Hi guys! As you may have already guessed, I'm fairly new to editing and stuff on this site, so this is acting as my notes until the next chapter where I'll add a little spacer instead of another chapter! I hope you guys are enjoying this! i thought I would take the situations that already happen in the game and morph them into more appropriate scenes :)
I also apologise if you can't see or hear Shepard or Kaidan saying these things, but I wanted to give Shepard a more unique and more interesting character than in-game Shepard, and make Kaidan a bit more of a laugh as much as I am in love with him!
Chapter 1's use of in medias res was, i felt, appropriate as I have read a few mShenko fanfic's where it's taken too long to get into the middle of the action (and romantic fun of course!)
Chapter length's won't necessarily be consistent, but you won't get 300 word chapters followed by 5,000 word ones haha :)
So yeah, enjoy! And PLEASE feel free to review my work so far! Can't improve the writing and structure without flaws ;)
