Two girls fall down into Disney, and find themselves in dreamland- But like all dreams they have to come crashing down. Disney needs a new leader, and Sierra seems to fit just right, yet she has to fight a Dragon! But what will happen to her sister Kiana?
Okay, I'd like to thank you all on your awesomesauce reviews!!! Thanks! Thank you!!! :D I'm so glad you all like it!! And yes, she does make it better being her sister then her friend, now doesn't she? And I don't really know what I'll do with Kiana.
And I'm sorry for the BIG WORDS- I'm on a dictionary vibe XD don't worry, I put definitions at the bottom
REVISED VERSION
Falling Down To Disney
Chapter 3; Golden Castle
"Chessur, are you going to answer any of my questions?" Sierra asked, just realizing that he hadn't answered any of her questions about Underland. She raced up to catch the flying feline, as they were still travelling to Disney.
"Hmm, probably not." Chessur said his grin widening- If that was possible.
Sierra mocked a frown, but it didn't stay on long. She turned her head over, and noticed that Kiana was lagging behind; this time a frown did stay on her face, "Hurry up Kiana! You don't want to be late! Nivens always has a problem with time, doesn't he?" Sierra addressed her question to Chessur, smiling once more. He purred, but didn't say anything, "I'll take that as a yes." Sierra said her excitement over riding her again. She hopped while she walked, and then started dancing madly, "Oh won't it be wonderful if the Hatter teaches me to Flutterwaken?"
Chessur chuckled and just barely nodded his head.
"But I doubt I will be as good as they say he is." Sierra continued, talking because she was so excited, "I heard he was a master, and I would love to see it! How greatly awesomesauce it will be to see him dance!" Sierra smiled, just by thinking about it, she danced about again, smiling and laughing all the while. In a half-attempt effort, Sierra lightly grabbed Chessur to dance with her, but he disappeared before she could touch him.
Kiana scowled at Sierra, and how happy she was all the time- and how happy this world was- she hated this world! Absolutely HATED IT! Because- well, because… Sierra is just so much more accepted then she! Why should the loser turn out to be the winner!? Kiana was ALWAYS the winner! No matter what- in whatever Sierra excelled at before, Kiana made SURE she didn't any longer. She was the eldest; she got to be the greatest, That's how it goes! Kiana thought furiously Oh dear, how I hate Sierra right now. I should have just order that brainless twit inside the house- like my instincts were telling my too!!
"Chessur, how many portals are there?" Sierra asked. Kiana scowled at her voice, So innocent and angelic! But why, oh why, is she more accepted then me? It's not FAIR!!! I'm so much more beautiful! IT'S JUST NOT FAIR!! Thank god I am older- Eldest have more power… I like power. Kiana smiled, and she had a dark gleam in her eyes. Having Sierra know more about this pathetic little world was driving her crazy! But Kiana just found this world a wretched over-grown garden, that didn't even bother to be thought about- But still the thoughts of Sierra having more power were trickling in her head like a fountain.
"Do I get to see Mickey?" Kiana heard Sierra ask, in her annoying innocent voice. It grated Kiana's ears. Stupid girl- Why did she defy me? Who does she think she is? She can't keep this up forever! Oh when we get home she will wish she was never born!!!
"King Mickey?" Chessur questioned, appearing once again, "Of course, he's the first person you have to see. You can't get through to go anywhere else without his consent, and you will have to go through an evaluation."
"Does it hurt?" Kiana asked, not wanting to get near anything that would hurt her. It was lucky enough that Sierra had broken that ceiling for her… Ugg… she LANDED on her! Oh, how gross. Kiana shuddered mentally at the thought.
Chessur glanced at her, and Kiana could just see part of his smile falling. What's his problem? Kiana snarled inside herself. How dare he give Sierra much more attention then me! Why does Sierra have to be liked?! Oh, I should just demand we go home and that will be that! Sierra WILL OBEY!!
"No, of course not." Chessur answered mechanically. Kiana glared at the flying cat, and noticed that Sierra had walked ahead. She was fluttering in and out of the flowers, bugs of all kinds stopping their routine to have a chat with her. She smiled kindly at them, and answered their questions, and asked questions of her own. The bugs always left with a smile on their faces, and a warm glint in their eye. It made Kiana sick. Kiana frowned at the bugs, and walked stiffly away from them- She glared at Sierra, but Sierra just ignored her and walked off. Kiana glowered at her back, "You can't get away with defying me forever!" Kiana whispered darkly to herself.
Chessur lagged behind for a few moments, before vanishing and reappearing beside Sierra. Sierra gasped, when Chessur appeared right in front of her, but laughed and smile. She swatted a hand at him for startling her and asked where they were.
"Not far, not far." Chessur replied, coyly, floating a head- With only a head and purple mist trailing behind him, "Hurry hurry." he purred, floating farther away from Sierra- and WAY far away from Kiana.
