Naruto: Mirror flower, Water moon

Wow didn't think people liked the story that much, Now a lot of you have been complaining about the lack of action and too much dialogue. Don't worry that ends now, I Just needed it out of the way. Also I apologise about the mistake of hollow evolution, I didn't realise. My bad

Disclaimer: If i owned Naruto then I'd have him Kick the shit out the majority of Konoha.

"Normal speak"

'Normal thoughts'

"Kyuubi/Aizen/Summon speaking"

'Kyuubi/Aizen/Summon thoughts'

"Shadow clone Jutsu"

Hado#90

Chapter 3 Infamous

4 years later

The night was filled with the smell of alcohol, sweat and sex. Not unheard of near bandit camps, but what was wrong with this one, is the Overwhelming Smell of blood that came from the camp.

A blonde teenager eyed this scene with a slightly enraged expression on his face. He hated anyone who would kidnap girls, barely even his age and do these..acts.

But he wasn't here to be a saviour, no he came here for information and the only lead was somewhere in this camp. Having waited long enough the figure burst through the brush, the bandits stopped their doings just in time to see a black silhouette of what they assumed was a teenager raise its hand and speak the last words they would ever hear in that calm, chilling, emotionless voice. Hado # 90 Kurohitsugi!

out of nowhere a pitch black box materialized from dozens of small squares that seemed to glow and eerie purple and surrounded around 20 of the bandits it .When the box disappeared the men were seemingly unharmed, when they all erupted in a shower of blood and limbs. Heads were cut off and arms severed from their bodies. This all happened in a span of 5 seconds and the men were reduced to nothing but bloody pieces.

The rest of the men stood petrified, amazed at the amount of gore a single technique caused. They all seemed to share an unspoken agreement and started to run, until one of them called out to the figure.

"What the fuck was that! That was no Jutsu I've ever seen. Answer me you monster!" The bandit screamed in blind fury. The rest seemed to be inspired by the fearlessness their comrade has just shown and turned towards the figure with angry hateful glares.

If one were to look closely they would see the Boy had a smile on his face. "Oh that? that was just something my sensei taught me, now would you be so kind as to tell me where I can find a Shiba Kaien? he has something I need"

The bandit smirked towards the figure " I'm Shiba Kaien, Ex-Oto Chunin and famed explosive expert. Ya want my autograph?" Shiba asked with a cocky smirk, Oh well his loss.

If anything the boy's smile widened more. "Is that so.." Then he disappeared with a burst of pure speed and appeared behind one of the bandits at the back.

The boy unsheathed a katana from his waist and swung it in a horizontal slash, cutting the poor bandit in half. He then swiftly dodged another's club and once again vanished with pure speed. All of the bandits frantically looked around for any sign of the boy and found none. They were almost going to sigh in relief..if another 13 of them hadn't been dismembered in a swift second.

The child appeared in front of Shiba and pointed his hand at the ex-Oto Shinobi. " Bakudo:#1: Sai" Shiba's arms were suddenly forced behind his back and his legs gave out from an unknown pressure.

The blonde then turned towards the remaining bandits and counted. Only 50, he stifled a snort, they were not worth the effort of even releasing his sword. He addressed them in is eerie calm voice "Those of you who can still stand, retire to your tents and do not leave until I give permission to do so." The figure spoke, the bandits knowing they had no chance chose to do what he said and ran towards their tents at speed that rivalled the Yondaime Hiraishin.

The child turned his head to the now helpless Shiba who was still struggling to break free of his invisible bonds. "Now if you would be so kind please answer my questions and you will not be harmed. Severely" The strange and powerful child asked.

But Shiba still had his ignorant pride and defiantly spat in the blondes face, the latter seemingly unaffected by the act and wiped it off of his face. He reached down and with surprising ease threw the large man across the camp.

