his eye and shocked Sasuke.
In his eye was a fully matured sharingan with 3 tomes and they were swirling fast mesmerizing Sasuke and making him furious at the same time 'How can this nobody have something as great as a sharingan, it should be mine!' once again Kakashi noticed his look and told him about how he got it and why he didn't want to train one person but how the council made him.
Sasuke looked smugly at Kakashi who punched Sasuke in the face and sent Sasuke into the wall. "Now listen I may have to teach you but you will regret having me as a teacher, well that is if you can handle my teaching methods." That last statement made Sasuke shiver the way that Kakashi had said that made him rethink about having one of the best jounin's teaching him.
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(The next morning)
Naruto woke up and went into the living room. There he saw a note on the table "Naruto, I went out to see about something with the Hokage and then I will be heading straight to the training grounds so hurry up and get there after you read this. Later Hayate."
' Fuck that im going to eat and then take my time over there, okay maybe not take my time but still like hell im not going to eat. ' thought Naruto. Naruto then sat down and took an apple out and started to eat it along with some toast walking tword the training ground he got there 2 hours early and started going threw most of the katas that he knew.
He only had to wait 2 hours till the rest of his team showed up and decided to talk about how to handle the test. "Well if it something about beating him, that could only mean teamwork, I mean how a team of fresh Genin could take out an elite Jounin like Hayate-sensei is beyond me. It doesn't even make since with teamwork but that would be the only plausible way." Itakame stated and all the others nodded and started going over many other possible ways that they could be tested.
At exactly 8 o'clock Hayate walked out of the forest and stood and watched what was going on. Naruto and Itakame were sparing using only taijutsu, no swords for Naruto, and it looked like Itakame was winning this battle. Hayate stood back and watched as the spar came to an end.
Itakame made a low sweeping kick to take out Naruto's legs but Naruto jumped over it slightly and landed on his hands. He then brought his feet around to kick Itakame in his blind spot when Itakame's arm blocked the kick and threw Naruto away from him. Naruto landed gracefully and went into the Iron Fist style which surprised Hayate because he only knew of 2 people that knew that style.
Itakame saw the change in style and charged in carefully to see if he could find a weakness in that style. When Itakame came within arms reach Naruto moved and blocked all of Itakame's moves and went for a kick in the chest when Itakame ducked under.
'Naruto sure is slow today, I wonder why?' Itakame thought when he grabbed Naruto's leg and threw him to the ground and stood on his back with a hand to the back of Naruto's neck "It over I could paralyze you from here." "Yeah I lose this one good job, but I kept my weights on for this match." Hayate and Itakame's eyes widened after hearing that.
'He had those damned weights on, no wonder he was so slow' Itakame thought while Hayate was thinking 'Wow he could utilize the Iron Fist to the fullest like Lee will be able to after a while.' "Hey Naruto" Hayate said "How heavy are your weights now?"
"800 on the legs and about 450 on the arms, why do you ask?" Everyone there was in shock. He could move almost as fast as they could, save Hayate and Itakame, with his weights on. Hayate laughed and then turned to the soon-to-be Genin. "Hey Hayate-sensei why did you have to see the Hokage today?" Naruto said.
"Well to be honest it was to see what test I will have to give yall."
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9 Jounin's stood infront of the Hokage as they all took a number from the Hokage's desk. Hayate looked down and saw 2 and looked at the Hokage who smiled at him. 'He knows what I have to do?' Hayate thought.
"Now that you all have your numbers you can look to see what type of test you will have to give your Genin's. Now it could be up to you how you test them in that field but you should not make it that hard, they are Genin's after all" the Hokage said as he laid a piece of paper for all to see.
1-5 teamwork while 5-9 works with tracking and retrievals. Hayate winced when he saw what he had to test them on. It was the one that failed most teams. Teamwork was one of the hardest things to teach people especially little kids.
Hayate then left to go to the training ground while thinking how to test them, then he came across the spar that Naruto and Itakame had.
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'That's it!' Hayate thought. "well for your exam you all have to hit me once, but know this I will not take it easy on you. Come at me with the intent to kill or you will surely fail. And whoever does not land a hit by noon will go back to the academy."
All of team 7 shivered at the thought of sitting threw another of Iruka's lectures about the history of Konoha. They then smirked when Hayate yelled start and seemingly disappeared. Then the four lept off into the forest to get a plan ready.
After 1 hour they had a fail proof plan to let them all hit Hayate…Or so they hopped. Temi went up a few hundred feet infront of Hayate and hid her chakra while she set down 5 different seals that would be essential to the plan. She then signaled that she was done and Naruto and Itakame started on their part of the trap.
They both appeared in the front of Hayate back to back and looked Hayate in the eye. Hayate then got into a defensive stance when they both charged him. They both went into a synchronized set of attacks making Hayate back up when he felt his arm go numb. He looked behind him and saw Hinata with her Byakugan active in the Taijutsu stance that the Hyuuga's were so well known for.
They all forced him back into the set of seals that Temi set up earlier. Hayate cursed when he saw the explosion seal and jumped back to avoid the blast when he couldn't move.
He looked down and saw that he was in the middle of a wide spread seal and saw the four members come out of the trees. Hayate looked at them and smiled and then disappeared in a puff of smoke "Damned shadow clones" Naruto said when he started to look for Hayate again. They could see him in an open with his eyes open scanning the area to find them.
