College Kids

Chapter three-Mean Shots and Cheap Thoughts

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-Max's view-

Ding…Dong…

"Oh Max he's here!" Squealed Nudge, just then Angel gasped.

"What's wrong angel?" It scares me when Angel randomly gasps.

"Oh nothing Max I was just thinking. " She said it a little too excitedly.

Cory was introduced to everyone except Fang I couldn't find him. Then we left to the concert. Cory was a little to excited, Boys Like Girls was amazing. Then halfway through The Rocket Summer portion of the concert the lead singer announced a guest musician. It was Cory. He dragged me up on stage he pulled a seat up for me and he took a seat at the grand piano. Cory is an amazing musician. I was excited but totally oblivious to what was happening. (The song is Luckiest by Ben folds I shortened it to fit.)

I don't get many things right the first time

In fact I am told that a lot

Now I know all the wrong turns and stumbles and falls

Brought me here

And where was I before the day

That I saw your lovely face?

Now I see it everyday

And I know, that I am

I am, I am



The Luckiest

I love you more than I have ever found a way to say

And I know, that I am

The Luckiest

By the end of the song I was crying, happy tears.

"Max, I do love you more than I can tell you, I will always love you and I want to spend the rest of my life with you." With that he got down on one knee. "Max Ride, will you marry me?" I was speechless I love this brown haired boy so much.

"Yes" I whispered the answer in his ear. He slipped the ring on to my finger, then picked me up and twirled me around kissing me. The crowed was awing and applauding. Then it hit me the concert is televised, that means the flock saw the whole thing wait… Fang saw the whole thing. When Cory kissed me again all those thoughts melted, I made the right choice, or did I?

- Fang's view-
"I CAN'T BELIEVE SHE SAID YES TO THAT WIENER!" I'm in my recording studio, in my room where I can scream as load as I want and nobody can hear me. I walked out to the wrap around balcony and put my power to good use. After disappearing, for about five minutes, they showed up. Wiener opened her door and helped her out, and then he wrapped her in a hug kissing her. The thing that bugs me is she is kissing him back not running away. He whispered something in her ear she started giggling. She kissed him, actually more like made out with him, and then told him she loved him then walked inside the house up to her room.

"Crap!" I would have to pass her room to get to mine. If she sees me then she'll know I was spying. Dang it's getting cold out here; I wish I still had my dang wings!

I decided to scale the balcony. I stopped when I passed her room. She is sitting on her bed at the ring on her finger she had a red rose o the other hand; her favorite flower. She had her fireplace running and she's listening to As Lovers Go by Dashboard Confessionals. She's wearing white pajama pants with a green tank top. She walked over to the book shelves and picked the first Maximum Ride book off the shelf. The book that she first kissed me in we have had a handful of kisses since then every time she ran off. She was sitting down in her reading chair reading it. I shuffled my wait on my arms to be more comfortable. She heard and looked up.

"Crap!" I screamed in my head she slammed her book shut and ran up to me. She is fuming mad she threw her doors open and walked out into the snow.



"Why are you spying on me!?" she practically screamed the question at me. Okay I have to come up with a good come back.

"I was just hanging around." Ha that should push her over the edge.

"Fang you really piss me off you've changed a lot. You're not telling me something and it is really making me hate you! Will you just tell me?!" She's screaming know. I really would like to tell her but she is engaged to the wiener.

"Tell you what?" I will not tell her what she wants to know, never.

"Sometimes I wish you would die or just disappear. You little baby!" She screamed.

"That can be arranged." With that she turned on her heals slammed her doors shut and closed her curtains. I pulled myself up onto the balcony then walked back to my room.

"Fang you freaking idiot you screw everything up!" I yelled when I got into my room. I picked up my guitar and started to play.

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Long chapter woohooo! So I would like to know what you guys think about it and what you think should happen. Do you think Max should stay with Cory and make Fang miserable or should Fang steal her back? What do you think should happen?

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