Hi im back and im so sorry it took me so long to write another chapter!
IM GONNA ADDRESS SOME COMMENTS I GOT ON MY LAST CHAPTER...
Critic - i don't think you understand what a good story is. this is such a great story and everyone agrees. even read the reviews on this story. So please don't even comment when you're criticizing me.
Chapter 3
"Wow that meal was so so good. I am so happy we came here!" Corey said and picked up the check. "Uh oh" his eyes nearly popped out of his skull. "this can't be right!"
"Core what's wrong?" Laney asked, her concern plastered on her face.
"This check is for 40 dollars!" Corey screamed cause his eyeballs finally fell out of his eye sockets.
"Core! This is crazy! How will we be able to afford the wedding after we pay for this mediocre meal?" Laney yelled as she picked up his eyeballs and stuffed them back into their sockets.
"WAITER!" Corey called out into the restaurant filled with fancy people in it.
The waiter scrambled to their tables and said "yes what is wrong, did you decide to order dessert?" He said and pulled out his notebook.
"tha would be so tasty-WAIT, NO I called you here to complain about this check!" Corey said.
"What is wrong with your check sir?" The waiter said and put his notebook back into his waiter pocket.
"This can't be right! We ordered only 5 meals and the total is 40 dollars?" Corey screamed!
"Sorry sir, but yes the total is 40 dollars." the waiter replied.
Laney started to cry so hard and wailed. "How are we going to afford the wedding now? I wanted it to be in the funeral home a mile away from my house!"
Corey started to panic, seeing that his soon-to-be-bride was crying her eyes out! "Please Laney do not cry! I will figure this out!"
Corey pulled the waiter to the side. "listen." he pulls out a 100 dollar bill. "Will this cover all the costs?" He asks the waiter.
The waiters eyes widen and he smirks. "Yes, it will do just fine. you have a nice night with your lady." the waiter winked.
Corey felt so proud of himself and walked back to the tables that Laney was at, still crying.
"Laney, sweetie, it is ok. I figured it out. we will still have the best wedding and it will be exactly what you want." He smiled at her with his teeth.
"oh Core, you are truly my Spider-Man!" she yelled and hugged him super nicely.
He put his arm around Laney and they both strutted out of the restaurant and Corey felt so proud.
To be continued...
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