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How could I have been so freaking stupid?! I forgot my best friends SIXTEENTH birthday! I'll never ever forgive myself for such stupidness.

I was rumuging through things to find the perfect gift for her. Luckily her party didn't start until 12:30 but I was supposed to get there at 12:00 to help out. I had 4 freaking hours to find a present get ready and do all that crap!

I decided to do something big! Something unforgettable (Besides forgetting her birthday) I ran down the steps. "Mom!"

"What Max?" Mom asked. I ran towards her and whispered the present I wanted to get her. Mom smiled and nodded. "Thanks mom! your the best!" Oh! You wanna know what the present is? HA! Too bad!

I quickly bolted upstairs and jumped in the shower. Once I got out I had to brush my teeth brush my hair and all that crap that a girl just LOOVES doing in the morning! "Oh my beloved sister Maaaax!" Ugh that means she wants something from me...

I walked over to her. "What do you want from me?" I looked and saw what she had in her hand. "No! Nuh Uh! No way Ells!" I bolted into the bathroom once again and locked the door. I leaned against the door heavily.

Oh crap! I needed my clothes and stuff if I needed to get ready for the party, which of course I did! I decided to take the chance. I took the plunging thingie and slammed into the door crying my best warrior cry. Ella saw me and looked totally freaked out!

I did my very best not to snicker so I kept on a warrior face. Out of her unluckiness she was standing right in front of the door. Which mean she uhhhh... Gotta face full of toilet plunger. I quickly grabbed my clothes and ran into the bathroom.

"MAAAX! I'M GONNA KILL YOU!" Ella screamed at the top of her lungs. Her voice was muffled because of the plunger. I was dieing on the floor laughing so hard I couldn't breathe and I was crying.

"MOOOOOM! I NEED HELP LIKE RIGHT NOW!" When I was in my bikini (The Green one) I put on the stomach shirt Nudge insisted on me getting. I unlocked the bathroom to find my mom trying to pry the plunger of Ella's face.

I couldn't help it but crash on the floor yet again and laugh. "Maximum Ride! Why did you do the to your sister?!" I could tell me mom was hiding a snicker and a smile. "You know it's funny mom!"

My mom just shook her head and smiled. "Ok baby a teensy bit funny!" She whispered. When my mom finally got the plunger off of Ella's head she flew back and landed on the bed laughing.

Once Ella saw me she tackled me to the floor. Her face was red where the plunger was and I couldn't help but snicker. "You better watch your back because this means war!" She whispered frantically into my ear.

I nodded in agreement. What? Can't you feel the sisterly love in the air? Only sometimes will Ella and me have prank wars. It's totally fun even when Moi get pranked!

"Max your punishment is letting Ella do your makeup!" I glared at mom. "HAHAHAHAHAHA! I WIN!" Ella screeched jumping off of me. "Whatever! at least I got the pleasure of sticking a plunger on your face. Oh and by the way go look in the mirror!"

Ella stalked away into the bathroom. "AHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Ella was screaming at the top of her lungs. And you know what a did? Yup you guessed it! I fell to the floor laughing.

Hour later

"Girls I'm off to work I'll be back in a half hour cause of You-Know-What! And BEHAVE!" She looked at me when she said behave! Hahahaha! "Ok now I get to do your makeup!" Ella grinned micheviously

"But it's a pool party the makeup is just gonna wash off!" I pointed out

"Ever heard of WATER PROOF make up?" She smirked at me.

I scowled at her and abruptly sat on the stool. She got to work right away.

When she was finished I once again scowled in the mirror. I had black eye shadow but it was put on lightly and I had eyeliner also. She had said I didn't need blush because once I saw Dylan I would blush ALOT. The last thing she did was put some lip gloss on me.

Mom got back not long after we were done getting ready. OK since I'm Maximum Ride and such a 'nice' person I suppose you can know what the present is...

Mom got home with a little box in her hand it has holes in it. Inside was a little bark. I popped open the lid to see a little white terrier with a cute purple bow in its ear. I noticed that mom was also holding a black scottie.

