A/N: I decided to alter the story a little so I had to rethink a few things. I also took the advice of some of the reviewers so I am a little more descriptive this time around. I am still new at writing so bare with me as I experiment. Also I believe reviews help me as I come in to my own way. So please Review!

SG-15 Chapter III: The Seeds of Destruction

Location: P2X-227/Hak'tyl

Free Jaffa Occupied Planet

Formerly Moloc Domain

Population: 500 Free Jaffa

270 Tauri

100 Tok'Ra

Affiliation: Modernists/ Hak'tyl

A petite young woman with long blonde hair stood in the center of circle ornamented by Hak'tyl banners. The young woman began performing different excercises with her staff weapon. She was concentrating on her senses. She quickly spun around swinging her staff weapon for a mid-section strike but it was blocked by Neith. Both women smiled. They lowered their weapons and stood in attention. The pair of women gave each other a jaffa salute by placing their right fist on their chest.

"You are becoming a great warrior, Nesa" Neith declared proudly

"My thank mistress," Nesa bowed

Neith stood a head taller than Nesa. Her small frame leads her opponents to underestimate her skills as a warrior. A mistake made by many who challenged her. Nesa wore a light brown leather like a shirt that hugged her figure tightly giving her freedom of movement her left arm was adorned with a long string of beads. Her long blonde hair tied into braids covering her ears. Her beauty often attracted the attention of many would-be suitors Tauri and Jaffa alike; but, what made Nesa stand-out from most of the other young Jaffa was that she had no tattoo on her forehead. She was never bestowed with a mark of the false gods. Like all girls born within the domain of Moluc she was supposed to be sacrifice to fires of the temple. Were it not for the Neith and her sisters of the Hak'tyl she would not know life. Not known of freedom now enjoyed by all free jaffa.

"How goes your study with your Tauri teachers?"

"There lessons are difficult to understand; I often wish to be in training for battle." Nesa explained.

"Do not say such things sister. I understand there ways are new to us but a new day has dawned. The strength of a Jaffa is not tested in the field of battle alone; but, also knowledge and understanding of the universe around us once, denied to us by the false gods," Neith berated

"I understand" Nesa responded.

"I have come to tell you that I will depart soon and you will take my place while I travel with the Tauri vessel to aid them in a mission." Neith explained, "You are to report to the Tauri commander before nightfall this day"

"I will go, the Tauri vessel waits to beam me aboard. Farewell sister"

"Safe journey my sister," Nesa bowed.

"I am ready Colonel" Neith whispered into a Tauri communication device Nesa remembered it was called a talkie walkie

The women gave each other another salute as Neith was whisked away in a bright white light. The beam nearly blinded her. Nesa shouldered her staff weapon gave a smile and proceeded to the Hak'tyl City. The Tauri were different form most humans in the galaxy. She was one of the few jaffa that met them. It was almost ten years ago when her people the Hak'tyl had invited SG-1 to their village to form an alliance with them. Nesa was days away from her first prim'tah ritual; she needed a symbiote when SG-1 offered them this medicine called Tretonin. While many Jaffa refuse to take the drug, she was one of the first to use it. It has cause a little dilemma for her. As a people the Jaffa are a race of warriors, even after years of freedom many traditionalists believe that women are no their equals; that we must be submissive to them. The fact that the Hak'tyl are majority of women leads them to ignore as altogether. The arrogance of the traditionalists is compounded by the fact that we are among the first to use Tretonin which is viewed a weakness. With rumors spreading that they worked with the Tok'ra and the Tauri, the Hak'tyl are now pretty much scorned by most traditionalists. It didn't matter; the great priestess Ishta had save her life from the ritual fires she would die for her cause: equality for all Jaffa. Before she realized it, she had reached the Tauri complex. The facility was bunker made of something called concrete and various other metals. The guards outside the facility let Nesa in through the heavy metal door and closed it behind her inside an Air-man accompanied her to a lift.

IN HYPERSPACE

The Black ship silently sped through hyperspace, like a dark behemoth stalking for its next prey. The ship was as large as a Goauld Mothership with skin as black as night. There was no external lighting of any kind. It was like darkness given form. The main body of the ship was built like a shark with three large hangars for fighters; Two on each side and a third on top of the main body.

