The Golden Shinobi
Chapter 3:
Team Seven were all sitting on the roof of the Academy on the opposite side of their Jonin. On the far left sat Son Goku, to his right sat Naruto Uzamaki, next to him was Sakuta Haruno and finally, Sasuke Uchiha was on the far right.
""Alright, why don't you introduce yourselves one at a time." The silver hairedJonin said as he leaned against the rail.
"Introduce ourselves," Sakura began saying confused. "What are we suppose to say?"
"Things you like, things you hate, dreams for the future, hobbies. Things like that." Replied the Jonin as he crossed his arms.
"Why don't you tell us stuff first? I mean before we talk tell us about you so we can see how it's suppose to work." Asked Naruto.
"Me?," he pointed to himself. "I'm Kakashi Hatake. Things I like and things I hate," there was a pause. "I don't feel like telling you. My dreams for the future, never really thought about it. As for my hobbies, I have alot of hobbies."
"Well that was kinda useless, all he ended up was telling us his name." Sakura said to Team Seven.
"Now it's your turn," Kakashi looked at the four shinobi. "You on the right, tell us about yourself."
Goku looked at Kakashi and began to speak. "My name is Son Goku and I like to eat, fight strong opponents and train. My dislikes are people who try and hurt the ones I care about," His expression went serious for a moment. "My dream is to fight a really strong opponent that will pish me to my very limit and beyond. My hobbies are kind of like my likes." He chuckled at the end giving his signature Son Grin.
Kakashi looked at the boy with no real feeling. "Hm, so he's Son Goku. The one from a different realm eh? This will be intersting." He thought to himself.
Naruto was the next up. "Believe it!," he moved his headband around. "I'm Naruto Uzamaki. I like instant ramen in a cup and I really like the ramen Iruka Sensai got me at the Irchiraku Noodle Shop, but I hate the three minute you have to wait after pouring the water in the ramen cup. My hobbie is eating different type of ramen and comparing them and my future dream is to be the greatest Hokage. Then the whole village will stop disrespecting me and start treating me like I'm a somebody. Somebody important."
"Well, he's grown up in a very intersting way." He thought. "Alright, you're turn pinkie."
"I'm Sakura Haruno, what I like uh, I mean the person I like,L is," she stopped and looked at Sasuke. "Uh my Hobbie is uh," she started to giggle. "My dream for the future is," This time she began to squeal. "And I hate Naruto!" Naruto fainted on the ground as his heart broke into millions of pieces.
"Well girls her age are more intersted in boys than ninja training." The Jonin thought.
"My name is Sasuke Uchiha. I hate alot of things and I don't particularly like anything. What I have is not a dream, because I will make it a reality. I will restore my clan and to destroy a certain someone." His tone though out his introduction was dark.
The rooftop was silent. "Gee, he remind me of Vegeta on how moody he is and the part about restoring his clan reminds me of how Vegeta was always saying he will restore the Saiyan race." Goku thought as he looked at the last Uchiha.
"Good, you're all unique and have your own ideas. We will meet for the firSt mission tomorrow." The silver haired man said.
"What kinda mission are we going to have?" Asked Naruto as he leaned back.
"It's a mission the four of us will do together."
"But wait a moment. You said four? Which one of us isn't going to be apart of it?" Sakura asked.
"That will be Goku here."
"Why Kakashi Sensai?" Naruto asked.
"Because its a survival exercise, but it's nothing like your previous training."
"Then what kind of training is it then." Asked the Uzamaki.
Kakashi began to chuckle to himself in a dark manner. "Of the twenty seven graduates, only nine will walk away as Genin, while the others will go back to the Academy. In other words it's a make it or break, pass fail test. So the chance of failing is atleast sixty-six percent."
All member seven Goku was shocked at this information. "Why am I not apart of this mission? Is it because I didn't go to the Academy?" Asked a confused Goku.
"You hit the hammer on the head Son Goku. Since you never attended the academy until recently, we do not have that jurisdiction over you and for the test I'm giving, if you were a participant it would not work out," he paused after this. "But don't worry Son Goku," His eyes narrowed towards his. "I have a different test specifically for you."