"I see you will have to be forced to reveal certain information, a pity I was hoping to at least leave you alive to return to your village and deliver a message. But we will simply have to make do with mental torture" The figure then stepped into the torch light and revealed a boy of around 13. with blonde slicked back, wearing a white cloak with black edges covering a shirt with a similar pattern, a purple sash at his waist that held his sword and a white..skirt? (Seriously what the hell is that?)

Naruto walked up to the man, who by now was shaking in fear of the child before him. The blondes face had a hint of realization cross it for a brief moment. 'Ahh, so he has heard of me. It won't save him though' Naruto then picked the man up by his chin and brought him up to eye level. "By now you must know who I am" The blonde paused" And what I am capable of"

Shiba Kaien quickly tried swallowing his fear..and failed miserably : Y-you're the K-Kobumi shinigami (Hollow death god) Infamous bounty hunter. Said to have killed over 300 ninjas of jounin rank in a single night and came back unharmed." He stuttered out trying to ignore the growing wet spot in his pants.

Naruto's face remained impassive "So you do know me, and like countless others before you I will ask this one question and I expect an honest answer, understood." A frightened nod was his answer "Good, now tell me-" Shiba looked dead into his eyes..those purple ringed eyes "Where does the OtoKage keep the Hogyouku"

Timeskip-1 year later

Along the dirt track road that led to the gates of Konoha, Naruto was running towards the village that condemned him. He didn't Have to go back because of that old fool Sarutobi. But his plans depended on it. He soon arrived at the gates not bothering to observe them this time.

He wasn't going to be here long.

The Jinchuuriki walked up to the gate keepers, who at first didn't seem to recognise him. But then their glares came on full blast and quickly directed him to the Hokage tower.

While roof hopping towards the Hokage Tower Naruto spotted something amiss, a girl was being harassed by a group of Shinobi 'Hyuga's if i remember correctly' He was just going to continue on his way towards the Hokage tower, but then he saw something on the girl something that made him stop in his tracks and suddenly become interested in the outcome of this confrontation.

Pale white eyes

And an evil smirk

Hinata Hyuga was having a good day. First she was finally going to pass the Gennin exams today and be able to drop her pathetic mask of a shy girl who was berated by her father. Then on her way to the exams she was confronted by a group of Hyuga's -who were no doubt sent by her father to stop her from taking the exams. She had led them into an alleyway, away from prying eyes.

One of her attackers arrogantly spoke to her " By order of Hiashi-Sama, you are to be eliminated and your Byakugan as well. For failing to submit to lord Hiashi's will." The first Hyuga proclaimed.

Hinata had to stifle a snort, she quickly activated her Byakugan to inspect the area for any Anbu. After she found none she allowed the evil smirk to appear on her face. She spoke to her assailants with a surprising mixture of mirth and malice "Bring it on, Brach-bitches"

That set the Hyugas off. They also activated their Byakugan and proceeded to charge the Heiress. But Hinata still kept her smirk on her face despite her being out numbered she was certainly not out-matched. She leapt at the Shinobi and with an amazing amount of flexibility, dodged their blows aimed at her chakra points.

Having enough of dodging Hinata suddenly struck out her left hand towards the leader and struck his heart, effectively stopping it. After a moment of coughing blood the man fell over dead.

Taking advantage of the groups shock Hinata struck out again with her chakra enhances fingers and proceeded to close several chakra points with vicious efficiency. After stunning the remaining two men she quickly ran through some hand seals that the two Hyuugas and Naruto didn't recognise, making them raise their eyebrows.

She landed on the dog seal and called out her attack. "Water style: Body fluid expansion!" The two stunned Ninjas didn't have time to wrack their brain for information on the Jutsu when they suddenly felt as if their entire body was expanding. After checking down on their bodies their eyes widened. Blood was coming out of every pour of their bodies and dripping down onto the ground. They were about to scream in agony but were cut off when blood started to rise from their throats and prevent them from doing so.