The inside of the vessel was just as dark. There was very little lighting that one could barely see in front of their face. If a person could see pass the darkness one could see pairs of Kull warriors stand ominously in the shadows. A woman with long raven dark hair, she had Asian features; but, with deep blue eyes. Nothing else could be seen as it was hidden with a grey cloaked. She was escorted by eight shadows. Four men wearing chain mail and armor tinted in blood. They had Asian features and short dark hair; they carried red metallic rods about a meter in length. The rest were in full Kull Warrior uniform. The group marched purposefully through the halls of the ship headed straight to the Teltak. The doors opened sideways and the party marched in. It was a large room. They waited in the darkness. Suddenly a deafening burst of sound filled the air and two pillars of flames illuminated the room. The walls were in emerald in color engraved with lyphs of different characters. Every member of the party except the woman dropped to their knees. Smoke filled the wall in front of them. Three bright shining emerald orbs floated in front of them.

The woman was the first to speak "My Lord, the Sor'yu's shields performed well. Many Jaffa lie dead. Their screams of pain filled the skies and the fires of their world would burn in your greatness! More would be dead if we had used the ships weapons…"

A distorted voice thundered from the orbs: "You have done well my child! But there is still much to do. Go to your next target a world known as Hak'tyl. Let the Jaffa witches feel the flames of the dragon!"

"Yes, my Emperor! As you command!" the woman said obediently, "the fires of their world would prove your greatness to all who survive."

"NO!" the voice screamed, "LET NONE SURVIVE!"

"By your will!" the woman bowed.

Location: P2X-227/Hak'tyl

Earth Base

Briefing room

The Briefing room was designed similar to the one in the SGC. There were a number of different flags for the SGC, the United States, Airforce, a Totem for the Hak'tyl which Dr. Shaun explained means independence and a Tok'ra, Crest around the room. Anderson, Hailey, Shaun, Lawrence Col. Lorne and Rhey'yah of the Tok'Ra are all in the briefing room. Rhey'yah was standing at the end explaining the progress of the ship.

Hailey was a little bored. The installation of the Asgard plasma beam weapons on the Shol'va had been mundane and she was well aware of Rhey'yah briefing. With Neith off on a mission Rhey' yah took the opportunity to complain about the Jaffa work force and their lack of training in the intricacy of technology; just a little history between the Tok'ra nd the Jaffa. Col. Lorne asked her to keep it to a minimum Essentially, three of the five Asgard plasma canons were ready, hyperspace engines would be ready in a few days but sublight engines were ready and the shields were up to twenty percent power. Rhey'yah wanted to schedule a test of the weapons on a nearby asteroid field to see if the power interface would work. Hailey looked around. The rest of her team members were also unenthusiastic about the report.

An airman approached the door and announced Neith sister has arrived. Hailey looked around Anderson gave a quite sigh as if relieved. Hailey thought Rhey'yah took offense to that but didn't react.

"Come in," Lorned cheerfully welcomed her

Hailed saw a petite young woman with long blonde hair strolled in. She wore light brown leather like a shirt, pants and dark boots. While her clothing covered her body and legs, it hugged her figure tightly giving her freedom of movement. She strolled in and gave a Jaffa salute and bowed.

"I am Nesa of the Hak'tyl it is an honor to meet you," she introduced herself.

She is so young Hailey thought to herself. Hailey noticed both Lawrence and Anderson's jaw seeing the pretty young thing in front of them. Even Col. Anderson was a little taken aback. Nesa didn't flinch. She seem totally oblivious to the attention of the men in the room. Colonel Lorne was the first to recover introduced himself and everyone else.

"SG-15 with Nesa here why don't you take that tour of the Jaffa settlement," Col. Lorne suggested, "Neith wasn't able to do since I put her on the Excalibur."

"I am sorry. We weren't able to finish your report." Anderson commented trying not to sound too sarcastic.

"Well, I could deliver a copy of my report to you later in the day." Rhey'yah replied.

"Oh, look at the time gotta go." Anderson said quickly looking at his watch.

"Lt. Colonel, with your permission I would like to stay here. I want to take a look at some of the Ancient artifacts they found in a dig south of here." Shaun explained.

"I'll stay with the Doc sir!" Lawrence volunteered enthusiastically.

"Okay, meet you back here later." Anderson agreed.