Kakashi dismissed Team Seven and Goku was walking through town with Naruto.
"So Goku, what kind of test do you think Kakashi will have you take?" Naruto asked as he was messing with his headband.
The Super Saiyan began to think. "Honestly Naruto, I have no idea." The two continued walking throughout the village.
"Hey Goku, how strong are you? Like I've never seen you fight." Naruto looked at his new friend with a curious face.
"Well where I cam from, I was one of the strongest people there but there weren't that many fighters though." He answered as honest as he could.
"I just had a great idea Goku!," Naruto stopped and pointed at the Siayan. "Why don't we spar to see whose stronger?"
Goku looked at Naruto. "If I fight him im going to have to decrease my power by a great deal. Maybe there could be a way where I wouldn't have to worry about constantly holding back." Thought the Divine Saiyan. "Maybe some other time Naruto."
"Cmon please Goku!," Naruto pleaded. "I'll hold back if that's what you're worried about." This made Goku chuckle a bit. Placing his hand behind his head, Goku apologized. "Sorry Naruto."
"Man you're such a party pooper," The blonde slouched down but then sprang back to life. "Then how about you teach me how to use ki!?" Inside he was hoping Goku would say yes.
"Uh," Goku paused. "Should I start training him now? It would be better if both him and Sasuke started at the same time," Goku was in deep thought not realizing Naruto was trying to get his attention.
"Hey Goku? I'm talking to you! You've been standing there for the past minute"
"Huh," Goku began to look around. "Sorry Naruot," like always, he scratched the back of his head but this time embarrassed. "Sorry Naruto, not today." He gave an apologetic look.
"Aw please Goku! Why not?"
"First off, there are processes or steps you have to take before you learn ki. Most of them are all day things and if you look up right now," they both looked up to see it getting dark. "And I would prefer training you and Sasuke at the same time to make it easier for me."
"Whatever Goku," the blonde walked in silence with the Saiyan until they reached Ramen Irchiraku. "You know what Goku," he looked at his teammate. "You're buying me ramen since you don have a spar or teach me ki." He grabbed his wrist and pulled him into the noodle shop.
In a room sat two men at a table. One of them was old and wore a white robe with a red hat. The other wore the formal Chunin wear.
"Iruka, what do you wish to speak to me about, I don't think came here to merely drink tea with me and chat did you?"
"Naruto has been assigned to Squad Seven," he paused. "The Jonin in charge of that group," Another short pause. "Just how tough of a trainer is he?"
"Kakashi you mean,you are concerned about him?"
"I am.I heard a rumor about his training methods." The Third Hokage pulled out a book from within the robe. He slid it across the table towards the Chunin.
"What's this?" Iruka asked in confusion.
"All the trainees who have ever been assigned to him. Those whose passedan and those whose failed." Iruka gasped and grabbed the book beginning to look through its pages.
"Th-This is! It can't be, this is even worse than the rumors." A small bead of sweather dripped from the side of his face.
"Kakashi test may be a bit more difficult than the others."
"A bit more difficult! Not a single one of trainees have ever passed his test."
"That's true. They all tried but not one of them could lobe up to Kakashi's standards. So they all were eliminated." He said the last word with emphasis.
Iruka flipped through the pages even further. "Then what about Goku? I hear he's getting a different test?"
"That's true. His test will be facing off against Kakashi himself." He said with a smile at the end.
"Wh-what!," his face went into shock. "But he's just a Genin. Even with his technique Ki, he's just a Genin!"
"Don't worry Iruka. I know what I'm doing. I'm not the Hokage for nothing." He tipped his hat to show the kanji on it.
The Super Saiyan laid in his bed with a large snot bubble from his nose. It was already eleven o'clock. The reason he was asleep still was that he stayed out late last night with Naruto and when he arrived home, he began training. At the end of his training, it was two in the morning.
He began to twitch about. The snot bubble popped causing Goku to wake up. He sat up stretching his arms. "Man was that a good sleep." He said as he made his way to the bathroom. Twenty minutes passed and he exited whike still drying his hair.
