Ninja Revelations

Chapter 3

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"Does anyone actually read the disclaimer?"-Human speech

"Probably not."- Human thought

"Seems like a waste of time to me." –Demon speech

"Yeah it does nothing of any real significance"-Demon thought


Last time on Ninja Revelations- After what seems like hours the fight is about to continue. Who will come out the victor? Find out in Chapter 3 of Ninja Revelations!

Stare. That's all the young Hyuuga prodigy could do. Stare at his younger foe, as his weapon transformed. He could not will his body to move, hell it was all he was able to do to keep him-self from vomiting as the grotesque blade attached itself to his blonde opponent's body. Though his body was inactive his mind was working frantically trying to figure out the situation. "Alright, that is the most disturbing thing I have ever seen! No matter, there's nothing the dead-last can do I can't overcome. I am a Hyuuga, therefore I am the strongest and fate is on my side. He can do all that he is able, and I will prove to him how futile it is to think he can win this."

With the heart's transformation done Naruto looked towards his staring opposition with anticipation. The veins connecting his wrist to the blade had dug deep into his circulatory system continuing the blood flow. The sword was now a part of his body, having attached itself to the nerves; it had essentially become part of his arm. With a quick pulse, the heart began pumping blood from Naruto into itself and back again. Naruto paid no attention to the pain it caused, his focus solely on his current goal; the death of Hyuuga Neji.

The blonde placed him-self into a basic sword stance, knees slightly bent with his right hand on the hilt of the blade, and the blade itself tilted forward. He grinned his manic grin once more and addressed the Hyuuga prodigy. "Are you ready Hyuuga? I want to make sure you're at your best when I tear you apart, so answer quickly!"

Neji scowled as he looked towards his questioner and replied. "You could never beat me at my worst, trash. But to answer yes I am ready. So let us get this annoyance over with." After saying this Neji one more took his Gentle Fist stance, and prepared to make short work of the boy in front of him.

"Then let the fun begin!" Naruto shot forward quickly, shocking the audience with his speed. Neji smirked at his lack of thinking, grabbing a kunai from his pouch, he waited for his challenger. Said challenger smirked at his action and increased his pace. Now only a meter away he swung the sword down at his opponents shoulder. Neji throws up his arm putting the kunai in the swords path, and pulling his left arm back for a strike. With a slight ringing noise the sword hit the kunai, but before Neji could strike the blonde vanished from sight.

"Huh.. Coward" Quickly activating his bloodline, he managed to turn and use his arm to block an attempted kick to his head. Pushing the blondes leg away, Neji struck at his opponents shoulder with a chackra enhanced attack. The blonde pushed himself forward meeting the allowing the strike to hit his shoulder, and quickly ducked himself under the white eyed boys guard and knee striking him in the solar plexus. Jumping away to give himself a moment of cover, Neji glared at his opponent. He smirked and addressed the blonde. "That strike hit the chackra point in your shoulder; your arm is useless now. I'll admit you got a lucky shot in, but mine was far more devastating."

Naruto chuckled, and shocked Neji by rotating his shoulder. "Haven't I already shown you those attacks are worthless on me? It seems you think too highly of yourself Hyuuga." Jumping forward to meet his adversary the blonde drew the sword sideways for a slice at the prodigy's midsection. Neji once more placed thekunai to block the slice A sharp ringing accompanied the meeting of the two blades. Neji thinking he should retaliate was stopped short by a hard elbow to his nose. He again attempted to move to regain control, only this time Naruto pressed the attack not allowing him any room to recover. A short trading of blows took place as the two boys traded quick flurries of strikes.

"He's doing far better than I had thought he would be; no matter I will still win this, for I am a Hyuuga. There an opening!" The elder boy used a forearm to block a left hook from the blonde, then forcing the arm back his hand shot forward striking him above his left lung. At being struck the younger boy was stunned for a moment which his opponent used to elbow him in the throat forcing him back. Blood poured from the blonde's mouth as he stumbled back.

The Hyuuga decided to gloat to his downed enemy. "Do you see it now loser? You have lost, as fate decided. Your heart is punctured and your trachea is crushed, there is no surviving that. Take this lesson to the grave trash, fate is absolute and you are nothing!" After Neji had gloated he pulled back his arm readying for a final finishing strike. So distracted was he that he nearly missed the smile on the blonde's face. Neji stopped just in time to watch his younger enemy explode into a cloud of smoke. "Shit! Shadow Clone! Where the hell is he?" Seeing a flash behind him the dark haired boy whipped around to stop him.

"Too slow Hyuuga." Spoke the taunting voice of the blonde as he brought the blade down upon his enemy, slicing a diagonal cut across the older boys face.

The cut was shallow but the boy cared little as he jumped away screaming. "My eye! You son of a bitch you took my eye!" Surely enough the blade had not only sliced through his flesh, but it also sliced straight through his left eye, blinding it.

Naruto chuckled at Neji's screams. "Come on Hyuuga, you act as though that was your only one. I did still leave you with one good eye, though I can't promise it will be good for long." The Cyclops in a rage attacked blindly (I know bad pun but I had to) at his mocking opponent sending a strike directly at his lungs. His blonde target merely watched in amusement as he drew near. Right before One-eye's fingers could reach his skin Naruto grabbed his wrist and quickly struck him twice in the ribs with his knee. Still holding his opponent's wrist, the blonde jerked Neji's arm straight, chuckling once, he brought his right arm up and quickly brought it down upon Neji's forearm, shattering the young Hyuuga's bone. Neji's scream was of pure anguish as he fell to the ground.