"Uhhhh mom what's the other dog for?" My mom smiled, "He's for us!" I looked at her blankly and the screeched like I normally wouldn't do. But a puppy?! Yea I TOTALLY lost my cool right then and there. "His name is Total!"

"ZOMG!" Ella exclaimed, "YOUR THE BEST MAMA!" Mom chuckled. "Your welcome Mija!"

Mom drove us to Nudge's house. I was SO excited! When we got to her house I ran inside with the box cradled in my arms. I met Nudge's mom Natasha at the door. She was practically my second mother! "Hey Natasha! GUESS WHAT?!"

"Hello Max! And what's up?" She asked so lovingly. I looked around for Nudge and she was no where in sight. "Well I got her a puppy and I don't want her to be on the present table!"

"Oh Max! That's so Thoughtful!" Natasha exclaimed. I nodded. I handed her the box and went inside to find Nudge. Ella was already with a couple friends so I didn't worry about her.

I finally found Nudge sitting on a beach chair tanning. She didn't really need to tan cause she already and coffee colored skin. I saw a water gun on the ground next to her and I picked it up. I could tell she was sleeping.

I filled the water gun up and I ever so slightly crept over to her. But before I could spray her she whipped her hand behind her back and pulled out a water gun. She pointed it at me and sprayed me. I was left standing there water dripping my stomach and open mouthed.

"You see dear Maxie... do you really think I'm that stupid?" Nudge smirked at me and got up. I took my cover up off and started talking to Nudge. "I see your wearing makeup Max!" She exclaimed.

"Yea it was my punishment for sticking a plunger on Ella's face." She looked at me with a confused look. "Long story short!"

Before I knew it Jesse snuck up behind Nudge and grabbed her by the waist. "Bye bye Nudgiekins!" He joked and threw her into the pool. I laughed so hard! "You totally deserved that Nudge!" She glared at me and then smiled.

Then I knew why she was smiling because then a pair of strong arms grabbed my waist and picked me up like a baby. Dylan slid his arms under my knees. "Dylan put me do-" He kissed me right in the middle of my sentence. Though I wasn't sure if he was my boyfriend or not.

He pulled back. "Bye Maxipoo!" He smirked. "Oh no yo-" That's all I had to say before he threw me into the water next to Nudge. I came back up and saw both Jesse and Dylan kneeled down next to the pool looking at us.

I leaned up and kissed Dylan once again. He grinned against my lips. I grabbed the hem of his shirt and then pulled him in the pool with me. "Smooth move Max!" Nudge said laughing. I grinned.

I didn't see Dylan pop back up either. I looked by me and saw nothing. I started panicking. And all of a sudden I felt myself being lifted up on a pair of shoulders. "Dylan!" I screeched. "I declare a chicken fight with Nudge and Jesse!" Dylan yelled. Everyone at the party looked up at us and circled us.

Jesse took off his shirt and jumped into the pool. Nudge was lifted up by him in seconds. "Your goin DOWN sista!" Nudge screeched. "Your on!"

Annabella pretended to be the judge. "Ok first one who wins three rounds wins!" She threw her hand down meaning to start. Dylan and Jesse started circling each other. "Get on with it looser!" Nudge yelled at Dylan.

Dylan and Jesse both charged at each other. "For Narniaaaaaa!" I yelled. Me and Nudge started pushing each other. I leaned back far down but since I had strong leg muscles I was able to bring myself back up. I grabbed Nudge's arm and swung it around her making her twirl around.

I used my one leg to keep balance and pushed Nudge off of Jesse's shoulders with my other leg. She screamed as she fell into the pool. I put my arms up in victory shouting. Nudge popped back up with fury in her eyes. I knew when Nudge was made it made her go nuts and SUPER strong.

She got back up on Jesse's shoulders and Annabella threw her hand down. "FIGHT!" Dylan and Jesse circled again. I saw nudge move her foot forward meaning to tell Jesse to charge.