The Divine Saiyan threw on his Gi and made his way to the kitchen. "What should I do today?," he thought to himself as he grabbed all types of food from the fridge. "I'm not in the mood to train right now," he sat down on the couch. "I got it!"
Son Goku was now in the Gravity Chamber im a meditative position. The room was complete quiet as he sat on the white tiles. "Okay, my power is beyond that of anyone here. I don't want to accidentally destroy the land or even the planet. I could keep my power surpressed but even for me that would take some effort."
Not long after an idea hit him. "Wait! Didn't Frieza have different forms to surpress his power? Maybe I can do something like that but instead of forms have a limiter?" A large white aura appeared around Goku. Slowly it began to decrease in size to where it it only emmit twould inches around him.
"There, that should do it. Now I don't have to worry about accidentally destroying something." He stood up and powered up. "And if I want to, I can either remove it or adjust it."
Goku began to move around and throw punches and kicks. "Now where should I place the limiter?" He thought. The Saiyan began to sense around the village to get a read on the powers. "The one that are guarding the gate are some if the strongest power levels I can sense. The others are below them to an extent and then there is I'm guessing are Genin power levels?" After careful studyung, the Saiyan figured out where he wanted himself to be.
"That seems like a good place. I don't have to worry about accidentally hurting or destroying anything." Goku went overy to the Gravity Simulator. "I wonder how much gravity I can take now?" He moneyed with control panel setting it to 10Gs.
His legs slightly bent at the sudden pressure. "Not bad. I can still move in 10Gs but it is a bit difficult." He started to walk around the room. "I have an idea!," This time he said out loud. "I wonder if I can still use Super Saiyan?" He got into a stance and focused his enregy.
The room began to shake and the white tiles began to come out of place. "Haaaaa!" He let out a screan. His body was now covered in a golden aura, his eyes turned to a teal color and his hair black hair was now gold spiked up. His facial expression now turned more so serious.
"Looks like I can still do it," he looked at his hands then the room. "Oops," he said as he powered down from Super Saiyan. "I didn't know I was shaking the room." He scratched his head.
Not far from Konohagakure in a hidden base sat a pale man. Next to him was a teen with silver hair and glasses.
"That power," the pale man hissed.
"Yes, I felt it to Orochimaru," Replied the teen.
"Go investigate this. It feels like it came from Konoha," he tapped his fingers together as he licked his lips.
"Yes Orochimaru, as you wish." The teen began to walk out of the room. "Oh, and Kabuto, try not to get killed." Kabuto turned around and adjusted his glasses. "Oh don't worry Orochimaru, I wont." As he turned around to walk away, a smirk was plastered on his face.
In the training grounds where Kakashi was giving the test to Team Seven, he looked up from his book. He looked towards the direction the house of Son Goku's house. "Is that Son Goku?" He thought then resumed reading Make Out Paradise written by a certain white haired man"
The day for Goku''s test has finally came. The other day after Kakashi finished his test for Team Seven, in which they passed, he vises Goku's house. He told the Super Saiyan he would be coming around to pick him up at six in the morning.
Currently, it was five thirty and Goku was devouring the food he placed infront of him. "I can't wait to see what kind of test Kakashi will give me," he said while food was in his mouth. "As long as it doesn't involve numbers or books, I'll be fine." He continued to eat.
Soon after a knock at the door could be heard. Going down stairs he opened the door.
"Hiya Goku," Kakashi said. "Are you ready?"
"Yup," Goku replied exiting his home. "So what kind of test am I going to do?" He asked with a hint of curiosity.
"That will be a surprise when we get there." The two walked for ten minutes until they arrived at a training ground. "This is where the test will take place." They stopped in the center of the field.
Goku looked around and took in the scenery. "Alright Goku," Kakashi began. "From what the Hokage has told me, you are not from this world," Goku nodded in response. "He also told me he wanted that to remain a secret so enemy villages won't attempt to invade out village but that's not why we're here." Kakashi lifted his headband from over his left eye. "We are here to test your abilities." His left eye opened revealing a red eye with black tomes.
"What is that?" Goku thought looking at the eye.
"This here is the Shringan, a rare dojustsu only known to the Uchiha Clan."
