HEYYYY I'm back! Did you miss me? Teehee. So I got this chapter down, mainly because I didn't want to keep you, my important readers, waiting. So the curtains are rising, please ENJOY! =^.^=
Chapter Two
After a few more moments of silence, apart from Luffyko's apple munching (she found the apple box), Coby spoke up.
"Luffyko-san.."
"Coby." Luffyko finally stopped eating and stood up. She held her hat in her hands with a distant look in her eyes. "I promised to a great friend that I would become Pirate King and give this hat back to him when that happened. But I'm the one that decided to become Pirate King. I don't care if I die fighting for it. It was my choice, and I'm ready to face the consequences."
Coby's heart beat faster. Yes, he knew it for certain now. He loved her. He suddenly stood up. He was going to declare something important, something so important that he would never take it back.
"I'm going to become a Marine. No, not just any marine, but a Great, Proud Marine." He said this with conviction because he wanted to be like Luffyko-san, unhesitant about her lifelong dream.
Meanwhile, on the upper level. The women from before were running at full speed, anxious to report back to their captain. Alvida wasn't that hard to find, and they stopped in front of her, gasping for breath.
The blonde screamed "MONSTER!"
Everybody looked at her in surprise, and only when she saw the look on Alvida's face, she realized how wrong that sounded. She stepped back, only for Alvida to go stark-raving mad and swing her iron mace at the poor girl. Alvida then glared at the other, waiting for an explanation.
The brunette shook her head madly. "No no, Captain Alvida-sama, we meant that there's something down there that knocked out [enter manly name here] and we're afraid that it might be…" she gulped visibly "Pirate Hunter Roronoa Zoro."
Alvida's grimace turned into a smirk.
"I heard that he was captured at some Marine's base, but knowing him, he probably escaped by now. And I also heard that he liked to make grand entrances." She heard Coby's voice from below her, and her smirk turned more twisted, if even possibly as she heard his next words.
"I'M GOING TO BECOME A GREAT, PROUD MARINE, AND BRING DOWN ALVIDA. BECAUSE ALVIDA IS A HORRIBLE PERSON AND IT'S A MARINE'S DUTY TO WIPE OUT EVIL AND LET JUSTICE TO WIN!"
She jumped up (indeed, how did she jump up when she's so morbidly obese?) and broke through the-
-Ceiling. Something large had come through the ceiling. Luffyko looked up with Coby, and instantly, Coby's legs turned to jelly.
When the smoke cleared, Alvida looked up (technically, she looked down) to see a tiny twiggy girl looking back at her.
Alvida roared with laughter and the rest of the crew joined in.
"BWAHAHAHAHA. You're not Pirate Hunter Zoro, you're just some twerp that gave Coby false hopes!" She turned to Coby and looked him up and down.
"Eh, COBY? What, you were going to team up with this ugly girl and beat me? COBY, ANSWER ME. Who is the most beautiful woman in the East Blue?" She smiled.
Luffyko screamed and everybody focused on her.
"That's so cool! A SEA MONSTER IS WALKING ON THE SHIP!" She walked up to Alvida and held out her hand while looking back to Coby. "Do you think I can tame it? It's rather ugly looking, but that would be cool to have a SEA MONSTER as my crew!"
Everybody's jaws dropped. Alvida, surprisingly, was very pissed off. She raised her mace and aimed at the girl's head. Luffyko hiccuped, picking up Coby, and jumped up to the main deck, using the mace as a kickboard.
When she was on main deck, the pirates were waiting for their chance to get praised by the sea monster. Four men swung at her with swords and she jumped out of harm's way, leaving Coby next to them. Fortunately, nobody cared about him yet.
A fat lady jumped from a top with a metal bat and screamed "YOU'RE MINE" but missed, made another hole in the floor and smacked Alvida instead. Then, the rest of the crew appeared behind her and yelled curses and other incomprehensible things. She started running, but went face to face with the four pirates in front of her. She yelped "ITS NOT FAIR TO GANG UP ONE PERSON!" and crouched into a ball. The whole crew jumped on top of her. Coby screamed "NO NO NO" in his head and out loud and waited to hear painful cries of agony. He didn't hear any.
The whole crew flew away, repelled by an unknown force. Coby gasped, and Alvida finally made her grand entrance. She was confused by why everybody was out of a ten-meter range except for Coby, but shrugged it off.
Luffyko stood up but fell down, face first. Coby's eyes widened as did the others, but Alvida decided to take advantage of the situation and lumbered over to where the girl lay and rose the mace.
Coby was scared, he didn't want the girl to die! So he created a diversion, screaming "YOU FAT PIG." Alvida turned her attention to him alright. Filled with fury and hate. Coby thought over and over again "I said it! I at least got back at Alvida for those past two years. No regrets no regrets NO REGRETS!" his mind screamed as the mace swung down. He waited for the doors of death to open, but instead, his eyes opened. There was a large, shimmering tiger standing in front of him. He nearly died, but kept his breath when he realized that this strange tiger that materialized out of nowhere had sent Alvida flying with its tail. But he nearly died again when he saw the tiger leaping for the still unconscious girl. He ran as fast as he could, but he knew he wouldn't make it. The tiger that saved him was going to take his first love's head as a price and he couldn't do anything to stop it.
Alright.. so as I was rewatching the first episode.. i noticed something quite peculiar. When Luffy drags Coby to the food storage room, Coby's head gets stuck in between two large square doors, correct? But then when they're inside and Coby is taking his head out, there's a round medium-sized door with a window on it. Just an interesting moment I thought you guys might've wanted to know.
Also, when the men pop up from below and say "a monster!", Alvida gets mad, right? That means that she knows she looks like a monster so that's why she's getting insulted. *Tip*. If somebody insults you, don't acknowledge it. It only means that you accept the insult if you do acknowledge it. Just another.. interesting thing you guys should know =^.^=.
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Can you guys tell me whether you want long chapter or short chapters?
Also, do you guys like the "cliffhangers" at the end?
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