I am annoyed right now. I was almost tempted to put this story off for good, but i will not.

A reviewer wrote: Failure of a story. I cant even list how horrible it is. It's like smelling decay, and looking at rotting wounds. You dont even have to know what's wrong to know that Something is wrong.

This is my response.

This story has not been edited, like I wrote at the beginning of my first chapter.

I do not care if someone has a lot of reviews or has better grammar then me. I am on this site because I love reading and writing little stories.

So complain all you want, I do not care, but do not call my stories garbage. I do not insult other people's stories, and I hate when someone, who has never met me, insults my stories just because they don't like it. If you don't like a story, just exit the one you were reading, and move onto a new story.

Now here is the latest chapter.

From youikina


The balance was shortly restored in limo, which was called soul society by the reapers here.
There was a few reapers who have decided that they would not go with the change in command. There are a few more things that

Now standing in front of him is Ichigo. A boy, who had live a very hard. The worse thing is that he was never suppose to exist. Fate really screwed over a lot of worlds. Now he is going to have to check on almost all of his worlds to make sure fate did not do anything too bad. He could only hope that nothing to serious happened. The universe can have a domino effect. If a balance in one world goes completely out of control, then one by one all of the world will be completely obliterated.

Ichigo stood in front of him, giving him a hard look. The former captin, and former hallows gather around him.

"What is your wish," He asked the orange haired boy.

"I want my mother back," he said.

I nod, before the shadows to my right became ichigo's mother. She is smiling at him. He is lucky to know the joys of a mothers love.

"Ichigo, the world of the spirits will not be completely blocked off from you. If you find a stranded soul, you will inform Janis, and she will send a reaper out to claim the soul. You are a brave soul, but from here on out, you will not be able to use your reaper powers until Janis comes to claim you herself. On this day, your mother and you shall return to the world of the living. Everyone will know that your mother was in a coma, and just awoke. You have a good life ahead of you. It id your choice to what you do with it," he said as Ichigo held his mother close, tears nearly escaping the orange haired boy's eyes.

"Thank you," whispered Ichigo's mother, as she held her now sobbing son.

Harry turned to Janis, who is currently giving him a large smile.

"Make sure they get home," he said, before he took a step back. A dark void inclosed around him, before he was.

"Damn it, we missed him," was shouted, causing heads to snap to the side. A very annoyed blond stood next to two red heads, who looked ready to laugh. A smaller black haired boy, and a blond haired girl stepped out from behind them.

"Life said catching him was not going to be easy. The problem is we have no idea where he is going," said the brown haired boy.

"Your looking for master right," asked Janis, giving them a little smirk.

The red head smiled at her.

"We are suppose to catch up with him, but he does not leave a trace when he jumps worlds. We been through three world already. I am never going back to that last planet every again," muttered the red head, shaking his head.

"What was in the last planet," asked Janis, giving the red head a small smile. The blond gave a smirk, before a bucket of water appeared above the red headed boys. The first boy turned into a girl, with his hair in a long ponytail. The second boy had a pair of red ears on his head, and a swishing tail behind him.

Janis could not stop herself, she bursted out laughing.

The two red heads turned to her, before pointing their wands.
Two orange lights hit her, before the boy jumped into a portal that appeared out of no where. The blonds and the dark haired boy following them.

Laughter made her look in a small pond near by. Her hair is now vibrant pink. She is going to murder someone.


Harry stared in shock at the thing in front of him. There is a ghost in front of him. Why on earth is there a ghost in front of him in the mortal world? Something must be terribly wrong.

The main thing he is looking for is his servant, daivd.

"David," he called. No one appeared.

That could only happen if the death god from this world was killed. This is not good at all.

If the balance of this world tilts even a inch more, goodby amityville.


"Where are we now," demanded Draco, glaring at the two boys in front of him.

All around them is nothing but barren land.

"We aren't going to get anywhere standing here," said Fred, smiling at Draco. Draco really wanted to smack the now female Fred. Of this is going to be hilarious. There is not water for miles though. Thank god life let the Malfoy house-elves pack a lot of food for their journey.

They caught a ride from a guy with large birds called chocobos. They rode to the nearest city, a place called Midgar. On the way there, they learned about soilders, turks, and about mako.

"Something about this is very wrong. No human should be that strong. This planet is falling apart on itself. I say we sign up for the cadet program. Luna, can you contact life so we can get the proper paperwork," Draco asked the blond.

Before they started on their journey, they learned a lot of stuff about the balance of the worlds. This planet is not going to last very many years if they very lifeblood is being sucked out of it.

"We could push out magic into the planet. The magic of this planet is weaker then our, it only uses the elements. Our magic can give the planet a little more time while we try to contract Master,' said Luna, giving her bubbly sigh, before looking up at the sky.

Another shocking thing is that Luna 's family has been working for Life for generations. She is a race of humans with extra strong magic. It is her families job to go through the worlds to make sure the balance if kept. She is one of a couple dozen that remain. The shocking thing is that there is never a half of her species. Any child bred from their DNA is a full blooded Cetra, whatever that is.

Luna laughed at Draco, who is currently in a glaring contest with Kitty...George.

Soon they got into Midgar, and were dropped off in the slums. If there was one word to describe this place it would be, it stunk.


I will update soon!

From youikina