"Wait, isn't Sasuke's last name Uchiha?" The Super Saiyan thought.
"I'll give you a brief summary of what this eye can do. The user of the Sharingan can instantly see and comprehend any genjutsu, taijutsu and ninjutsu and reflect the attack back. Not only that but it can also analyze an opponents technique and then manage to copy it to the smallest detail but that's even the surface." Kakashi finished the short explination.
Son Goku stood I there processing the information thinking. "Wow, that's a ability that could come in handy alot. If it allows you to copy an opponents technique, it might help whoever has it learn Ki faster."
"So that's why," the Sharingan began to spin. "I'll be going all out with you." The Sharingan stopped spinning. The Jonin jumped back getting into battle position.
"Finally," Goku said as he got in his signature stance. "I'll get to fight someone from this world!" The two stares one another down.
"I'm going to have to pull out all the stops to even make this guy sweat if what Hiruzen says is true." Kakashi thought as he narrowed the Sharingan on the Saiyan.
Goku raced towards Kakashi with incredible speed sending a right punch. The Jonin disappeared and reaplearned behind the Saiyan but before he could do anything, he was sent flying by a kick to the stomach.
He skidded across the field and stoop up. Weaving a hand sighn, he slammed his pall onto the ground. "Earth Style: Mud Wave Jutsu!" Instantly the ground began to create large waves.
Goku noticed and prepared to jump above them until a hand grabbed a old of his anckle. "What!" He looked down and saw an arm sprouted from the ground. He was now neck deep in the earth as the wave of earth approached him.
Powering up, the Divine broke free from the trap and was now hovering about the jutsu. "I didn't see that coming!" He thought.
"Fire Style:," he turned around to see Kakashi. "Fire Ball Jutsu!" A large ball of flames started to head towards him. Placing his finger on his forehead, he disappeared and reappeared behind Kakashi.
The Jonin turned his face slightly with a shock expression. "How did he get behind me!?" He was hit with an axe kick from the Genin. Instantly, he turned into blue electricity.
"Wh-" before a Son Goku could finish his word, lightning coursed through his body. "He's good. With all these techniques I'm going to have to be aware." He thought as he landed on the ground.
He kept his guard up and looked around in search for his teacher. The Saiyan raised his hand and with one swift punch, hit the earth causing it to crack and forcing a hiding Kakashi to resurface.
"Damn it!" Kakashi thought as he saw a yellow ball of Ki heading right at him.
"Poof" smoke appeared as Gokus ki ball connected with Kakashi. The smoke cleared revealing a log. This caught the Earthling Saiyan off guard. "What? How? When?"
"Keep your eye on your opponent!" He heard the silver haired man yell from behind him. He had his fist cocked back. In the knick of time, Goku jumped back. The ground Kakashi hit was now a large crater.
Gokus swest dropped. "That would've hurt if that hit me, okay, now time to get serious." He beam came serious.
Kakashi and Son Goku stood across from one another looking each other down. "You're pretty good Kakashi! Those techniques sure have been keeping me on my toes."
"You're not bad yourself Goku, you are atleast Chunin level in terms of strength and skill." They looked at each other in silence for minutes. Leaves began to float infront of the two.
In an instant, Kakashi began to weave through hand signs. "Raijū Hashirir no Jutsu!" His hand was engulfed in dark blue lightning. Moments later a hound began to form. "Haaa!" The Jonin shouted and the lightning beast charged at the Son.
"That attack has some pack in it!" Thought Goku. He jumped out of the way of the beast but to his surprise it turned and started racing at him again. "Does that thing have a tracker!?"
A few moments passed as the Super Saiyan spent trying to escape to lightning hound. "I can't let that hit me, even for my tough skin, it can still burn me." He thought as he glanced at the scorch mark on his arm.
Unknowingly to Goku, the real Kakashi created a clone that was now sneaking underground. "Alright that's it," Shouted Goku as he stopped and faced the beast. He extended both arms and balls of Ki formed. "Take this!" Mutiple Ki spheres began to lauch and cold with the beast. When the smoke cleared, there was no sight it.