Naruto watched the scene with a growing curiosity 'For someone so young to invent a Jutsu so effective and so..gory. She truly is amazing.' The Jinchuuriki couldn't suppress the impressed smile on his face after seeing that.

Hinata stared down at the bodies with her evil smirk still in place. She would have stayed longer but then she remembered where she was going. Her smirk turning into a frown ,she made her way to the academy never knowing she had a follower the entire time.

Hokage tower-with naruto

After leaving a shadow clone to follow the hyuuga, Naruto arrived at the Hokage tower with barley contained Killing intent and spiritual pressure leaking out of him. He quickly passed the choking secretary and walked into the old fools office. Seeing Hiruzen sitting there in his Hokage robes and hat.

Sarutobi looked up and managed to repress the smirk that threatened to appear on his face. His weapon was now finely tuned, polished and ready for action. He couldn't contain the smirk however when he saw that Naruto had finally activated his Rinnegan.

Naruto decided to ignore the smirk and spoke to Sarutobi with all the hate and malice he could muster in his voice. " Greetings Hokage-Sama!' He spat the name out as if it were poison. "As you can see, I have returned as per your orders to Konoha to become a Shinobi" "For now anyway' he mentally added.

The aged Hokage then voiced his reply "Hello to you to Naruto Uzumaki or would you prefer me to call you the Kobumi shinigami. You certainly made a name for yourself outside the village" The Hokage's voice suddenly hardened and his voice became cold. "But now you're in the village, I expect you to Stay in the village. is. that. clear. Uzumaki?"

The blonde just smiled in return. "Of course Hokage- sama, until I become a Chunin that is, then I am fully capable of retiring" The smugness was radiating off of the child in waves while he spoke this.

"That may be so but be careful a lot of bad things could happen between now and then especially in the exams" Hiruzen threatened. What he missed was Naruto's wicked smirk as he said that.

'That is Exactly What I'm counting on'

Academy classroom

It was the day of the Gennin exams and Iuka's class were buzzing with excitement-Literally in the case of the Aburame-but Iruka was informed he would be getting a new student. This of course caused a certain pink haired banshee that it wasn't fair how a 'no-named loser' should become a Gennin straight away and her 'Sasuke-kun' couldn't.

Iruka was about to use his 'big head Jutsu' to quiet the children down, but it wasn't needed due to the sudden pressure weighing down upon everyone. The students looked petrified and were forced to their knees, while others simply passed out (COUGHSAKURACOUGH).

The door suddenly opened and all the pressure subsided but it was still there but only slightly. The person walked into the room revealing naruto still in his outfit and his eternal smile.

"Sorry I was late but Hokage-sama requested my presence. I hope I haven't missed the exams" Naruto spoke sending chills down everyone's spines. Iruka still slightly stunned was the one to speak first. "H-hello there naruto, long time no see. Don't worry you haven't missed the exams we were just about to get to them" Stuttered out Iruka " Now if you would like to take your seat next to Hinata Hyuga?"

Naruto nodded and walked up to the blushing Hyuga. Recognising her as the Blue haired girl that killed those ninjas. What naruto noticed next made his smile widen, He saw right through her mask of insecurity and shyness and decided to take it off himself.

Once he sat down he spoke, low enough so that only she could hear. "I saw what you did to those Branch members. How cruel of you to do that and to your own clansmen." While his voice portrayed fake shock it held genuine curiosity.

Hinata's eyes widened. This..Boy! had just exposed her and what's worse! witnessed her killing her own clansmen. " I suggest you keep quiet about that Naruto-san, or I'll do the same to you" Her voice was dangerously calm. But naruto could see her making hand seals under the table. Just in case.

"Alright class" Iruka's voice sounded " The exams are going to be in alphabetical order and will consist of Transformation, Substitution, Clones and a Jutsu of your choice. First up Shino Aburame.