IN SPACE NEAR KAMA

They were still a few thousand miles away but anyone could see great dust clouds covered nearly the entire surface of the planet. Surface fires were visible even from that distance. Five Hatak vessels were on orbit around the planet launching cargo ships; and, a number Al'Kesh flying around them some of them were headed for the surface to rescue survivors.

The X-304 Excalibur dropped out of Hyperspace. Inside the control room, Neith stood beside Col. Smith's chair. Smith signaled Neith and she proceeded to the communication console.

"Take scans with the Asgard sensors all the system see if you can get anything" she quickly

"Yes sir" one of the officers replied

"Tek' Mak Tei Jaffa, I am Neith of the Hak'Tyl, the people of the Tauri have come to assist you." She said proudly.

There was no response. On the screen, the Hatak vessels were moving closer together.

"Did they receive our message?" Col. Smith asked her comms officer.

"Yes sir," the officer replied, "but they aren't responding."

"I want you to keep scanning all frequencies; helm take us in closer, Full sublight" Smith ordered. The view in the screen was slowly zooming in. The ship was moving closer to the planet.

Neith repeated the message just as she finished the Hatak ships opened fire on the Excalibur.

Outside

The Hatak ships broke formation as they were surrounding the lone Earth ship on all sides. Glider squadrons were launching out of them like hornets on the attack. A number of Al'kesh had organized and made a run on the communications tower. Despite the heavy bombardment the Asgard shields were still holding.

Inside

After the initial hits, everyone was moving quickly in their stations. Colonel Smith saw that Neith was just as surprised; her crew quickly recovered from the shock and was performing their duties.

"Shields down to 75%" The Comm. Officer called out

Smith certainly didn't expect the Excalibur's first battle to be with Jaffa but she certainly not going to loose her first time out..

"Okay, people I need full thrust we need to get out of here and now! Ready the Asgard beams! Target their weapons and engines." Smith continued to bark out orders. As small power surges burst around the control room

Location: Dakara

Free Jaffa Capital

Population: 2,800,000,000 Free Jaffa

Large fortified doors ordained with various glyphs in gold etched around edges. Two young Jaffa flank the archway to the main council chambers. The doors were opened with a thunderous sound as Teal'c of Chu'lak entered the council of Primes, the leadership of all free Jaffa. Like all council members Teal'c wore the ceremonial robes. Teal'c looked around it the number of council members were less than fifty; normally the assembly was composed of two hundred-fifty members each representing jaffa factions. So you members manage to come due to sudden call. The number of representatives varies from the size of the faction they represent. Teal'c saw Rak'nor and Ishta approach him.

"Why has this assembly been called so suddenly?" Teal'c puzzled.

"I do not know," Rak'nor replied,

"I have heard rumors of an attack on Kama," Ishta said nervously

"WHO IS RESPONSIBLE FOR THIS?" Teal'c questioned.

"I do not know." Ishta responded, "the Traditionalist silenced the report."

The ancient doors to the assembly hall burst open. A towering man well muscled with auburn hair tied in braids wearing chain mail and armor marched in followed by three older men and a contingent of thirty fully armored Jaffa carrying staff weapons and Zat'nikatels. Teal'c eyed them intently. Teal'c recognized the leader as Kainan leader of Illac Renin. The three older men were council members of the world Kama; all honorable men who believed in freedom but warry of both the Tok'ra and the Tauri. They were among the oldest of the councilors and have fought many battles with the Tok'ra and the Tauri. The Jaffa contingent composed of young warriors from their tattoos they were formerly loyal to Yu, Amaterasu and, Olakun; many of whom now pledge their allegiance to the Illac Renin. Teal'c could sense many of the councilors felt the same way. A few of the Jaffa soldiers surrounded the Teal'c Rak' nor and Ishta raised their weapons at them. All three warriors were on guard. Rak'nor moved quickly and blindsided one of the guard with his left hand grabbing the staff weapon with his right. It would have escalated into a brawl which would ended in a number of deaths but Teal'c put his arm on Rak'nor's shoulder to stop him.

"WHAT IS THE MEANING OF THIS?" Ishta shouted angrily.

"THE FREE JAFFA ARE THREATENED!" Kainan declared, "TWO DAYS AGO THE FREE JAFFA WORLD OF KAMA HAS BEEN ATTACKED BY THE TAURI!

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