Darkness began to overtake the crippled prodigy as he slipped towards unconsciousness. He barely registered he was being lifted off the ground as he lost awareness. Suddenly a large cracking sound echoed through the arena. Neji could now ad a shattered jaw to his growing list of injuries. As Naruto held the demolished Hyuuga above the ground, his moans of agony like music to his ears, the blonde chuckled again. "Not yet Hyuuga, the fun is only beginning. Don't go losing consciousness on me, without your screams of pain this loses half the meaning for me."


(In the audience, the spectators were going crazy over how brutal the blonde Genin was being)

(With the rookie Genin.)

At seeing the young Genin's brutal manhandling of his opponent, the pink haired banshee started speaking again.

"See!! I told you he was a freak!" Sakura shouted this loudly.

Akamaru growled loudly at the sharp wail in his ears. Kiba was about to let him have his revenge on the shrill voiced creature when Shikimaru spoke once again.

"Sakura, shut up and don't plague us with your idiocy, not now and not ever again. Sure Naruto might be going a bit too far on this guy, but with how he nearly killed Hinata he definitely doesn't deserve any better" Once more Shikimaru's cold tone stopped Sakura's horrible torturing wails.

"But!"

"NO SAKURA!" shouted oddly enough Shino of all people.

At seeing there was no one to back her up or even let her speak Sakura began to cry.

(Somewhere in heaven, an angel got its wings)

(In the Kage box)

The Sandaime Hokage watched the fight with clear surprise. "When did Naruto become this brutal, this cold, or this talented?! I should have known that letting Him train Naruto was a bad idea !I just hope Naruto can be saved from his darkness."

Right next to the Hokage sat his diplomatic guest the Yondaime Kazekage, the leader of the Hidden Sand village. What does he think of this situation? "SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!"(???)

Ugh lets return to these guys later... much later.

(With the sand siblings)

Temari, and Kankuro watched the fight with captive fascination. This boy seemed just like Gaara in one of his less than sane moments! The thought of two Gaara's sent a shiver down their spines.

With said Gaara, the situation was much different. He watched with great interest the Uzumaki boy's brutality, and he was loving the show that he put on. To most people the display seemed savage, and excessive, but not to Gaara. To him it was spectacular, and beautiful to watch. It was as though he was witnessing an artist paint his masterpiece, and he was greatly impressed. He was now expecting the fight of his life from the Konoha Shinobi, and knew he would not be disappointed.

(Somewhere in the crowd)

A dark haired Special Jounin licked her lips hungrily, finding herself exited by the display of viciousness from the young Genin.

(Back to action!(1.)


"Come on Hyuuga! Where is your fate now? No speeches of destiny favors me or shouts of you are below me?!" Naruto demanded a response from his battered opposition. Grabbing the once proud Hyuuga's non injured wrist, he proceeded to break each of his fingers in an attempt to get some response. All of it was for nothing sadly, as Neji had been broken, and no longer had any will to live. Naruto slammed the hilt of his blade against Neji's skull. "Get up!" A hard kick met his chest. "Move!" Neji was raised by his throat and slammed into a wall. "Respond!" pushing his sword to the meaty part of Neji's shoulder he forced the blade through his flesh at an agonizingly slow pace. "Fight back!"

Naruto threw Neji on the ground after tearing the sword violently from his flesh. "If you're not going to make this fun, I will just end it then!" Gripping his blade tightly Naruto readied himself to disembowel his opponent. As his sword was in motion it was suddenly halted by a kunai.

Naruto angrily stared into the face of the test proctor. "That is enough Genin Uzumaki!" The proctor hissed into his face. After staring the proctor down for a few moments, the blonde Genin just smirked and walked away.

As he was about to climb the stairs to exit the arena, he addressed the proctor. "You have saved the Hyuuga for now, but that does not stop me from finishing it later. None escape me when I wish them dead, keep that in mind "and with that he exited the arena.


(1.) Yes this is an original power rangers reference. That's just how I roll.

Chapter 3 is officially Finished!!!

Wow you guys are getting a lot of effort out of me! When I started writing i said to myself just around 1000 words a chapter.I have started Two Stories and written 4 chapters in less than 2 days, none of the are under 2000 words! Hell I could probably do at least one more before the nights out.

I hope you guys enjoyed the chapter. I hope my fight scenes weren't too bad for ya guys. Though I did have a lot of fun with Neji Brutalization I felt like Nathan Explosion( Metalacolypse) with how many times I used brutal this chapter. I introduced a bit of lusty Anko, just because I could. And I always thought it would be funny if in Orochimaru's head his thoughts were just a snake hissing. That joke was mostly for me.

Ok I need you guys help again. I need a name for Naruto's sword from the Heart of Darkness and Darkness Sword is really fuckin unoriginal. Leave you suggestions after the beep!

Alright addressing your Reviews!

Kagefighter- No sorry the heart is not from W.I.T.C.H as I have never seen that show. It actually comes from something involving Vampires.(if witch involves vampires this wouldn't be very good so I hope it doesn't) And I threw in some extra Sakura bashing just for you.

Chicken- I threw in a bit of romanticism with Gaara and Naruto for you since I don't believe I will do this pair, as I would have to change part of the story direction in my head. Sorry. But Temari would work well since I have no real set plot for her. Let's see how the people vote. And Gaara is my favorite character also so yay Gaara. And they will have a close family like friendship since im not doing a pairing with them.

ShadowAssassin-I do enjoy a good ruthless fem Kyuubi, so its something to think about. And you wont have to wait long to see what happens if I keep this up!

I was shocked at how many people enjoy Dark Naruto stories as much as I do!
I'll keep up my work as long as you guys keep being amazing, and reviewing so much.

Beep!

With Demented Love

-UT