Sierra nodded her head, and then looked to the path that they were walking on. Sierra stopped in her tracks as she saw what was in front of them. It was a huge Golden Arch Way. It spread all the way across the path, with vines swirling all over it. The sun hit it, in certain spots and it glowed a golden colour. The flowers seemed to be bowing down to this magnificent piece of architecture. Sierra ogled at this beautiful site, before skipping along and putting a hand on it, "Hurry Kiana! We must see King Mickey soon!" Sierra said, dismaying that her sister walks so slow. A thought popped into her head that she should just walk on without her- But Sierra knew what would happen once they got home- it certainly wouldn't be a flowery hug.
"Yes, whatever." Kiana said, not in the least trying to hurry herself up. She just wanted to go home- forget this whole experience, and forget about Sierra. She never wants to see that little piece of nothing anymore, and all her talk of Disney will never have to reach her ears AGAIN. Kiana suddenly realized that Sierra had order her around. Kiana growled loudly.
Sierra frowned darkly at Kiana for a moment, and turned to Chessur. She opened her mouth, and just realized that she was going to tell Chessur all about her life with Kiana. Sierra comprehended that this would sound very contemptuous of her "Um, Chessur is Minnie Mickey's Queen?"
"Yes, yes she is. A very kind Queen- like Mirana of Marmoreal."
Sierra smiled, completely relieved "That's good."
Chessur gave her a kind look- one that she hadn't even seen him give Alice in the movie- before his head disappeared. Only his smile remained, floating about in purple mist, "Alas, dear girl, I must go- You find Mickey's Castle on the other side of the Arch Way- you can not see it because the Arch is a portal- into the holder of all the portals. People will help you in Disney, don't worry."
Sierra nodded her head enthusiastically, and then Chessur's smile started to disappear into the purple mist that surrounded it.
"Good-bye," Chessur whispered, before his smile completely disappeared into the mist.
"Good-bye," Sierra whispered back, just as Kiana reached her. Sierra stared at the place he had just been, for a few moments, before finally turning towards Kiana.
"Uh, finally!" Kiana said, as she noticed that Chessur had vanished, "Finally that cat is gone! Let's go home!"
Sierra's brows crinkled together, "What do you mean? I don't want to go home!"
"Do I HAVE to spell it out?" Kiana said, ignoring Sierra's exclamation as well as rolling her eyes, "He was ANNOYING! UGG All that disappearing! Who does he think he is?!?!"
Sierra pursed her lips together, and glared at Kiana. This is the last straw! I don't care if she will beat me up the thousand times! She DOES NOT make fun of Chessur! Or anyone else for that matter!
"Okay!" Sierra exclaimed, glaring at Kiana darkly, and stepping determinedly up to her- her, eyes a blazed, "You can tease me - but you DO NOT tease my friends! Alright? I heard you tease your friends, and I didn't- couldn't- do a THING about it! But you CAN NOT, absolutely CAN NOT tease my friends! Chessur is especially nice and KIND! He helped you when you needed it! If he had not helped us when he did, imagine ALL THE HORRIBLE things that could have happened to you! So you better be nice to him! I mean it!" Her voice shook with anger and she glared defiantly at her sister, daring her to even lay a finger on her.
Kiana stared in shock at Sierra. She has NEVER yelled at me! NEVER! What's this all about? Who does SHE THINK she is?!?! Yelling at me like this! What is this? Some type of GAME?!?! Fine, you know what?! I'm gone- good-bye! She can DIE FOR ALL I CARE!!!
Kiana glared down at Sierra. Sierra backed up a bit, Kiana was taller then her, after all, and most defiantly stronger.
"You know WHAT Sierra?" Kiana gritted through her teeth, "I don't want to go ANYWHERE with you ANYMORE!! Do you think you can just say that to me, and GET AWAY WITH IT? Huh? Do you? Well you ARE WRONG!! I am- going to go with you, to this stupid Mickey house- then FIND A WAY HOME!! Yes, that is what I AM GOING TO DO!! I don't care about you, not now, not ever, alright? Let's go so I can leave!"
Sierra stared at Kiana for a while, until Kiana sneered at her and walked off. After Kiana left, Sierra smiled a little, Okay, I know this MUST sound selfish- but I feel REALLY REALLY glad that I did that! Finally I put her in her place! She can't boss me around ANY MORE! But- what will happen when I get back home? Will she call her 'friends?'
Sierra fretting over her shouting-match with Kiana- What will she do when they get home? Sierra really didn't want to have another 'chat' with her 'friends'. But Sierra knew that she wouldn't have taken her words back, not now, not ever. Kiana said so many mean things- as much as she did mean things. She could talk down her friends, she could talk down Sierra herself, but she could NOT talk her family, and Disney was feeling more like family to her now. More then Kiana ever was, anyway.
