Ok so for those of you who read my A/N in the last chapter, (If you didn't I totally understand I usually skip those ;)), any way it said on there that my computer got ruined by an obnoxious spoiled brat. Sorry it's true I got in trouble from the stupid brats mom, wow I'm not usually this mean. Ok but on with what I was saying just 'cause this FREAKING WORLD HATES ME I'm kidding but after I got my computer fixed not an hour after I got it my freaking dog knocks it off my table by pulling down the cloth. See now I sound irresponsible, any who my hinge broke on my computer and my parents said to live with it, so ya I like you guys I never really rant or tell people what I think so thanks to you people. But again sorry I will try to make this a longer chapter.
First of all I would like to give a shout out to everlastingwolflove for my first review on this story! I know it has been long since IV updated, at all, but I just had an idea and thought I should start writing before I forget so here it is! ~('.'~) (/'.')/
(Max's POV)
We were mere minutes away from my mom's house and I could already feel the tension.
Once we left the river bank, after a very surprising surprise I must say, we found out the damage was worse than we thought it was. Two minutes in and I noticed that something was dripping from Iggy's arms, where the girl laid.
After we slowed down to check it out we noticed that the side of her shirt was blossoming with scarlet rosettes. I inwardly cursed my self for not noticing that, when we noticed the wings I guess we were just distracted to notice the giant gaping hole in the side of her.
Any way, once we found that out I don't think I have ever seen Iggy fly as fast as he did.
As soon as we touched ground we started sprinting across the lawn to the front door. Angle sweetie can you read her mind to see if she's hanging on? I thought to Angel. She nodded and focused on the girl. After about 2 seconds she replied she's hanging on, for now but her thoughts are fragments and fading. My face took up a grim look as a thought hit me she might die.
A few seconds past as my mom other wise known as Dr. Martinez opened the door. A look of pure joy flooded her face the second she saw us that is until she saw the girl in Iggy's arms. Her features took on a look of determination that I haven't seen in a long time.
Once ushered in, my mom went into medical mode rushing in and out of the room bringing back medical supplies, first aid kit, and a cot for her to lay down in all the while the girl lay unmoving in Iggy's arms with Iggy grazing her features with his light-as-a-feather touch.
When the cot was set up Fang and Iggy gently laid her down. "Do you guys know the extent of her injuries?" my mom asked no one in particular as she got onto her knees to examine the body.
"She's got 5 broken ribs, a sprained ankle and I think she has a concussion, oh and a gaping hole in her side" Iggy replied without missing a beat.
"Okay, guys I need you to turn around I need to… get her prepped for bandaging"
And with that we all walked out of the living room into the kitchen.
(A/N I was going to stop here but I owe you guys )
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A few days have past and that girl has yet to wake up. We have moved her from the cot into the guest room and check on her every few hours. Most of the time she seems to be having nightmares, thrashing around and murmuring peoples names usually we try to get Angel to calm her down but she is unable to get past her blocks.
As I was thinking I hadn't noticed Fang was shaking my shoulders and calling out my name.
"What," I started off but was cut off by Fang
"She's awake" is all he said before retreating out of my room.
Okay guys sorry its so short! But I promise the chapter after this will be longer if you want you can answer some questions of mine
what should the mystery girls name be? I was thinking like maddie but her nick name star fighter/star
powers?
what should happen after this?
good side or bad side?
and last but not least do you like the story so far?
Oh and I think I might be updating in a little bit like 30 min or an hour I have an idea I don't want to lose.
