Okay im been watching the season finale of my little pony season five, i kinda expected starlight is from the future or something but while i watching the show, it kinda almost the same as the fanfic but unfortunetly not all of them is same like in the story. Anyway since im manage to finished watching the story, i might use some of the elements from the finale episode, because hey this is alternate storyline but if put some of bit the story elements form the show it might be something good there.

Now sit back and enjoy the story and by the way i wont be online around 4 december because im spending time with my family in christmas but ill be online around 14 december again. If you confuse the story again i suggest reading mlp equestria girls rise of the super predator by Sci-Fiman2XXX its the shared storyline on the same events taking place during and after the storyline.

Griffonstone 1 hour later on...

The sight of griffonstone is horrible, each of the house was burned while the griffon resident are doing their best taking out the fire with water. Bat pony were dispatched to help them as well but suprisingly what odd is that a bag contained what it look like a dead pony iniside it.

Starlight: soo tell me what happen?

Gilda: i was doing my thing in here, then out of nowhere a somesort of red beam shots came out from nowhere destroyed each of the houses here! i never get a glimpse on who the culprit was but i did saw something during that time.

RD: what is it gilda?

Gilda: well during the chaos...i saw an glowing eye, its kinda invisible but its there

Starlight: soo you saying its invisible?

Gilda: i..i think soo

Starlight: hmmm...this is weird

Bat pony 1: miss glimmer i think you might wanted to see this

Starlight: what is it?

Bat pony 2: we...we found the lost scout

RD: you did? great! lead the way

The bat pony guard leads them to an open erea part of the griffonstone, once they in that location, both starlight and RD saw what spooked those bat pony. In those dead tree was a skinned body of a pony hanging upside down while its hind legs were tied up, as the blood dripping on the ground while flies are already starting to appear.

Starlight unable to control her lunch, immediatly goes to nearby bushes to remove the content out of her stomach, seemingly she just her appetite to eat dinner tonight. Once done she goes back to the group while looking at the skinned bodies.

Starlight: what kind of sick monster do this to them? this is beyond horrible!

RD: ill say, this is just sick...ugh i hope AJ and Rarity are okay.

Manehattan

Rarity just woke up, since she fainted at the sight of skinned bodies of pony, the skinned ponies were the missing shining armor guards. Shining armor himself just speechless at the sight of the skinned corpse, while cadence try her best not faint, since she is pregneant.

Rarity: this beyond insane! who would do such a thing at these poor ponies!

Shining Armor: i dont know,but whoever was, its going to pay for its crimes. I never see something like this before, i feel sorry for them, i guess i should tell the familes about this.

Cadence: shiny, i think im going to head back home, i dont wanted to be here any longer.

Shining: alright sweetie lets go.

with shining armor and princess cadence leaves the scene, rarity trying to find more clues, beside those burn mark on the wall and on the road pavement she then found something else on the crater where the skinned corpse was found. She use her magic to levitade the weird orange piece of crystall and examine it.

rarity: now what we have here?

Appleloosa

Applejack seeing a sad sight, the appleloosa was burned down after her last visit in here couple of months ago during fair and also helping a pony name Trouble shoes for his bad luck antic or she should say his funny antics.

But applejack didnt came here for that, while she observing the aftermath she see alot of injured ponies everywhere from mare to stallions and fillies,all of them bandaged up, some with minor injuries and some with heavy injuries.

AJ: how..how this happen?

Braeburn: ah dunno aj, one second ah was monitoring the area and the next momments some red stream of light hit one of the cabin and destroyed it. Ah never see who was the culprit but i do see something and it is invisible.

Aj; what yer all talking about about? what did you see?

Braeburn: well ah saw some outline carefully and it moves!, apprently not just one outline ah just saw but i saw more of them, and one of that thing looked at me and its eyes glowing for few momments before it goes somewhere else.

Aj: and yer didnt follow it?

Braeburn: well our relatives called me for help and we all were mighty busy at that time. After the fire was put out, cousin red gala called us and once we reach the place we saw a crater. It feels like something was just been dug out. Whatever was, its long gone.

Aj: weird, what are we dealing here?

Ponyville around 40 minutes later on...

While they busy doing their stuff, the crusader who got their cutie mark are venturing inside the woods to find something. Unaware the danger lurks around them.

Scootalo: Applebloom, why are we doing here again?

Applebloom: well ah found this weird orange gems in this part of the woods, if i can remember where i last saw it.

Sweetiebelle: well why not follow those roads? maybe we could found it easy?

Applebloom: oh! right hehe i knew that

The crusader decide to use the roads soo applebloom could lead them to the easy shortcut to the place she found it. After a momments of walking, they saw something. A damage and ruined caravan on the middle of the road just laying on there, the momment they saw the symbol of that caravan they know the caravan belongs to who.

Applebloom: hey isnt this belongs to trixie? but where is she?

Scootaloo: i dont know but look at this burn mark, it feels like somepony or something shoot with magical power or something more powerfull than magic.

sweetiebelle: but who would do that?

At that moments three of them heard a clicking noise, each of them slowly turns their head to see whos behind them and saw nothing. But after few seconds something happen. Out of nowhere, two of the alien creature decloaked itself and revealed themself to the crusaders, as the three fillies scream out while two ot the killer yautja captured them.

The Killer Campsite

Trixie felt humiliated, been put into a cage by some weird creature, she was about to arrived to ponyville couple of hours ago when this thing shows up out of nowhere and destroyed her caravan, not just that but also kidnapped her as well. This creature locked her up in a cage, as she observe the area. While she was observing, a cage suddenly opens up and unload three little fillies, who she presume the creature somehow caught them.

Trixie: hey i know you, arent you those twilight friend sister?

Applebloom: well yeah trixie.

Trixie: great, another victim and trixie herself unable to escape for now.

After a breif moments, one of the creature who she presume as a leader with a left shoulder pads that she assume as a bone head of unknown creature who seems like observing her before it leaves them. Trixie sigh in relief but she have to think herself on how to escape first.

Next Chappter comming!