Ok thanks for the review I'm going to try doing tha by making it that who talks is not always placed in a paragraph- I'm still new at this

chapter 3: Flashback

Spinelli pov

Gus looked confused "why do you need a gun?" with no answer he just nodded his head.

"Can I have it soon?" I said. He handed a small pistol, I just shock my head. " It's too small" I said.

" OK what kind of gun do you want than? I have an AK47 but its not in your price range, though.". He said with a snappy remark. He still looked like he did when he was a kid but he had two tattoos both of high powered guns on each arm. He also had a scar across his face no one knows where he got it. Than he reached out and grabbed a sub machine gun, and he handed it to me, " be careful ok?" he smiled and was holding his hand out to grab my money.

TK pov

"You should of let her punch me, it was OK she always used to punch me when I annoy her, you dumb shit you could of ruined everything, you want everlasting pain if you do I'll summon the creature again and let him chew you, you know you wont die from it!" I yelled angry, looking at him made me laugh, I stock my hand out to help him up, " I'm sorry, but this is too important to not take seriously."

"Why didn't you just say you knew her?" Niel said as I helped him up.

"Because, I still feel the same way about her since I was delivered to the home." I said while I was thinking back on it.

The first time I saw the place I was just been token from everything I once known, it was huge the grounds was being guarded by fifty armed patrols each had 5 people in it. The grounds was hidden in a deep forest, no light was able to get through it, there was a small house in the center we went in but it was just a small, old log cabin. The people who brought me there open a jar, and pulled a lever to my surprise the floor was going down like an elevator. We started to go down which felt like an hour or so had passed,

"Wh-what are you going to do to me?" I ask nervously. There was no reply, I saw pictures of people shaking the presidents hands, I than saw a carving on one of the wall before a room with a man sitting in it.

" In the times of evil, we rise to cleanse the world of it, in the name of our master we are the..." but before I could read the final words a man in robes walked up to me.

" Hello young brother we welcome you to your new home, I am the leader of this base. I cant use my real name so you can call me what others used to fear me, the Zodiac." said the Zodiac. Who was around 5'10" and he wore a black suit and a yellow hood. I quickly looked in his office

" I heard of that name," I said, "but where" than it came to me 'the Zodiac killer'. I looked at him with amazement but than it turned to fear.

" Before I was in charge of here I was just a pathetic killer, who wanted fame." he said, "but one day I heard a knock on my door and it was the secret service, who wanted me to join this organization, and to save man kind from the kind of evil I once was". He laughed a little before telling the people who brought me here to head away.

" What do you want from me?", I said. Before he answered he showed me a room with a bunch of kids learning to fight, and to kill.

"You have a blood type like those kids in there, we came across it while trying to track down Jack the ripper, who was the leader of this place before I arrived." he said. "We track down killers during their childhood, before they could start their killing spree and invite them to join us. We train them to be assassins and kill for profit." He than took me to the mess hall, "we serve a bunch of different types of food here too."

I had to ask him how they knew how to find killers. But he didn't say anything. He than brought me to an alter.

" This is where we pray to our god, who protects us from the world, from our feelings." he said before holding a tear back. " I'll be training you myself" he said.

Present

I tried to escape a bunch of times but I kept getting caught ever time and I got a different punishment each time too. To let me meet our god I have to let go of my feelings, to stop feeling love for her I have to forget her, its too hard they mustn't know what I'm doing here they will try to turn me away from my new home.