The Divine Saiyan then jumped back quickly. "Not this time!" He shouted with a grin as he saw arms sprout from the ground. Still with a smile, he formed a ki ball in his right palm and turned around and slammed it into Kakashi.
This time Goku jumped back so he wouldn't get zapped by the aftermath of a lightning clone. "Now, where is he?" He tried to sense out the silver haired Jonin. While he was sensing out Kakashi, heard multiple noises that were cutting through the air.
Goku turned and saw twenty of both shurikens and kunai knives speeding towards him. A smile appeared on his face. He bent his legs slightly and crossed his arms. With a mighty yell, he sprang back as his milky aura increased in size. The gust of winds created stopped the weapons coming at him.
"You have surpassed Chunin level Son Goku," Kakashi appeared across from Goku. "From everything I've seen up to this point, I'd put you atleast at low ranking Jonin," he paused. "Which means you shouldn't be on Team Seven but be leading your own Squad."
"Really? But I'm so young."
"When I was you're age Goku, I was already apart of the Anbu."
"Anbu?" Goku asked curious.
"An Anbu is a type of Ninja stronger than even the elite Jonin."
"Really? If you used to be an Anbu, why are you called a Jonin?"
"Because when you quit the Anbu, your status goes back to being a Jonin, but enough of this chitchat, how about we get serious?"
"I agree, let's get serious!" Goku got back into his stance as his white milky aura swirled around him.
The ground beneath Kakashi began to shake. The small pebbles on the ground began to slightly float. His hair began to float as his muscles began to twitch. "First Gate: Gate of Opening!" A faint white aura surrounded Kakash's body. "Now I'm ready."
"His power increased by fivefolds!," Thought the martial artist. "I guess I'm going to have to increase that limiter." Suddenly his aura grew twice in size. Both Kakashi's and Goku's aura collided with each other trying to push the other back.
All throughout the Konoha was shaking from the battle between Kakashi Hatake and Son Goku. The shock waves from their taijutsu even traveled to the Hokage office.
"Kakshi, I told you to test him, not get in an all out brawl with him!" He yelled as the stacks of papers were knocked off his desk.
Goku laid on the ground panting while Kakshi was standing above him. "H-He beat me," Goku thought. "This entire world is filled with guys just like Kakshi and there are ones much stronger than him!?" A grin formed on his face. "I hate to say it, but I'm beginning to like this world more and more'"
Kakashi extended his arm to help Goku up in which he accepted. The Jonin's outfit was ruined. No, that wouldn't be the right word. His outfit was destroyed. He looked at the Saiyan as he talked about how much fun he had but his mind was in other places. "I was able to beat him but barley. If this is the extent of his power, then he must've lied to the zhokage about being able to destroy planets on a whim. Unless he was holding back."
"Goku," he called out gaining his attention. "You have proven to me that you are stringer than that of a regular Jonin. Very few from this village has been able to match me with the use of the first inner gate and Sharingan activated."
"First inner gate? How many are there."
"There are eight in total but the side effects damages your body and each gate opened, it is increased."
Goku thought to himself. "Kind of like the Kaio-Ken."
"But the reason for this was that the Hokage wanted me to test your abilities to see where you rank and to see if you were lying about your story," it was silent. "So tell me, was that the full extent of your power, or were you holding back?"
The Super Saiyan chuckled and placed his hand behind his head. "Looks like I was caught. Hehe. Yes I was holding back but only to make the fight more fun. I don't like it when an opponent has an unfair advantage." He gave his signature Son Grin.
"He is pure of heart. Isn't he?" Thought the Jonin. "Okay, you have five choices Goku," This caught his attention again. "You can't be apart of Team Seven beacau how strong you are so, you either leave Team Seven and be the Squad Leader of your own squad," This caused Goku to sadden in the face. "Become an Anbu for the Leaf Village, become a pedestrian," he paused for dramatic emphasis. "Become a teacher at the Academy and teach the future generations of ninjas ki, or..." like before he paused for emphasis. "Become co-captain of Team Seven."
"Wait what!?" Goku wanted to make sure he heard the last one correctly.
"Become the co-captain of Team Seven." He repeated.
