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The trip through a few galaxies is not fun. We were twisting and turning for what seamed like

hours. Plus we were very tired from the spell. Finally, we landed with a plop on the ground.

What we saw was truly breathtaking. It was a bit like those tv shows about the future. It looked

like New York City except silver. Everything was silver and shining. Even the water and grass

had a silverish tint to it.

"Ok." I said. "Either everyone here is obsessed with silver and even put silver paint in the ocean,

grass, trees, everything, or this is a totally mixed up world. And yes I realize that was a really

long run-on sentence, don't lecture me Tomoyo." "The Book told me about this." Said Tomoyo,

ignoring what I just said. "It said that somehow that's the way this world was created. There is no

such thing as gold, and everything is meant to be silver except the sky."

"Weird." I said. "The Great Powers really have been busy making weird places." We were sitting

in the grass discussing this when we noticed there weren't many other people around here. "I

wonder where everyone is." I said. "Yeah" said Tomoyo. This place should be as busy as our

own New York City.

"What are you doing just sitting there?!" We turned around looking for where that voice was

coming from. "Didn't you hear? There's an emergency! Everyone must evacuate to the safe

underground area now!" We saw a girl our age running up. She had long black hair and ruby red

eyes. She was wearing red robes with the sun and moon to the side of it. It looked very chinese.

a/n can you guess who it is:) I looked at her outfit and thought one thing, out of this world.

"The Giant is attacking!" Tomoyo and I looked at each other in confusion, but decided to follow

the strange girl. We were running through the empty streets with the girl moving at an inhumanly

fast pace. "Hurry up!" She shouted! We sped ahead trying to keep up with her.

Suddenly we heard a loud shriek. An inhuman noise. It sounded kind of like what dinosaurs

sounded like in movies. We looked ahead and what seemed to be a giant silver mechanical snake

was ahead. When I say giant I mean giant. It was about the size of the empire state building.

It was wrapped around a building constricting it. It pulled tighter and tighter until the building

crumbled into bits. Wow. I thought that's one strong giant snake. The girl tightened her knuckles.

"Ok you have done enough damage. Leave now or suffer the consequences." The snake

completely ignored her and went on to another building.

"Ok you asked for it!" She shouted. She pulled out a wand, which shocked us. "You're a

mage?" I asked incredulously. "Yes." She said. "And this giant, overgrown snake has been

bothering us for a few months now. It's no doubt The Betrayer sent it here to cause trouble.

Curse her, and all this time we have been running and hiding but I say we kill it now!"

She said loudly, "Levitate." Then she drew her circle and it was orange in color, the same as her

robes. A red circle meant you were brave, and kind, but stubborn

"Activay!" She shouted. She pointed to a tip of a building the snake had broken just before and

then she pointed to the snake, wait I thought. The levitating spell moves objects very slowly, how

can she expect an object moving 2 miles an hour to ram into the snake and kill it? Then she

answered my question by chanting another spell.

"Hurrey, hurrey this simalier objectie upa! Fasteir, Fasteir, than how this simalier objective is

moviting nowet! Rameir at this Snakiat at 1000 miles per hourier!" She signed her circle and

shouted "activay!" (Hurry this small object up! Faster, Faster, than how this small object is

moving now! Ram at this Snake at 1000 miles per hour!)

I stood a bit shocked. Did she just make up a spell right on the spot? It had to have been, being

so specific with how big it was, how fast she wanted it to go, and talking about the snake. That's

usually a sign of great power thinking so quickly. It's when The Great Powers themselves speak

through you. They need to think up catchy spells though. Maybe she did use this spell before.

But then again why didn't she give it a shorthand name? I'll ask her when things quiet down.

The piece of the building started moving so fast it was a blur and rammed straight at the head of

the snake. Then, the snake fell down from the building. "Yes!" Shouted the girl. She fell on the

ground, exhausted. "Wow that was amazing." I said. "Yeah." Said Tomoyo. "Did you make that

spell up right on the spot?" "Yeah." Said the girl blushing. We stood open mouthed. "Wow I

defiantly couldn't do that." I said. "Me too." Said Tomoyo." Even though the Mage Language is

like my first language I couldn't have found the right words to use so quickly and umm, spell-

like.