But those thoughts stopped suddenly as she passed through the Golden Arch. Great sensations filled inside her body, like she was flying miles away, but not even moving an inch. She felt completely tired, yet very energetic at the same time. It truly was an anomalous feeling.
Bright light flashed in Sierra's eyes, and Sierra blinked rapidly to clear her eyes. When Sierra's vision focused she gasped out loud. Standing before her was the most beautiful, most wonderful… Most breathtakingly magnificent piece of architecture she had ever seen. Even the Archway shone a pale light against this golden masterpiece.
It was taller then even the trees in the great forest Sierra had left behind, and by far wider then the base of a mountain. The Castle seemed to be made of pure gold, as it glinted and glistened in the bright shining sun. Four huge towers, that had a dark gold tinted at the top half of them, proudly held flags of the well know Disney symbol. Designs that Sierra could barely comprehend swooped down and around the walls of the Castle in dark dark gold seeming to move about as you walked toward them. Dark ebony paths lead up to a great Mahogany door, with solid gold handles. Flowers of many shapes and sizes were spread about the grounds, in patches and places that Sierra was sure they would look organised if you saw them up above. Lots of Dogs, which had white servant shirts edged with gold milled about- on two feet, with their paws in the air- and Sierra, guessed they were the servants to King Mickey. They all had a smile on their face, and some even seemed to be humming a tune- so Sierra guessed that they were happy with their jobs.
"Oh my gosh!" Sierra exclaimed, rushing past Kiana, and marvelled at the sight before her. Kiana glowered at her, and brushed the invisible dust off her, as Sierra exclaimed again, "Oh my gosh! This is just too beautiful!" Sierra covered her mouth with her hand, and tears sprang to her eyes.
"Glad you think so ma'dam," A voice said. Sierra turned her head over, and noticed one of the Dog-servants smiling kind-heartedly at her, "But I think I'm standing near something just as beautiful." He winked at her.
Sierra blushed at the implied words and shook her head, "Oh no, sir, I could never be as beautiful as what stands before me."
Kiana, having heard this, glared at Sierra for a quick second before turning in on the Dog-servant. She coughed loudly, and the Dog-servant turned toward her with a questioning brow, "And what about me?!" She exclaimed, malice in her voice.
The Dog-servant looked her over, raising another brow in question, as he stared at her for a few seconds before answering, "I don't see it, not like she does," he gestured to Sierra, his voice as dull and emotionless as his face seemed at the moment, and walked away.
"What!?!?" Kiana screeched, undignified, "How DARE he imply I am not BEAUTIFUL! Certainly more so then Sierra!" Sierra opened her mouth in shock at her statement, and then glared menacingly at Kiana- but Kiana didn't notice, "MY FRIENDS ALL SAY I AM TOO BEAUTIFUL!!! YOU INSOLENT DOG!!" Kiana huffed at the end of her sentence, and crossed her arms, looking at Sierra expectantly.
Sierra just stared at Kiana, shock clear on her face- but Kiana's horrid remark about the dog-servant, and then confusion as Kiana kept looking at her with an expectant face.
"Well?" Kiana asked, her voice mixing with scorn and contempt, "Do something about this!"
Sierra momentarily flared at this, but calm down quickly. She didn't want to make the beating she was sure to get when they get home any worse they it would be, Wow getting anger at my sister… How droll. Kiana glared at her, when Sierra didn't immediately say nor do anything, "Stop looking at me like that!" Kiana screamed, her face getting red.
Sierra closed her eyes for a brief moment, trying to calm the emerging anger, before opening them again. Sierra startled at the sight of her sister, and stepped back, horror dawning on her face.
Kiana looked UGLY! Her face had turned green and scaly, as well as the rest of her body. Hair grew in places that she had never had hair growing that much before, and she had great big horns sticking out of her head. Sharp teeth stuck out of her pouting lips, and her fingernails were completely black with who-knows-what!
"Ummm…" Sierra stuttered, rubbing her eyes vigorously. After she opened them again, she noted that Kiana had turned back to her normal self- Well normal Disney-self, "What do you want me to do?" She said, glancing at Kiana with repulsion written on her face.
"UGG!" Kiana exclaimed, throwing up her hands in exasperation "Never mind!" Kiana stomped off, her shoulders tense and her footsteps choppy from her anger.
Sierra stared after her, before shaking herself off and running up to catch her. The scary thought of Kiana as that evil green monster still hung in the back of her mind, as she reached to step side-by-side with her sister. Through some eerie way, it gave Sierra some satisfaction that her sister wasn't as wonderful as she always said she was, and that maybe somebody from a higher world was finally giving her what she deserved. It was a hope that Sierra clung close to her chest.
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Definitions
Contemptuous; Feeling, expressing, or demonstrating an utter lack of respect for somebody or something.
Anomalous; unusual- strange and difficult to identify
Malice; the desire to cause harm or pain to somebody
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