Four days passed since the spar between Goku and Kakshi. In those four days Goku was recognized by the Hokage as still a Genin but with the stength of a Jonin. Sarutobi wanted to promote Son Goku to Jonin but if he did, it would've drawn Danzo attention on the boy.
Goku was currently in his back yard reading a manual, or atleast trying to. "Aw man! I wish I knew how to read better!" Whined the Saiyan. He was trying to figure out how to farm the Senzu beans Eternity gave him.
Before he could try and understand what the book was telling him, a knock at the front door was heard. He made his way to the door and with his Ki senosing abilities, he already knew who it was.
"I cant wait to learn Ki! I'll finally be able to whoop your ass Sasuke." Naruto boasted even before he knew the concept of Ki. "And then Sakura will fall in love with me!" His mind kept saying.
"Why don't you shut up loser?," Sasuke said cooly. "It's not like you will be able to learn it." He ended with a smirk.
"Why you!" The blonde began when the door opened revealing Goku.
"Hey guys! What are you doing here and how did you find me?" Goku said with his smile.
"Kakshi sensai told us and we're here to learn Ki!" Naruto excitedly said.
"Uh sure, come in." He opens the door more so they could enter.
Narutos eyes went wide at the sight of the big open room. Sasuke just scoffed. Goku led them out back near his farm. Sasuke was impressed at the scenery.
"So when am I going to start shooting those balls of thingys?" Naruto pestered.
"First you need to harness you spiritual and physical enregy in sync with one another." He stated.
"We already have. That's how we use Chakra." Sasuke replied.
"Oh, then next you need to become mentally song enough, you have to meet a physical strength level and it takes a lot of practice." He named off the things he rememeted Mr. PoPo telling him.
"What are we suppose to do to meet those requirements? Because I'm already physically strong." Naruto asked as he began to fidget around.
"Shut up once won't you Naruto? Maybe if you kept quiet for once you might not suck so much."
The Super Saiyan laughed to himself rememberin how he and Vegeta use to act. "These two remind me of how Vegeta and I use to act to each other."
"First thing you two need to do is," he paused to think when a brilliant idea popped in mind. He walked over to his farm and picked up the book. Handing the book to the two boys he spoke again. "Read this book and follow the instructions."
"What is this? The secrets of learning ki and making super cool moves?" He grabbed the book from Goku.
"Not actually. It's a book on how to plant and farm a Senzu bean. He grabbed his brown sack tied to his waist and pulled a small green bean out. "This bean can heal any physical injuries and fI'll your belly up for three days!"
"He must be kidding," the last surviving Uchiha thought as he eyes the bean. "But if he's not, then maybe planting these for him can come in handy later when I can eliminate Him."
When Naruto and Sasuke arriver at Goku's house, it was eight in the mornimg. Now it was two in the after noon. They spent four hours planting as many beans as they could. It would've been done with by noon but Naruto didn't read the instructions and planted them wrong.
Both shinobi were now covered in dirt and mud as they went inside the house. As they reached the door, Sasuke stopped.
"What are you doing Sasuke? Too scared to tell him you planted the beans wrong so we had to staRT over?"
"Shut it dobe," Sasuke peered into the doors window. "What is he doing?" He thought. The room had a shade of read and he saw Goku doing different type of exercises.
"What are you looking at!?" He yelled and pushed the Uchiha out of the way. "Hey, why is the room red now? Wasn't it white earlier?"
The raven haired boy stood up and pushed Naruto out of the way. "It looks like he's training you dobe," he looked around the room to see the Gravity Simulator screen displaying 10Gs. "What is that machine?"
"Well I'm going inside! Naruto shouted as he whipped the door opening causing the Simulator to power down and gravity to return to normal.
"Oh hey guys," the Saiyan looked at both boys. "You done already?" He was now walking towards them.
"Well we would've been finished sooner if this loser read the instructions." Right before Goku's eyes he say an all out argument come to life in front of him.
The day ended with Goku just teaching both Naruto and Sasuke how to meditate properly. Long story short, neither one had great patience. Other than that, his day was uneventful.
