haha this is the last of the three thatI wrote late one night, so the 'quality' has hit the shitter, but no matter again same issue with the previous 2, in not getting everything that I wanted in. Yeah and Squalo's kinda lame ...
This is the end (for you my friend)
Anti-flag
A wave of dust preempts the breaking down of the door, splinters of wood near the lock burrowing into the carpet before the door finds the floor as well. A haze of cancerous smoke greets the irate man poised with one leg in the air outside the threshold of the apartment. His characteristic war-cry of 'Vooooiiiii' precedes his entering the place at a breakneck speed, seeking out the inhabitant and ripping it from it's soulless gaze by throwing it into the nearest wall.
"real men fight with weapons" is screamed and met with silence as other silver haired man slides bonelessly down to meet the ground, impersonating a puppet cut from it's strings perfectly.
"Greedy little bitch, is that hole closed yet. Have you found that person you are supposed to be."
light eyes raise to meet Squalo, his mouth moving, mind reeling to find an answer, an excuse, a reason, anything but the only thing that is forthcoming is silence. Afterall do you say to the mentor and self appointed big brother of the one who you betrayed so utterly into the hands of the enemy in a fit of insane jealousy.
"That's what I thought. Just so you know he's alive; crawled back to base two days ago. Everyone knows what happened, yet he's saying nothing incriminating"
Thick plastic boots collide with the bomber's chest, fracturing ribs and earning a whine of pain. The boot is twisted then replaced with an elbow allowing the Varia to get right into his face and whisper:
"betrayer, you are going to pay - he may forgive you but I'm not that kind. So I give you a just punishment-here come your enemies"
ps listen to this song, it's fricken awesome and if you think about Gokudera's jealousy of Yamamoto's natural ability at everything and the whole better right handman thing then you'll get the little nuances that i felt when word vomiting this.
Again hit me with con crit please