Time skip 2 hours

After everyone else had gotten their headbands, Naruto's name was finally called "Naruto Uzumaki" The white haired instructor named Mizuki called. Naruto got up out of his seat and was about to leave when Hinata's voice sounded. "Good luck Naruto-san" Without turning around He replied "Thank you Hinata-Chan" He missed the blush on her face, from embarrassment or anger was unknown"

As naruto walked into the exam room he was contacted by Aizen

"Naruto that white haired instructor Mizuki has placed Chakra disruption seals in this room. No doubt trying to fail you' The mighty beast sounded in his mind

'Do not worry Kyuubi and besides who said i would be using chakra for these techniques' With the mental link cancelled naruto proceeded to walk up to Iruka's desk "Okay Naruto go ahead and perform the Jutsu" A nod was his reply, missing the evil smirk on mizuki's face at the time.

Naruto concentrated reishi into his body and used it to substitute with a random bird from outside. After this he proceeded to transform himself into a perfect copy of Iruka.

Meanwhile Mizuki was sweating bullets. 'How is the demon able to gather its chakra with the seals I placed' Instructor thought 'No matter it still won't be able to perform the clone Jutsu required to pass.'

Naruto then focused his reishi into making solid clones. He found that reishi made them more resistant to damage and were able to perform Jutsu on their own, unfortunately they couldn't do Kido at all despite being made of reishi.

"Very good naruto! All that's left is your Jutsu of choice and you are an official Shinobi for konoha" Iruka exclaimed happily. Unlike others he didn't blame naruto for what the demon did and never had any bad feelings towards him.

Naruto smiled and nodded he turned towards the dummies at the opposite end of the room. "Okay then" He aimed his hand at the dummies leaning slightly to the left so it would at least graze Mizuki.

"Hado #32 Okasen" Just as he said those words a wide arc of yellow flame flew at the dummies and Mizuki. The latter getting away with only a third degree burn but the dummies however were incinerated. Along with the wall behind it.

Iruka was wondering if his jaw would ever stop hitting the floor in the presence of the Jinchuuriki. But he shakily managed to grab a head band and pass it to naruto, still too stunned to congratulate him properly

30 Minutes later

Naruto was looking for Hinata when suddenly he felt a presence behind him. He turned only to frown as he saw Mizuki there with a smug look on his face approaching him

"Hello Naruto-kun, Congratulations on the test today" The slimy man spoke with false joy. "But what I saw in there was impressive so me and Iruka have devised a plan to bunk you up directly to Chunin straight away!."

Naruto's frown only deepened. He knew this was a trick but due to his curious nature and maybe the chance of revenge against Mizuki caused him to listen further "Oh! and what is this shortcut you have developed?" Asked the blonde wondering how this would play out

Mizuki's grinned even wider. His plan to finally get rid of the Demon was working, "Orochimaru-sama will be most pleased with my accomplishment of destroying this Demon-Scum' "Well" spoke the traitorous instructor began "There's a certain scroll located within the Hokage tower-"

Forest of konoha-with Mizuki

"Okay The location we agreed upon should be around here. I just hope the Demonic Bastard keeps his word." Spoke the white haired traitor. He was currently tree hopping towards the location he told Naruto to meet him at, He told Iruka about the forbidden scrolls stealing and was hoping to get there before he did.

Landing on a tree Mizuki saw naruto, the scroll laid out on the floor and his sword unsheathed. Iruka was also there, apparently berating the child before him. Mizuki took this moment to intervene "Naruto give me the scroll and your test will be complete" Spoke the servant of Orochimaru "Iruka just doesn't want to see you rise up in the Ninja ranks and why should he considering you killed his parents!" He spoke grinning like a madman

"No Mizuki, You're making a huge mistake!" Frantically shouted Iruka. Mizuki didn't listen however and continued talking. "The only mistake I made was not taking out the Kyuubi sooner! That's right Naruto the fourth Hokage didn't kill the Kyuubi. He sealed it, into a newborn baby. You are that baby! You are the Kyuubi no Kitsune!." The deranged academy teacher shouted.