He was laying in bed arms behind his head and looking at the ceiling. "I wonder what the future will have in store?" He yawned as his eyes slowly shut.
Outside his house hidden in the trees crouched a teen. He was croutching on one of the tree branches observing the house.
"So, this is where the power source was conning from? And it appears to be a boy also," he looked down at the field. In an instant he appeared next to the said field. Bending over, he dug up a few of the planted Senzu Beans. "Orochimaru will be delighted with this news." In one hand was a container that he placed the beans in. Like before, but this time, he disappeared from the light of the moon.
AN- Alright everyone! Here is Chapter 3 of The Golden Shinobi not that long after Chapter 2. Before the AN and Reviews, the story had 5.7k words alone! This chapter took awhile to write since I had to research some stuff and reach a few episode. That's reminds me. It's been forever since I've watched the original Naruto, like when it first came out. And because of that, I don't have alot of knowledge on it.
This is the last chapter for the Prologue Arc and up next will be the Land of Waves Arc. It's gonna be hopefully five or so chapters. I'm going to have to watch atleast sixteen episode to get a grasp on the arc. I've already watched up to the posy fight with Zabuza so those chapters should be out within the week.
And before I get shit for this, I did not nerf Goku. Instead of him having to constantly worry about surrpressing his power and not accidentally destroying something, I gave him a limiter that he is able to fully control. If he wants to get rid of it, he can. If he want to increase or decrease it, he can.
I really liked writing the Kakashi v. Goku fight. The thing is, I had to rewrite it. Why? I didn't save it so I feel like the first version was better. The fight wasn't ment to be DBZ style but i tried to make it have some elements of it. The reason why I didn't want to add the First Gate Kakashi vs zGoku was. It would have been super long. I might or might not write it later down the road. And now for what I will get yelled at for, Goku losing. I had him lose because he wanted to have a challenge with Kakashi and because of that and the Jonin's vast amount of Jutsu, he was always surprised and caught off guard.
Stuff is getting interesting. It appears Orochimaru has caught wind of Goku because of his test to go Super Saiyan. How will this effect the near or far future? And what was up with Kabuto taking some Senzu Bean?
Well Remember to review and now onto the reviews:
R- No problem man! You know if you ever need something or tips for you're story just let me know and about the little mistakes you could get a beta reader to fix it but it's you're decision. However the story is molding up really good so far with Goku meeting all of the genins specially Naruto and Sasuke who are about to train under him and of course they are Indra and Ashura rencarnations so of course they will become strong lol The funny thing is that Goku can't tell Sasuke's true intentions of what he wants to train with him, And last but not least are you planning to have Goku with a pairing?
See ya next chapter!
A- I'll keep that in mind. If I ever need help I'll come to you. Thanks for the compliment. I'm trying to mold it at a correct pace where it won't be forced or rushed. And I can't wait for Goku to train his two new students and of course they will be strong, they are Indra and Ashura rencarnations like you said. But how strong? You will have to wait and find out. Goku is well sometime clueless and oblivious to things like why Sasuke wants to learn ki. Yes, I do plan on Goku having a pairing most likely later on in Naruto Part 1 or in Shippuden. Thank you for the review!
A- awesome story so you have my support so keep it up... I want some dbz style action like punching shockwaves that shock the entire landmass and heavy lifting scene like mountains buildings and cars buses and asteroids and Lot's of destruction in dbz style than your story will became more interesting and worth reading your story... and don't make goku weak and underpowered because you already know how op and strong dbz characters are specially goku vegeta and gohan and saiyan so better remain this and tell us how much goku using his powers during the fight like 1% or 2% something because you already know you chose gt goku and even base gt goku is multiple galaxy buster in powers and if you want to balancing the story than you can lower to multi star level in base form and multi solar busting level for ssj1 and 25% galaxy busting level for ssj2 and full (100%) galaxy busting in ss3 and multi galaxy busting level for ssj4 .. and please I want action pack story so please add that kind of stuff and pair goku with ino because sakura is good for sasuke hinata is good for naruto and tenten is good for rock Lee so ino is perfect for goku... otherwise fantastic story and looking forward to read and thanks for the chapter and update soon...