All of a sudden the girl's Book and Wand started glowing. It recorded the spell. "Name?" It

asked. "Um…how about speed?" "Recorded." Said the Book. "All right!" Shouted the girl. "I

destroyed the snake and I made a new spell."

We all started congratulating her and I asked, "what's your name?" "Melin." She said. "What are

your names?" We were about to answer when suddenly the snake got u again. It shook its body

and flicked the remaining pieces of the building off of itself. Then it turned around and faced us.

As crazy as it seemed, the silver snake literally looked like it had fire burning in it eyes. "Wow." I

said. "It's either just really mad and going to leave us alone and go away or we're in a lot of

trouble."

The answer turned out to be both. The snake started shooting fire from its eye's (if you can even

call them eyes) and started burning the ground. It was making its way at an alarmingly fast rate

to us. "Ah!" We all shouted. "Run!" I screamed. We were running as fast as we could but the fire

seemed to be coming closer by the second.

"We're not going to make it!" Tomoyo screamed. "Wait." I said. "Melin can you use that speed

spell on us?" I asked. "Maybe we could get enough speed to get away from the snake and use

some kind of attack on it. Like the killing spell." "That would work!" Melin shouted.

Melin took out her wand. "Speed." She shouted. "Me and my friends at 150 miles an hour." We

all had to stop because, as everyone knows, it is impossible to do magic while moving. She

signed her circle, the snake coming faster by the millisecond. "Activay!" She shouted.

All of a sudden we zoomed ahead with lightning speed. "H-h-how do you s-s-stop?" I asked?

"Just shout stop I guess!" Said Melin. We ran ahead and when we thought we were comfortable

ahead of the snake (about 4 miles) we shouted, "Stop!"

"Ok." I said. "As soon as the snake is about 20 feet away from us shoot out your killing spell.

"Kill." We all shouted. Then we signed our circles. Bright lights of pink, purple, and orange

appeared and glowed. "Ok." I said. "Now we just wait."

We didn't have to wait long as the snake slithered toward us, coming dangerously close.

"Activay!" We all shouted in unison. Bright beams of pink, purple and red shot out at the snake,

and once again it fell down. No living thing would have been able to withstand 3 killing spells of

3 mages in unison after 4 miles of traveling. Except, of course, maybe The Betrayer herself.

We started cheering, but once again we cheered too soon. The snake lifted its head and looked

madder than ever, except this time on its stomach the scales were ripped off and wires could be

seen. "It's a machine!" Caitlyn shouted. I was speechless. It was a machine. No living creature

could survive a killing spell unless they are some kind of magical creature, but for anything else,

the beams of light were just brightly colored lights that happened to knock you down for a bit.

"What are we going to do?" Shouted Tomoyo miserably. The snake started burning fire from its

eye's again and started chasing after us.

"I can't use the speed spell again." Said Melin. "All my magic has been drained for the moment."

"What?" I shrieked. "The snake is only about 50 feet away from us!" "Run!" Shouted Tomoyo.

We started running but it was no use. The snake was now only a few yards away from us. Its

eyes became very red and just before the fire came blasting out, a voice was heard. "Fireay!"

(Fire) It said. A blast of red light was shot from a wand and hit the snake. It started burning and

the fire spread to its whole body in just seconds. A loud screeching and shrieking noise sounded

out and almost made me deaf, then, the snake fell to the floor, defeated.

We turned around to where the voice was coming from and saw a tall male teenager wearing the

same type of clothes as Melin. Wow this was a nice start.


I bet you all can guess who he is wink wink don't worry Melin isn't in love with him though. I wouldn't ruin the famous SxS couple! Review please! Anything is fine! It could even at least say "ok, good, or bad" I don't mind. Just get 10 reviews in! I'm itching to put up the next chapter!