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Chapter 3 Tragedy
: If you humans are great, why are you letting your kind starve? :
"Surprise!" a young cub yelled in my ear. The cub was Taka, as you apes call him.
He's been lively the last few weeks. He told us that he was the second born son of the Life forsaken Ahadi. We found out he had a brother named Mufasa, and three friends, Sarabi, Sarfinia, and Zira. He jabbered on how he wants to be king, his eyes looking around for the next dumb pup to be his stooge. He's taken a sort a fonding to Shenzi. Why? You filthy apes want to know?
I've seen his jade eyes look lustful at my best friend, he got a little excited in the nether regions. Yes you dumb humans, a erection. Big deal. If you were me, you'd see wildebeest, Zebra, Antelope, and even my clan. Humping the ever-loving meat out of their mates, I have confronted him. He backed away.
"I didn't know, honest!" he gulped. You better be glad that I'm caring. I let him go. A couple days into where mating season starts, the wanna-be virgin hyenas high-tail outta here. Shenzi is one of them. So I drooped of a small puddle. Tracing with a claw my heart. You don't know? Every mammal hates it. Loneliness. Of course we males are lonely. No female only mates to get rid of this torture.
I went with Ed to hunt, we gotta get out minds of mating. We found wildebeest. We knew that the lions were mating. So the coast was clear. Ed suddenly pounced on the meaty flesh. " ah yeah!" he yelled! He laughed as he tried to scale the elephant, I ran along side, trying to divert the idiot mammal to move to the outlands.
"woah, WO-" i heard Ed. I saw him, flying though the air. He landed on his head with a deafening "CRACK!" I winced as i let our prey go. His skull was cracked and bleeding. I took him to the only animal that would help him. Raffiki.
He nodded and took Ed up. "We shall not speak of this, when this is though." he told me.
I ran to see Banzai, he best friend. Banzai had a look of terror on his face as I told him what happened.
"hey Hatari hey Banzai!" called the prettiest voice you could imagine. What? You don't know who the flipping animal that is? It's Shenzi.
"Hey," I said as I licked her cheek.
"Ed just got.." 'her eyes grew the size of the elephant's. We raced to the tree.
Raffiki's face looked grave. "I'm very sorry." he sighed. His brain was squished so far down, he will never be smart again, he still has emotions though, he is awake, but only can speak, well I don't know. His head is healed, I'd teach him some words if i was a hyena."
Ed was never the same after that. His duty was given to another hyena. Uzeraz ditched him, and his parents had two pups to lose interest in him, call it cruel, but you don't see us have doctors. We don't have a magical substance that will cure all of us. Banzai was heart-stricken to, his mate of two days passed away. Davala was the strongest hyena other then my friend. What surprised me the most, was sure to come.
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A/N I hoped you son's of apes like it. REVIEW