I started pushing her trying to pry her off of Jesse's shoulders. She grabbed my Shoulder and yanked me down. I fell off of Dylan's shoulders with a loud splash. I got a nose full of water. I coughed and gagged. "You ok Maxi?" Dylan asked concerned. I nodded.

Dylan put me back on his shoulders. "FIGHT!" Jesse charged towards us immidetly. "Lets do this thing Nudgiekins!" He yelled. Nudge easily pushed me off this time. She grabbed my forearms twisted it back and yanked it down.

Yea we were being rough but it didn't hurt it was just us being a couple teenagers! I hopped back onto Dylan's shoudlers. This time I WON. I grabbed her leg pulled it up and pushed it back making her fall sideways with her other leg still attached to Jesse's waist. He let go and picked her up.

"Whoever wins this round is the grand prize winner!" Annabella yelled. "FIGHT!" I saw Dylan and Jesse nod. The both Let go of our legs and grabbed our waist. They easily threw us off of there shoulders. Nudge screamed as she flew into the water.

When Nudge and I got back up we Nodded at each other knowing exactly what to do. We tackled Dylan and Jesse dunking them underwater. When we knew that they had enough we let them up. For a little bit we decided to just relax in the pool.

Dylan swam towards me and held onto my waist. I put one arm around his neck and the other one on his stomach. I felt his abs and I gently traced his abs with my finger. I smiled at him and he grinned that amazing blinding grin.

He kissed me full on the lips and then Tilted his head. We broke apart and since we were by the edge of the pool I sat at the edge while he stood in the pool.

I slowly reached behind me. When I felt the water gun in my hand I whipped my hand around and sprayed him straight in the face. He glared playfully at me. Uh oh! I stood up and ran over to the beach chairs. I wrapped myself in a towel to make myself secure. Dylan jumped out of the pool and sat down on the edge of the chair.

"I'll get you back Maxi!" He said. "Dream on!" That's when Natasha walked out singing happy birthday to Nudge. We all sang along. Nudge sat at a chair smiling brightly. It was a 2 layer cake that was filled with fashion stuff. She blew out her candles and smiled.

"Okay time for presents!" Natasha said after we all had a slice of cake. "Well we have to open Max's first so i'll be RIGHT back!" Nudge smiled at me. "It must be pretty great if you couldn't have it on the gift table!"

Natasha came out with my little box and handed it to Nudge. She picked of the birthday card and opened the box. "ZOMG! A PUPPY! ZOMGZOMGZOMGZOMGZOMG! THANKS SOOO MUCH MAX!" She tackled me in a hug. "Welcome Nudge!"

She read the card out loud, "Happy sweet sixteen crazy! I wanted to get you a present that would make your birthday very remeberable! So I got you a puppy! Her name is Tiffany-Krystal."

She smiled brightly and opened her other presents. There're were so many that i'll only tell you a few! Iggy got her a new makeup bag with zebra print on it. Fang got her a desiging set. Ella was dog stuff: Sparkly silver color, lots and lots of bows, dog bed, and dog treat/food. Annabella got her a sewing machine. Indie got her lots of new makeup and clothes and obviously I got her a puppy.

After another hour or so of the party it was time to go home. "ZOMG thanks you SOOO much Dr. M!" Nddge screeched squeezing Mom in a hug. "No problem Nudge! Oh and Natasha Tiffany-Krystal has all her shots and stuff and wont need to go to the vet any time soon but please call me to make an appointment!" Mom said so doctorly.

"Thanks again Valencia! The girls were GREAT!" Natasha explained. We hopped into the car and drove away.

"So how was it girls?" Ella and I both started talking at the same time excitedly "So i'm guessing it was awesome?" Mom said interrupting us. We both nodded.

Yay! Such sisterly love huh? and comment comment and comment some more why don't ya! get some of those people to read this thing! I know 217 people have read this but only 4 comments? Give me some support! Ideas please I want this story to also be like a story where you can actually add your own thing in it! so yea! thank!

-Aurie