"I'm afraid you're already too late Mizuki. Because I already know of kyuubi and the fact that I'm a Jinchuuriki. The demons container. But just know that I'm not going to kill you out of anger. Oh-no, I'm going to kill you to send a message to Konoha. Feel honoured to gaze upon my sword." he quickly drew his sword to his side

Just as he said that, the mysterious pressure returned. Causing them to take unconscious steps back. "Behold my true power Shatter, Kyouka Suigetsu" The pressure suddenly increased and blocked naruto from view. Until it started to fade and there stood naruto and Iruka...Completely the same as before.

Mizuki took this time to regain his cocky smirk "Ha! s it was simply a bluff. I'll admit you got me with that little display of power but don't think it's enough to stop me!" Mizuki then drew two kunai and threw it at naruto, who simply vanished and reappeared behind Mizuki attempting to stab him in the back, but only succeeded in stabbing his side due to him dodging

"C'mon Kyuubi where is that arrogant fighting spirit you displayed all those years ago" Mizuki said as he drew his Fuuma Shuriken and hurled it towards the blonde. Only to see Iruka appear in its path and take the shuriken in the back.

"AGHHHH!" Iruka screamed in pain as he fell down towards the ground, bleeding heavily. Naruto quickly brushed past his body and charged Mizuki, who didn't have enough time to dodge, s he did the only thing he could do. He held up a kunai in hopes it would impale the Blonde.

And it worked

Naruto screamed as the kunai entered his abdomen. Blood flowing from his mouth and stomach freely. Mizuki looked up with wide eyes only to laugh hysterically "This is it! This is the end for you! Feel my divine justice Demon!' Mizuki screamed as he drew another Kunai and thrust it towards Naruto

Only to stop dead in his tracks as the 'Naruto' in front of him shattered to reveal the Form of Iruka bleeding heavily and breathing laboured. Bt soon after, his eyes glazed over and became lifeless.

Mizuki by know-was freaking confused. One minute he was impaling the demon brat, next he just killed his child hood friend. Just as he was about to question it out loud. The 'Iruka' That blocked the Fuuma Shuriken slowly stood up. The from started to crack and soon shattered revealing a perfectly unharmed Naruto Uzumaki.

"You claim that my power does nothing? Well think again. My sword affects all 5 senses allowing me to cast unbreakable illusions upon my enemy. You were trapped the moment I released my sword." Explained the jinchuuriki.

Mizuki now was now scared shitless. This demon had just made him attack and kill his childhood friend. Mind clouded by blind rage he let go of Iruka's body and charged the blond only for him to smirk and raise his hand.

"Bakudo #9:Geki" Naruto spoke as a red light began to engulf Mizuki, completely paralyzing him. Naruto walked up to the traitor with his sword raised at his waist. "Remember what I said about making an example out of you" The blonde Gennin started, he looked Mizuki in the eye and spoke. "I wasn't lying"

Mizuki's screams were heard throughout the village alerting the nearby Anbu and Hokage

Hiruzen arrived at the scene. He had been watching in his crystal ball up until Naruto released his sword. Now here he was Gazing upon the sight before him, fighting the urge to empty his stomach.

Mizuki and Iruka were entangled in a web of barbed wire, half their bodies detached, The only thing left was their torso which had a message engraved in both of them, a message that Naruto knew only Sarutobi would understand

'Consider this one of the bad things'

'That happen between now and then'

End chapter

Finally finished with this chapter, longest chapter yet. But hopefully not the longest. Now i've got some ideas for the Story but i need y'all opinion

Should another Konoha Shinobi be given a zanpaktou?

Send me a review or Pm stating yes or no. If yes which character and which zanpaktou. Note that this character will be the Protagonist of the story who opposes naruto.

Two Naruto's bankai

I know its too early for shit like that but just in case and i've already got One Idea but I might need back ups. Again just send me a review or Pm giving name and details of Bankai.