A- I do plan on there being alot of DBZ style fighting. It won't get into it crazy until later on but there will be some. And of course, my Goku will not be nerfed. I didn't just choose GT Goku. I chose the GT/Super version of the Goku I'm hoping will be in my Fanfiction Altered Time (who during the GT era, will be slightly weaker than Goku during the Shadow Dragons). Trust me, there will be action packed stuff that in this story. I'm not the great at it but I'll try my best. And another person who says Ino. If I'm being honest, Ino was the first person who popped in my head for a pairing. Thank you so much for giving such a great compliment.
R-Nice chapter and you should pair Goku and Sakura together
A- Thank you and for your input.
R-Amazing story dude and I think you should pair Goku with Ino.
A- Thanks man! She's somewhere in there.
R-I say, pair him up with Tenten. She reminds me of a mellowed out Chi Chi and she also has that chinese theme going on with her. Not only that, she is rarely used in these type of stories. :)
A- Tenten did appear in my mind when I began to think of who he should be paired up with. And I do agree, she is like a mellowed out Chi-Chi.
R- Great story! I think you should pair him up with sakura. Everyone likes to complain that she is overused, when in actuality it is the argument that she is overused itself, that is overused. She is very similar to chi chi in the way that she acts, and has a very strong and distinctive character later in the series. Like Vegeta, saiyans prefer strong willed women.
A- Thanks for the compliment! Sakura has been floating around with a mix of other characters. I'm not a big fan of Sakura but if it works for my story, then it works.
R- Goku shouldn't have a pairing he was never interested in that stuff anyway and he has a wife he's also 60 mentally so he'd be a pedo.
Forgot to add this but naruto and sasuke should not be able use ki very easily it took krillin 3 years to learn how to use the kamehameha and videl it took a month for her to learn how to fly and even then she couldn't fly very fast goku and gohan learned how to use their ki faster because they're saiyans
A- I agree, he wasn't intersted on that kind of stuff. If Chi-Chi never forces him into marriage, he'd be all alone meaning no Gohan. Goku does have a wife but sadly, there is no way for him to return back to his realm and the mental thing, he still acts somewhat like a kid. For him being a pedo, I laughed, if he does get a pairing, it won't be later on until around end or somewhere in Shippuden.
I agree, Naruto and Sasuke wouldn't be able to use ki very easily. Especially for Naruto. Sasuke would have an edge over Naruto thanks to the Sharingan and he picks up on stuff alot faster. For Naruto, it would be hard since he doesn't have full control over his Chakra pool. But they will learn faster than Videl in being able to use it. Thank you for the review.
R- Hey man awsome story so far im hyped for the next chapter & I suggest you pair Goku up With *Sakura*. I suggested sakura because you have so much creativity to do whatever you want with her. You can mabye end up having her learn ki from Goku like Naruto & Sasuke. & mabye something happens to her where she gets a blood transfution from Goku in witch leads to her being half Human & half sayain & thoughout that point on in the fic she learns stuff like various ki moves/attacks like Goku, kaioken & Super Sayain 1, 2 & 3 *(But mabye at a limitation to 3 where she can only use it for 5 minutes like Gotenks & when she drops out of the form shes drained of her ki, chakra & stammana for about 20 minutes paralizing her.)* Also since even in the end of shuppuden she was pretty weak compared to alot of people with having her training with Goku you get the oppertunity to fix her & stop her being to anoying she also os the closest Naruto character with similarities to Chi-Chi so it'll add a dynamic to the GokuxSakura.
Overall message is. Love this fic so far, can't wait for the nexts chapeter, I suggest do GokuxSakura since you have alot of freedom to do whatever you want with it. Peace
A- Really? Awesome story already? Man thank you! For Sakura learning Ki, I'm leaning towards yes but I'm not sure when. The idea of her becoming a half Saiyan really got me thinking. I'd have to do some work around the plot but it could happen. And she would be pretty damn strong if she trained physically with Goku. She would make Great Ninja War Sakura look like a ant. Lol.
I'm glad you love this fiction. It means alot and help me keep motivation. Thank you for the review!
