hello shakespeare's entourage here.

okay i think theres just slightly too much speach in this chapter also i made up most of the bit about Fox's past so nobody start having a go about it being completely wrong( if it is).

after this i'll be taking a break to write the next chapter and the ones after it and editing so it is alot better, since the chapters i've written so far have been a quick job.


Chapter 3: who am I?

"No! I'm in control! You aren't me!" Fox shouted. His control was slipping.

"You are in control, but not for very much longer," growled the predator, "soon you will fall and I will become a reality." at this moment Peppy and Krystal returned.

"Fox what's wrong?" Peppy asked

"He's taking over!" Fox cried, "I can't hold on much longer!"

"You have to Fox!" Krystal pleaded, "If not for anyone, for me!"

"You can't save him!" the predator growled.

"But I can fight you!" Fox said. "I'm in control!"

"You can't stop me Fox! No-one can!"

"Yes...I... CAN!" fox shouted, "AAAAAAARRRRRRGGGHHH!!" his headache dissapeared. In Fox's head the predator's final words resonated loudly, "you may have won this time but I will return and you shall dissapear into the darkness!" suddenly his legs gave way and he collapsed

"Fox are you there?"Krystal asked

"Yeah, I won"

"Thank god!" she hugged him in relief, "what happened back there?" he explained to Peppy and Krystal about his dream the night before.

"I could have become him when I was younger," said Fox," most of my family was like him but my parents decided to become more civilised, we moved to Corneria. At first my father had trouble staying on two legs and was very aggressive. He was meant to be the leader of our clan, but he did what he did, however all the leaders of our clan inherited a "power of the vulpine" it's a power that comes from our predator instinct that was always strongest in our leader.

"And now it looks like it's chosen me, but to achieve it you must become a pure predator. It seems I have fought my urges so long the power of the vulpine has made a form of it."

"Don't worry Fox we're here to help you," Krystal said

"Yeah Fox you can rely on us" Peppy added.

"thanks I can tell this'll be my hardest fight yet"


again if i am wrong about fox's past don't bitch about it in the review, also i know it's more like a script with that much speach in it.

shakespeare's entourage out!