I realize my entries are pretty short, but I like to cut 'em off while its still good. And I'm using song titles as chapter titles. Like Trust Me, by The Fray. This one's lyrics may be pretty relevant to the story. If all goes as planned, you'll see.

Fang

I knew it. Jeb must've sent them. He was the one going on about Max's "destiny". Shit.

Angel

I couldn't decide if I liked these two. Fang really didn't like them; I could hear what he was thinking. Jeb's sent them. We can't trust them.

There was something different about them, though. I couldn't tell what it was. Literally. I couldn't hear inside their heads. I could see everyone's thoughts so far. But not their's.

Max

"Who told you that I was supposed to save the world?" How did they know? Jeb. He was the only one who had said that I had to save the world. Why did he send these two kids?

Thrill and Ash looked at each other, unresponsive. That surprised look on their faces. They didn't know what to answer. Ha. Now they'd have to admit that Jeb was behind all this and the were not here to help us. They were helping him.

Ash looked straight into my eyes. I was a little surprised at the honesty I seemed to sense in them. "My mother know you. All of you." Her gaze drifted over the whole flock, settling on Nudge for an uncomfortable moment too long. "She sent us." Who was her mother?

"You have to let us help you. I can't tell you more, it will only put all of us in more danger. But you need to trust us. That's the only way you can save the world," she said earnestly, "and yourselves."

I think the plot's a little obvious. But tell me what you think. Or if you don't get what I've been saying so far. Though I don't think I'm THAT bad a writer….