He then jumped when Naruto's hands flew out the ground intending to pull Hayate down. "wow that was good Naruto but not good…" Hayate couldn't finish because Itakame appeared out of nowhere and kicked at Hayate but Hayate blocked it with his hand.
Then he saw he couldn't move again and turned to see why. At is feet was a black stick substance that would not move no matter what force Hayate tried it wouldn't break. Then he followed the trail up to Naruto who was on a 5 foot toad that had straight black armor and had a very long pike that was easily 25 foot long held in his hand.
The frog then went back to the summoning realm and Naruto strolled up to where Hayate stood almost completely covered by the black substance. It now covered his whole lower body and was slowly moving to cover his upper body.
Then Itakame, Temi, and Naruto walked up and hit Hayate in the bottom of his legs where he could not defend them at. Naruto then made the black substance recede and Hayate had full control of his body once more.
Hayate looked at the four infront of him and smiled. "Okay you all managed to hit me, but do you know why you were able to hit me?" "Teamwork" everyone said at once and Hayate nodded.
"Yeah, know that almost every ninja can be taken down if you work as a team, but that doesn't mean that you can defeat everyone but it helps you in odds. Well I have to go and report back to the Hokage so I want all of you to meet here at 6 in the morning so we can train for a while and then go and officially start missions as team 7"
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Hayate left via Shushin and appeared in the Hokage's office along with the other 9 that were there earlier. "Well now I want a report on how everyone did" the Hokage said.
They went around the room in order of the teams. After 6 failed teams he got to Hayate. "Team 7 passed with flying colors Hokage-sama." "Oh really how did they pass if you don't mind telling us."
"not at all now, Right after I started the test they took an hour to make a plan that was almost up to par with what the Nara can make. Hinata hit me with the Gentle Fist and disabled my right arm. Naruto and Itakame made me step into seals by Temi that immobilized my clone that I switched myself with. Then Naruto used a black substance that ended the match."
Sarutobi chuckled "very well let's continue team 8?" "Passes Hokage-sama, they are a good tracking team and Sakura could very well be as good as I am in Genjutsu." Everyone was shocked to hear that "okay now team 10." "Passed barely, they almost failed if it wasn't for the Nara. He made a plan that was nothing shy of ingenious I want him to take an IQ test just to see, choji used his clan jutsu as did Ino so they passed." Asuma said. "Very well we hade 9 genin this year"
"9 Hokage-sama?" "Yes Kurenei 9 the council went behind my back and made Kakashi take Sasuke as an apprentice, and from what I heard he was not very pleased with it." everyone sweatdropped, they never saw an angry Kakashi and most wanted to be there with a camera.
"Very well now the meeting is over now get ready to resume missions tomorrow." All the Jounin nodded and left to let the Hokage finish all of his paperwork.
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"Fuckin cat!" screamed Naruto, as he pulled Tora off of his face. Itakame and Hayate were rolling on the ground holding their sides while laughing. Hinata looked on in horror at what was unfolding and Temi took the cat out of Naruto's hand.
"Now Naruto," Temi started "you can't go and kill the cat, and then we will fail the mission and not get paid." Naruto nodded but looked the cat dead in the eye that made the cat shiver and burrow into the chest of Temi.
The walk back to the Hokage's office was uneventful except for the many glares that Naruto received that made everyone on his team, save Hayate, wondering 'Why do they all look at you like that, you never did anything to deserve this, maybe we can make it all better.'
As the approached the room they heard an argument coming from the room where they receive the missions, "Why the hell can't I have a better mission…OW!" Then team 8 walked out of the room with Kiba sporting a huge lump on the back of his head, grumbling.
Team 7 walked pass them and stood infront of the Hokage, while he addressed them. "Well team 7 you all have completed them least amount of missions to qualify for a low c-rank mission, what do you say."
Hayate then spoke "Hokage-sama do you really think that they are ready?" The Hokage nodded "You have a team that could rival my students in a few years. Temi with seals, Itakame in Genjutsu, Naruto with Kenjutsu, and Hinata with Taijutsu. You each have a specialty person on your team."
Hayate nodded and took the scroll to see what they had to do when a drunk walked threw the door and looked at team 7. "These are the brats that will be protecting me, they look like they cannot even protect themselves, especially that kid with white hair."
As soon as he said that Itakame disappeared and reappeared behind the drunk with a kunai at his throat. "Itakame calm down that is the man we are to be protecting,Tazuna right?" The man nodded and Hayate turned to his team and said "You have 3 hours meat us at the west gate and be prepared.
In three hours everybody was there and they all set out unto the land of waves, where nobody knew what to suspect.
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A/N: Okay now that's done, I have had a lot of good ideas along with a lot with the help of my friends that will come soon. Well for the teams I took Primus2021's idea but tweaked it a little.
Btw I have had people saying I've made Naruto to powerful, well I've read some that made Naruto in g to a GOD, a real fuckin god. I mean I may have made Naruto powerful but look at some facts after he had a somewhat competent teacher, Jiraiya before Chunin exam final, he accually learned pretty fast.
Then the arc after 2 ½ years he was on par with Kakashi. So with like 10 years of training with more than competent teachers he should be that fuckin good.
Not that I don't agree with you that Naruto should not be that powerful, I just based my improvement on facts and not some freaky shit happening like him turning into a vampire or the god of blood.
And if yall have any ideas give em' to me and I may or may not use them but I will give credit where credit is due.
Well later, Skeets
