Another update?! So soon?! The benefits to updating as soon as I have the chapter after it done. And the benefits of having a lot of free time in Creative Writing.
DISCLAIMER: I had a dream about a predator once, maybe twice. But sadly, or happily depending on how you look at it, I don't own one. So I don't own Primeval either.
Donny POV
Well, took mankind long enough to find the camera. Really, it shouldn't take nearly millennium for them to find it. But anyways, that should be enough for the purpose. I don't need Chris anymore; he's served his purpose with this whole time-travel device. I'm capable of anything now: president, dictator, king, I can be it all. And all it takes is the press of a button. Okay, so I have to set the date and exact time that I want to go to, and location is always a good thing to get right and-oh whatever! Overall it's very simple and I'm going to rule the world. No one stands in my way now.
Time Traveling Cliché-British-Looking Man POV (AKA Chris)
So…what am I going to do now? They have my picture, so I have to go underground. And I can't do that either because I don't have the means to do so at the moment. And that dang gumdrop Donny has the device. So no time travel, though it would make this all soooo much simpler. Then this whole thing would be "oh no! They have my picture and are coming after me!" then I'd press a button and boom! "Been a while George! Oops, my bad, King George." Rotten luck really. Wish I knew what Donny was up to…though I have a suspicion that it's world domination. I mean, what else could someone be up to when the commission a genius (why thank you, me) to create a time-travel device, gets proof of the time travel in photographs, and then steals the device, leaving the genius (still me) to face the government? Now, I know I'm a genius, but it's not exactly rocket science to figure it out. A little bit of time travel yes, but not rocket science.
Nameless Observer POV (though she will be getting a name)
"Dr. Levesque, we've found him!"
Already? Well…alright then. "Is he in holding or do we only have a location?"
"Location only." I expected as much. Well, not that we have a location already, but that we don't have him in a holding cell. I mean, he's a time traveler, must have some brains. Though not enough to avoid being found, I guess. Let's see if he can avoid detainment.
Chris
Okay, abandoned storage building, well enough for now. I wonder how much of a lead I have on them. It's only a matter of time before I'm caught. With any luck it'll be after I've wrung Donny's neck that I'm found…are those cars pulling up…?
"We know you're here, get out now!" Harsh. I stepped out into the open so they could see me, and that I had my hands up and in no way a threat. They handcuffed me, like a common criminal, and put me in the back of a car.
Well biscuits.
What do you think? Getting better with each chapter in my opinion. But I'm the writer, so I don't really count.
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Possibly maybe probably updating soon,
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