Fears

A Danny Phantom Fanfiction ......................................................................................................................................................... By Jaylien-Skyler

Dedicated to Aquamarine Moonlight ................................................................................................................ Chapter Two: Consuming Darkness


Danny gasped and panted, desperately trying to contain the power that was ready to force itself out. He didn't understand it. Sure, he was stressed, but not anymore than he normally was.

'Okay, Fenton… Get a grip…' He thought. He took a few unsteady breaths and tried to relax. He opened his eyes; his vision was still blurry and he definitely wouldn't be able to pay attention but, a least he didn't feel like he was going to explode.

"Mr. Fenton," Lancer's voice rang out. "What gives you the permission to fall asleep in my class?"

Danny massaged his head before spluttering incoherent nonsense. He shook his head trying to clear it and come up with a valid excuse. Sadly, it came out more a question than an answer. "I…. have a… head ache…?"

"In the name of Suicidal Attempts! Mr. Fenton-Danny- what happed to you?"

He remained silent simmering in his dark thoughts. 'Nothing, Mr. Lancer. It's just my ghost powers are all wonky or something. It's not like I have a normal life.' However Danny muttered something about hitting his head.

"You had better get to the nurse and before that gets any worse!"

'What's he talking about?' he thought as he left the classroom. He stopped dead when his ghost sense called him for duty.

He looked quickly around the hall and ducked into a bathroom. He paused before running to a stall to transform and looked in the mirror.

His mouth fell open when he was his distorted face in the mirror. He knew the headache excuse wouldn't fly. Danny knew something was wrong.


Apart from the strange start to the day Jazz found the rest of the morning was perfectly normal. Normal, at least, till lunch time at least, when a strange hippo mouse ghost decided to pay the school cafeteria a visit.

She was in line to get some green slop that was called "Seaweed Tuna Surprise" and had just grabbed a tray when the ghost landed in the room.

"Sometimes I wish we could move to Alaska," she sighed as the ghost grew a scorpion tail and tried to kill Nathan. She watched helplessly as the student was thrown at yellowish tables and cold metal chairs.

"Stop it, Ghost!" a voice rang out. Jazz turned around then dropped her tray. The voice didn't belong to Danny Phantom, her little brother and hero of Amity Park.

"Sam?!" She partly screamed, half gasped. Her classmates stared as she ran over to the younger girl and asker her something in a quieter voice. "Where's Danny?"


Danny stared in the mirror unable to move or think. "Th-that can not be me." He whispered trying unsuccessfully to calm himself.

Every bit of exposed skin his was white. White… He now had black eye that stung and scratches that still oozed scarlet blood. He had bruises galore; purple, blue, black and red stood out against his pale face and arms in stark contrast with the colorless skin around them. He was unable to control himself, he began to shake.

Darkness started pushing on the side of his vision and questions began attacking his mind. Danny's body began to shut down even he tried to stay awake.

'No, no, no… NO!' He thought as never ending blackness stared pouring in. He leaned back on the cool, light blue tiled wall of the bathroom, shaking his head, trying to rid it of the horrible pictures flooding into his mind. Danny slid down the wall and onto the hard floor he rocked back and forth gasping trying to stay awake but, as nothingness began to consume the boy, he knew it was too late.


Was anyone OOC?
Was it too drawn out?
Too dramatic?
Lame?
Does the chapter shortness/length fit the story/chapter/author?
Does it flow freely?
Is it easy too read?
Is anything out of place/missing/unnecessary/ect.?

Thanks to Tempestas Umbra, Donteatacowman, Evil Long Penname Having Individual End, Aquamarine Moonlight, Anthiena, buffy6490 and any one who has read, reivewed, add the story(or me) to favorites/allerts, or didn't say it stank.

A special thanks to Aquamarine Moonlight for beta reading this chapter.

Thanks for reading,
~Jay

Disclamer: I own nothing but the plot.